Date: 09/25/08 02:29 am Title: Chapter 10-Be careful what you wish for
Love it I hope you update it soon.
Date: 09/16/08 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 9-This is Fact Not Fiction
LOVE THE CHAPTER!!! IT was awesome!!! Totally sweet!! Can't wait for the next one! please try to get it up soon!
Author's Response: I SHALLL I SHALL DEAR FRANTIC READER rndoo not forgett the storeh nowww
Date: 09/16/08 12:29 am Title: Chapter 9-This is Fact Not Fiction
NOOOOOOOOOO!!
Damn and I was really into this story!!!!!!!!
Your a great writer, and I'm especially happy cuz my first name is angelica hehehehe
Get out the next chapter ASAP
!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Angelica you saaayyy WELLL WUT LUCKITY LUCK WE'VE GOT HERE!!rnrnAY AY CAP'N NEXT CHAP IN ABOUTTT.... five minsss if im luckyy
Date: 09/15/08 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 9-This is Fact Not Fiction
OMG she's pregn. with Tomi's child:-o!! MOre please!
Author's Response: omfg IS SHE?!?!!?
Date: 09/14/08 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 9-This is Fact Not Fiction
omg two chapters!! i'm at a loss for words right now!...great chapters..update soon! :)
Author's Response: BELAAAVEED JUMBIE21rnrnof COURSE THERES TOO CHAPTERS THILLLYrni've only had you waitinng FOREVAAAAAAR
Date: 09/14/08 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 9-This is Fact Not Fiction
AH! dont leave me hanging!
Author's Response: aagh....rnI'll go geta rope hold on
Date: 09/14/08 06:42 am Title: Chapter 9-This is Fact Not Fiction
Oh man! Now she has to dump Gavin, what a prick!
Author's Response: he's a realll icky dick aint he
Date: 09/14/08 04:39 am Title: Chapter 9-This is Fact Not Fiction
i lloooooooved it!!!!!!
please update soon!!!i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!
=D
Author's Response: oh mah gawww i can't wait eitherr
Date: 09/14/08 03:36 am Title: Chapter 9-This is Fact Not Fiction
Loved it I hope you update it soon. I'm dying to know what happens next.
Author's Response: Well deary shove a heart monter on yahh cuzzz we'lll need u alive for the next chapter
Date: 09/14/08 01:53 am Title: Chapter 9-This is Fact Not Fiction
yay right more plz
Author's Response: IM SOOOO ONN IT
Date: 09/14/08 12:18 am Title: Chapter 8 You shine so bright it's insane
Loved it I hope you update it soon.
Author's Response: why of coursee
Date: 09/01/08 10:27 am Title: Chapter 7-He's my first mistake
Aww, this was a really great chapter. So sweet! I wonder if the child is Gavin's, though. I think it may be.
Author's Response: hmm......rnMY LIPS ARE SEALEDDD
Date: 08/30/08 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 7-He's my first mistake
I loved it! I like this side of Tom. So sensitive...
Just one thing. Try writing smaller sentences. There were parts were there wasn't a fullstop for about 3-4 lines. It gets a bit confusing sometimes. It would be easier to read if you used smaller sentences.
It's just a friendly advice. I hope you won't get me wrong. You know I love your story and your writing style.
Update soon, will you?
Author's Response: THANNKKK youuu and I totallly willll
Date: 08/28/08 08:39 am Title: Chapter 7-He's my first mistake
it's awesome!!!!
plz update soon!!!!
i love it!!!
=D
Author's Response: AS SOONEY SOON AS I CANNN
Date: 08/26/08 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 7-He's my first mistake
sweet. keep crankin em out yo!!
fun fun fun.
Author's Response: fsho!!!
Date: 08/26/08 08:36 am Title: Chapter 7-He's my first mistake
That was absolutely AMAZING!! I love it... your fiction is the only het fiction that I'll ever read. I've never enjoyed reading het before. I loooove this story! I hope you have the time to update soon!
Author's Response: omggg thankk you soo muchh
Date: 08/26/08 12:50 am Title: Chapter 7-He's my first mistake
THANK GOD you finally updated!!!
it's one of my favorite stories!
so keep updating please!!
Author's Response: for cereall?!?! I SHALLL ^^rnthorrry it took me foreverr
Date: 08/26/08 12:26 am Title: Chapter 7-He's my first mistake
ahhhh i can't believe you actually updated!! :)
awesome chapter, but what was up with that random girl coming to see Gavin?...i highly doubt that that's his "sister"
Author's Response: my lips are sealed young grasshopperrn-cough- but u may bee quite wiseee
Date: 08/25/08 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 7-He's my first mistake
-new reader-
Aww man.
That last part made me cry.
-tear-
How could you?
-sob-
I never cry....
-tear-
Wahhhhhh!
Author's Response: ahaah awwwe I'm sorryy
Date: 08/25/08 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 7-He's my first mistake
Loved it Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: heheh the next onee -mischevious grin-