Date: 06/22/08 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 3; Coming home has always been hell
omg sad/amazing i almost cried :[
but you're a very good writer!
Author's Response: aw. haha :) thanks! im glad you like it so far. :)
Date: 06/22/08 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 3; Coming home has always been hell
Omg, You are such a good writer!
I feel so bad for Bill, And where is Simone?
You have to hurry with you`r next chapter. Can`t wait :D
Author's Response: haha aww thanks hun :) Hmm. we'll see later ;)
Date: 06/19/08 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 3; Coming home has always been hell
omg wow that was like wow cant wait for the next chapter update again soon
Author's Response: Hahaha xD i didn't think this chapter was that great, but thanks ALOT for your comments <3 i'll try my best to update another chapter soon.
Date: 06/19/08 10:05 am Title: Chapter 2; The Fight
thank u for updating loved it continue the great work
Author's Response: your welcome ^-^ glad you like it so far :D
Date: 06/19/08 05:57 am Title: Chapter 2; The Fight
Where is Tom???
I want to know:)
I actually think this story is going to be greate hunn^^)
So please write next chapter soon okay??^-^
Author's Response: Aw thanks :D i hope it turns out alright. a new chapter should be coming soon. and dont worry, tom's gonna coming soon too :D
Date: 06/19/08 01:50 am Title: Chapter 2; The Fight
This is really good! Please continue.
*Frowns* I don't like Jorg though...
Author's Response: Aw :) Danke Liebe <3 :D aw i know, i dont like him either he's an ass! :/
Date: 06/19/08 12:58 am Title: Chapter 2; The Fight
i seriously feel bad for the fact that ppl are not reviewing this story.it seems like a good story so far.and you have me wondering wth happened with tom.plz write more like asap.....curiosity is killing this cat.;)
Author's Response: Eh, well im sure it will get more comments later. after all i DID just start writing it today. Hmm. but thanks for your comment <3 and dont worry! tom's coming soon! :D
Date: 06/19/08 12:40 am Title: Chapter 2; The Fight
I sorry for bill and his mother:( hope the next chappys are happier
Author's Response: maybee :) just keep up with this story and you'll find out! ^-^
Date: 06/18/08 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1; Mommy, Dont leave me..
loved it keep it up and im hoping its going to be as good as u say it is and im begging u please dont make it like sad as hell i hate that well keep up tha good work
Author's Response: Hmm. well i DO have a little something in mind ;D you'll see when i post more chapters. thanks for your comment love <3
Date: 06/18/08 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1; Mommy, Dont leave me..
poor bill!!!!
come back here simone!!!
simone: *ignores*
bill: *cries*
me: omgcute! *hugs*
.......
me: LEAVE BILL THE FUCK ALONE!!! *pulls out bazzoka and points it to the kids*
..
*ten minutes later*
me: *is being arrest for having an illegal gun*
I LOOOOOOOOOVEEE this story already!!!! please continueeeeee
pleaseeeeeeee *begs on her knees*
Author's Response: hahaha omg your adorable! your comment made me laugh! WELL! if you like this chapter, your going to LOVE it once more start coming along!