Date: 06/28/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
This was a good chapter I love how Bill talks it is sooo cute and I like how Tom is being so nice and giving him lunch money, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for your revie! I'm glad you like it :)
Date: 06/28/08 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Not bad
But since when do guys have clits? @_@
Author's Response: I didn't know what to call it :( what's it called?
Date: 06/28/08 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
i like this story its different- good job!
Author's Response: Thanks, I like trying to be different, cuz a lot of other story plots get too over used
Date: 06/28/08 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
aaaw! that is so cute!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/28/08 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well I have to admit this is cute.
Tom was pretty brazen just jerking Bill off like that O-o LOL.
But yeah, it's cute. I will definately follow it further. X
Author's Response: Thanks, yeah I wanted to make up for have a bad second chapter ending and for it being kinda short thank you for the review glad you liked it :)
Date: 06/28/08 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Can you tell me how old is Tom?
fuck yeah, i'm in love with this story.. can't wait to see update... Bibi such a cutie.. i want them to kiss... adorable
Author's Response: They will :) hehe eveeeeeeeeeentually! Tom is 17, I didn't want them to be the same age like they are now and Bill being 16 only one year younger than Tom seemed weird to write and I always pictured Bill as 15 in this story...so yeah :)
Date: 06/23/08 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
I awwed out loud at the thought of Bill hiding under the chair, haha. More???
:D
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought of that randomly I just thought it would be something that would bore people actually lol i'm glad you like it though :) I'll write more tomorrow and usually the day I write it's posted, so there is a possible chance it will be up tomorrow :P
Date: 06/23/08 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
i oughta steal one of my brothers
water guns and shoot you with it for making this chapter too short!
BUT since i really like your story i wouldnt do that :D
gosh i love bills character soo much too. ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah I meant to make it longer, but my brother moved out today so we spent the whole day packing his stuff and helping him move out :( but I will definitly start writing another chapter tomorrow and it will be longer! :)
Date: 06/23/08 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is cute and I can't wait to see where it will go. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing i'm really glad you like it :)
Date: 06/23/08 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
hey I like the idea, its very interesting!! and bill is very cute!! continueee!!!!! ...plese? n.n
Author's Response: Thank you :) I will don't worry :) yeah, I had this idea in my head for a while, but I finally got it in story form!
Date: 06/23/08 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Bill is soo sweet! You should definitely continue!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I should have the 2nd chapter up sometime today :)
Date: 06/22/08 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG, how old is Bill?
Author's Response: 15, but he's a slow student and acts like he is 5 :)
Date: 06/22/08 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my....more soon? its great! ^^
Author's Response: Thank you :) oh yeah and I should have the 2nd chapter to Revenge is Sweet up by tonight :)
Date: 06/22/08 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
yes yes, please continue?
^_^
Author's Response: Thank you :) I might have the 2nd chapter up tomorrow :)
Date: 06/22/08 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
i like it, and would love to see more. the only thing is that the sentences are very choppy, they need to flow better. other then that i think it will be a great story and would love to see what happens at the school
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'll try to fix that when I can. I'm sorry about that, I was working on the 2nd chapter of another story so I could have that up today. Thank you for the review :)
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'll try to fix that when I can. I'm sorry about that, I was working on the 2nd chapter of another story so I could have that up today. Thank you for the review :)