Date: 10/07/08 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 11-I'll Teach You too fly
IS IT OVER?! It can't be over!!! Please, don't let it be over!! ^,,^ I hope you continue!
Date: 10/07/08 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 11-I'll Teach You too fly
WHAT?
that was too short.
the story better continue.
Date: 10/05/08 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 11-I'll Teach You too fly
aww this chapter was so beautiful...i'm so happy that her and Tom got married!...but wait, does this mean that the story is over?
Date: 10/05/08 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 11-I'll Teach You too fly
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
i looooooooooooooooooved it!!!!!
well done!!!!!
=D
Date: 10/05/08 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 11-I'll Teach You too fly
Soooo sweet!
Is this story over? Cause it says it's not completed...
Date: 10/05/08 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 11-I'll Teach You too fly
awwww that was so sweet
Date: 10/01/08 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 10-Be careful what you wish for
HOLY FUCK.
I think that me, you, and tokio hotel
should definitly plot to literally kill
Gavin (or just me and Tokio Hotel because your a sissy), and it would
be interesting to have a murder in the series. and if not soon, later on in the storey.
Date: 10/01/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 9-This is Fact Not Fiction
There is no words to be said.
Just imagine me with a a jaw
dropping shocked expression.
Date: 10/01/08 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 8 You shine so bright it's insane
I am appalled at her skankiness!
Date: 10/01/08 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 7-He's my first mistake
whats with the child :O
Date: 10/01/08 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 6-If you'd be my star I'd be your sky...
eeee, I love the birth stones bit.
touching, really.
Date: 10/01/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 5- it's not meant to be like this.
"Always kicking off your pants and blaming it on the poor sap sleeping next to you," he muttered shaking his head
this line, and this line
"I like the feeling of your legs against mine," he shot back, sending butterflies to my stomach
were the greatest. hahah.
Date: 09/30/08 02:04 am Title: Chapter 3-Romeo
Its nice to see how close
her and Bill are.
Author's Response: :D bigg grinnnnn i bought toffifeee since u so kindly introduced themm too me anywais KEEEPPP reviewingg thus i can figure how far u aree log on more foooooo i must right the next chap before watching paris hiltons bff show
Date: 09/30/08 01:35 am Title: Chapter 2:And never again..
HOW COULD SHE THINK OF TOM WHILE
GAVING SAYS THOSE BEAUTIFUL WORDS?
but Tom is Tom -_O
Author's Response: heheheh shush foo u gtta keep readin and then u shall see wuahaha
Date: 09/30/08 01:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I love how you spelled my name
the plain way. -scoff-
I also love how when she sees Tom
for the first time in..what..two years?
and right behind her at the same time
Gavin is there.
Author's Response: -wiggly brows- youu know how I do ^^ ahaha rnmy spell check was peeevin meee thorrryyy
Date: 09/27/08 01:22 am Title: Chapter 10-Be careful what you wish for
Oh shit this has turn in a completely different direction!!! I really want to know what happens next!
Date: 09/27/08 12:02 am Title: Chapter 10-Be careful what you wish for
AH! My god, that's wow (:
Love this, its amazing!
Date: 09/25/08 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 10-Be careful what you wish for
plz plz plz plz plz plzplzplz update
Date: 09/25/08 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 10-Be careful what you wish for
plz plz plz plz plz plzplzplz update
Date: 09/25/08 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 10-Be careful what you wish for
i looooooooooooooved it!!!!!
please update soon!!!!!!
=D