Date: 12/20/08 10:57 am Title: Chapter 12
Tom's mom should be thrown in prison! That psycho shouldn't see the light of day. And co-writing would be cool, I think! Never did it, but it's all depends on what direction you want to take it.
Author's Response: I have a co-author and we are doing seperate stories, but we are going to add in a few things if necessary and beta each other so it would mostly be ourselves with some co-writing involved :) We could co-author a story if you want to...the next story won't come until a little later unless I decide to get the first chapter started today...
Date: 12/20/08 09:49 am Title: Chapter 12
O_O wow
that's a lot of drama xD
poor tom xD
Author's Response: Ya it is lol, I only have about...well i'm thinking about either 1 or 2....maybe 3 or 4 chapters left in this story....I don't know how to end it....but the way I'm thinking right now NO ONE will like the ending cuz they will be sad :(
Date: 12/20/08 07:53 am Title: Chapter 12
omgfg..this was so saaaad! -SadFace- You're such a talented writer
Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm sorry! Don't be sad! *gives hug*
Date: 12/20/08 06:47 am Title: Chapter 12
I love the story very mutch! You are the best!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 12/20/08 05:12 am Title: Chapter 12
i really like this story, and it would be fun to co-write with you. havent done it before, but im good at wingin' it *chuckles*
now i really wasn't expecting tomi-boy to have a past like that. love the chapter.
Author's Response: I like Shameless Seductions ^^ I'm reading that one and Shameless Seduction; Third Base :D. I was thinking if we end up co-writing, would you be interested in doing something like; you write one chapter, I write the next and making each chapter at least a thousand words? We could think of a really good plot that would keep a lot of people reading!
Author's Response: I like Shameless Seductions ^^ I'm reading that one and Shameless Seduction; Third Base :D. I was thinking if we end up co-writing, would you be interested in doing something like; you write one chapter, I write the next and making each chapter at least a thousand words? We could think of a really good plot that would keep a lot of people reading!
Date: 12/17/08 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 11
So Tom's mom use to rape him? That's sad. ;_; I can see why he would take off like that.
Author's Response: Sort of, he was the same way, he didn't know what was happening.
Date: 12/17/08 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
one word: More :D
Author's Response: Lol more will come my reader! *bows*
Date: 12/17/08 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
Tom is so wrong! I knew he had some alternative motive!
Author's Response: Of course hehe :)
Date: 12/17/08 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 8
Bill could die?! x_x That is so not good. And Tom has a lot of explaining to do!
Author's Response: Lol ya he might die Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/17/08 02:16 am Title: Chapter 7
Tom just had to fuck it up LOL!
Author's Response: yes he did lol
Date: 12/17/08 01:59 am Title: Chapter 6
I love the way Bill just acts so flippin happy LOL! A great contrast to Tom! Hope Tom doesn't take advantage of Bill...okay, I lied. I want Tom to take advantage of Bill LOL!
Author's Response:
Lol
.....ya i'm doing some LATE responding :)
Date: 12/17/08 01:47 am Title: Chapter 5
Bill is a horny little boy LOL! And Tom isn't even trying to resist! Well, I don't care cuz I love them gettin all lustful towards each other! XDDD
Author's Response: Lol ya Bill can get pretty horny ^^
Date: 12/17/08 01:19 am Title: Chapter 3
That was the best first attempt I've ever seen! Hawt lyke fire!
Author's Response: You certainly have a lot of reviews ^^ Thanks
Date: 12/17/08 12:26 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it! This looks like it's gonna get good!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/16/08 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ooooohhhh, shit.
*cuddles Bill*
Author's Response: Lol *tries to get Bill back, but falls* damnit oh well have fun w/ Bill!
Date: 12/16/08 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
O_O that was weird, cos Bill look´s like a child :S, I know He isn´t but...:X for one moment I felt angry with Tom :$... i REALLY WANNA know what's gonna happen between Bill and Tom xD
Author's Response: I have the ending of the story figured out......but everyone will hate me lol the next chapter will just be a flashback of Tom and his mom.
Date: 12/16/08 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please update soon..plz plz plz..u have no idea how much i look for this story..and it takes 4ever for u 2 update..plz update soon.......
Author's Response: I'll start on the next chapter today I don't know if i'll have it up today, but I'll definitely start it!
Date: 12/16/08 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
omg major tear! i wonder wat his mom did to him...?
Author's Response: Haha, your the only one so far who has sent a review about his mom! The next chapter is going to be a flashback about his mom I just have to figure out how to do it.
Date: 12/16/08 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
LE EFFIN GASP
Author's Response:
Sorry for the lateish response :)
Thanks for the review hope you liked the rest of the story!
Date: 12/16/08 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 11
omg, this was so good. I was so caught up in the moment i forgot about time. Shit I have school tomorrow -.- I'm gonna be so tierd... But it was worth it, cuz you and ur fic rock! When will there be more? :3
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I do that a lot too, read stories late when I have school. Thanks for reading and reviewing!