Date: 06/23/08 04:26 am Title: Beaten
You know what? At first I was very intimidated when I caught sight of this story because I originally thought it'd be some goofy, sloppy, uninformed take on the Pagan religion--maybe something that'd throw in some Christian highlights that would disturb the realism.
But as soon as I read the first paragraph, I INSTANTLY knew this sensitive subject was going to be handeled with the utmost care and respect. :) I applaud you for what you have done so far. You're a strong, intelligent writer, and you sincerely know what you're doing. I look forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for such a nice review! I too hate reading stories about witchcraft when the author is A) Not a practicing witch, B) Has no clue about realist witchcraft and C) Doing it for attention. I just hope no one gets offended! xD
Author's Response: Thank you for such a nice review! I too hate reading stories about witchcraft when the author is A) Not a practicing witch, B) Has no clue about realist witchcraft and C) Doing it for attention. I just hope no one gets offended! xD
Date: 06/23/08 03:59 am Title: Beaten
OMG!!! GO... ON!!!!
Author's Response: I will! :D
Date: 06/23/08 03:45 am Title: Beaten
"but in his dream she had a pair of tits on her that any other chick would die for."
I like to see what Tom will say when he realizes that Bill doesn't have any :-p
0_o I hate that piece of shit that calles himself a father all ready.
And I can't believe what these women said about it. That they didn't do anything to help Bill. Nobody diserves that.
I want to know more of this so update soon please :D
Oooh and I would love some gummibears to :-p
Author's Response: -gives gummibears- Thanks for the review! ^^
Date: 06/23/08 01:31 am Title: Beaten
ooo - I want gummibears! lol ^_^
This is starting out so awesome-ly [wow, I definatly just made up a word... I need sleep xP]
This is really good.. and SO interesting... xD
I don't really know what else to say - I like it a lot and I can't wait to read more ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! -gives gummibears- ^^
Date: 06/23/08 01:24 am Title: Beaten
i'm a wiccian and i hold some of the old pagan beliefs so no you not the only paganistic person on here.
Author's Response: Glad to not be alone. :3
Date: 06/22/08 04:04 pm Title: Home
nice.very nice.reminds me a little of the salem witch trials with a german twist minus the major procecution.either way, it deals with the occult and i love all things occult.write more soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I wasn't sure how this would be accepted, but it seems to be going okay for now. ^^
Date: 06/22/08 02:00 pm Title: Home
Please continue xD
Wanna know why Bill is an outcast. There has got to be something else than the occult. Unless the people are crazy.
And Tom thought he was a girl. Well, I'm always interested in reading Tom's reaction to that!
Author's Response: I shall continue! Further chapters will explain why Bill is an outcast due to his religion. I won't spoil it, though!
Date: 06/22/08 09:30 am Title: Home
I love the idea, and the plot seems interesting, please continue!^^ I won't to know what happens next!:D
Author's Response: Thanks! I wasn't sure how people would react. :3
Date: 06/22/08 08:22 am Title: Home
I love this so far!^^ Please continue, I can't wait to read more.:D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update tonight. :D
Date: 06/22/08 05:01 am Title: Home
aww ^_^
this was great =D
i really loved it and can't wait for more^_^
*sniggers*
tom thought bill was a girl *gigglefit* and that he had a nice ass x) (can't argue with that (A))
update soon? (A)
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^ I will update tonight.rnrn-points down- And Yeka, sorry the response didn't show up. Thanks for your review! -gives gummibears-
Date: 06/22/08 04:46 am Title: Home
Wow, this sounds REALLY interesting! I hope you will continue it!
Author's Response: