Date: 11/13/25 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1. Something is wrong.
Okey you answered me so quickly before so I am wondering if I’m annoying you with my hyped comments and sort of desperate need and desire for what I’ve been writing and that you feel pressured or stressed by it, I felt like maybe it would be a motivation with what I shared and that I am even considering paying you to continue on this relatively soon but again one have to have time, inspiration and drive to do that anyways and I know all too well about not always having the ability to write even, so I am SORRY my friend
Date: 11/13/25 08:00 am Title: Chapter 61. Kittens; small, medium and large.
“Bill thought of Georg, so desperately depressed and alone, and his heart bled for him. It bled for them both. They were meant. He had to do something, say…something. Georg and Gus belonged together. He would help Tom get over it. Tom was his. The thought made him feel guilty so he pushed past it, instead focusing on what he needed to get done”.
Earlier in the chapter Ruby said this morning Bill was Bill / himself, so it seams like it’s Bill who’s in love with Tom and the one who is the one reacting romantically and passionately the most around him and his other personas not as much, right? :) I reacted to all his aches and wants to get back to Tom and his “Tom is his” thought :)
Date: 11/10/25 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 48. Accidental Mental Osmosis.
“Gustav ground his teeth and nuzzled Geo’s damp hair, trying to calm his nerves. His skin was tingling, and the little hairs on the back of his neck were standing up. It had been happening for a month, but more and more lately. He had been under so much fucking stress. It happened when he wasn’t stressed though too. He could be completely alone and relaxed, and his whole body would suddenly just give an internal shudder, like someone had walked over his grave.”
There are more moments in this story where it gives away that Ruby most surely IS a real ghost amongst them, but also it’s clear towards the end that Bill has real mental issues like a split personality disorder and such… So the 2 facts are true at the same time, right? I see many in the comments who have read the story once and reads it again and comments that think that she isn’t real, how can they miss that she must be with many details revealed when the other boys experiences her without Bill being involved at all and so on… Anyway this story is still on my mind so much I have to read parts of it sometimes and now I’m even reading almost the full story again haha… I’ve also seen in other fics recently people talking about this fic and people recommending others to read this fic so please dear incredible TH writer it would please many of us immensely if you wrote more in this and I also think if you immersed yourself in it you would find it fun or rewarding too… These boys and FF can truly make regular hard days so much better and happier 😻😏 come on now, come here with your writing skills and take no prisoners in the world of all the thousands of TH fics yet again hmm 😇 😊 I would gladly spread it also to get the word out it’s active again in that case (though I’m sure the word would spread from many the moment they see new chapters in this) or even for real pay you to continue on this 🫣💕
Date: 06/22/25 08:02 am Title: Chapter 1. Something is wrong.
Where did you go? Check my latest comments 😇
Date: 05/22/25 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1. Something is wrong.
Continuing to comment with some time in between until you’ll see my comment / answer hihi 😇 I wrote last : Well like I said I like storys without sex or that doesn’t have very much of it also or not all the time ofc and your story has lots of interesting topics and meaningful exchanges and scenes in it, aswell as just being a wild ride. Thank you so much for a wonderful few weeks of reading this and like I said if you didn’t see it: I’ll literally PAY you to write more on this even if it’s just a temporary continuation you’ll change later… Would that compel you to write some more asap perhaps? Mihih.. All love.
Date: 05/17/25 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1. Something is wrong.
Well like I said I like storys without sex or that doesn’t have very much of it also ofc and your story has lots of interesting topics and meaningful exchanges and scenes in it, aswell as just being a wild ride. Thank you so much for a wonderful few weeks of reading this and like I said if you didn’t see it: I’ll literally PAY you to write more on this even if it’s just a temporary continuation you’ll change later… Would that compel you to write some more asap perhaps? Mihih.. All love.
Date: 05/02/25 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1. Something is wrong.
Well like I said I like storys without sex also and your story has lots of interesting topics and meaningful exchanges and scenes in it, aswell as just being a wild ride. Thank you so much for a wonderful few weeks do reading this and like I said if you didn’t see it: I’ll literally PAY you to write more on this even if it’s just a temporary continuation you’ll change later pleasee hihi.. All love.
Date: 04/29/25 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1. Something is wrong.
Did you see my latest comment? 🥰
Author's Response: No, I didn't! Thank you so much for your unbelievably kind words! It's been a long time since anyone bothered to comment, it was wonderful to hear your thoughts as you traveled through the story. That's a really looong read, haha I wasn't sure it would hold your interest once the sex slowed down and the NPCs had so much story time. Of course only a couple of days have passed in the story, even though chapters have flown by. I was very grateful to get fresh feedback after so long!
Date: 04/22/25 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 87. Cobras don't have hands.
So I’ve finished everything… I need to tell you that it seams like your intelligence is extremely high based on how you write and how you’re able to build these characters and the story. I need to again tell you how extremely impressed I am by your writing, and please my dear friend could you continue on this? I swear I would pay you if necessary to continue to write on this… it’s beyond amazing and it’s the light of my days to read this. Please, even if it’s just temporary chapters that you’ll edit later on if you feel like you still don’t really know what should come next but I need and want to read more of this story asap 🥹🙏🙏🙏🙏d84;a039;
Date: 04/16/25 10:50 am Title: Chapter 69. Alarmed enough.
Ok I read your latest response and is the whole thing fr longer then the first 4 HP books?! Wow nice going 😂 🔥 👌🏼 I understand that you might not want to end it just for the case of ending it if you maybe are planning on continuing it in the future, which I think more people then me would LOVE if you did! It seams like you’re having fun while writing this story too, it comes through the words how passionate you are about the story. Please continue it soon 😇 And yeah I’ve picked up on that you’ve written about several facts that have in fact happened in real life, very cool. Furthermore about this chapter; I’m getting fed up with Tom acting so crazily and often showing signs of loving Bill more then anything in this world/being super in love with him yet he continues to hurt him and also says he wants to be with others, and one moment he’s super jealous of Bill with others but then he says it’s ok for Bill to be with others? But the 69 scene was kinda hot even if it was very short and also Toms extreme oral fixation is hot, and that he wanted to fall asleep nursing Bills D 🙊 Like Bill has done one time to Tom too… Very cute IMO, that they’re so attached :,)
Date: 04/14/25 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 65. Finding Tom.
“Vastian stroked his dreads lightly, allowing the contact. He held his breath, forcing himself to calm down. The last thing in the world he had expected was Tom coming to him now. He wrapped his arms around him and held him firmly. His Tomi was so desperately fragile.” - Why would Vas call him Tomi (Bills pet name for Tom)? ^^ Anyway this chapter is amazing and I’m once again blown away by your writing… Tom is so adorable many times in this chapter, I’m so thankful Vas has finally come around to save them and for Tom it’s just in time! Wow… A question; is this fic finished like does it have an ending? If not it really, truly deserves one even if it’s just an sort of sum up ending chapter, after all these long chapters and all your incredible work and how you’ve made these characters SO alive… It really deserves an ending 💕
Author's Response: Over the course of the day he's heard Bill call him Tomi. That was a good catch. There was a bit there where Vas pondered Bill's use of such a childish pet name but I eventually edited it out as wordy and for use later, maybe. Everyone does in fact live happily ever after by the end but I left it at a good place, with everyone safe and sound and getting competent help. This story is longer than the first 4 harry potter novels put together, even though there is much, much more to put down, I don't know that I will. I don't know that I wont. Thank you so so very much for your kind words. I poured so much of myself into this never ending soap opera that I needed the break. It's been many years, but I still have a list of things that I wrote about that were true, YEARS before we got any sort of conformation in the press or live interviews or THTV that the boys did them. I'm up to 134, haha I was so tuned in it was scary and I needed a break, lmao As you go through the story and read little tidbits about things they do keep in mind that they were all written about more than a decade before we ever saw them do them. The last one was Gustav smoking cigars and pipes, lol I know the ending, and I may finish. This story still sits very much in my heart.
Date: 04/13/25 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 61. Kittens; small, medium and large.
Billbell and Samwipe? Hahaha, Tom really is an idiot… Fooling around with both the G’s but still being dangerously jealous and possessive about Bill with others… it’s still sort of cute tho that he’s so in love and possessive, and the part where the twins say sorry and hug endlessly but wanted to do more and Bill caressing Toms pulse-point with his lips was so cute i needed that :,) But how can Bill still think Tom is in love with Gustav when he seamed to believe Tom when he said he thought it was Bill he told it to/that it’s Bill he loves… Or doesn’t he remember that because it was Diva in that part that Tom talked to perhaps?
Author's Response: Bill and Diva have completely different memories because they are different people. Even when they "share" something they are going to have different feelings about what they are remembering. Diva knows he is protecting Bill; Bill doesn't know about Diva. Tom is hanging on by his fingernails and often makes the worst decision possible, but help is coming!
Date: 04/12/25 11:18 am Title: Chapter 57. Bleep.
You’re really making Tom out to be EXTREMELY week and a bit too fucked up now in this story:,( it’s interesting but it hurts and it hurts to read about the twins treating each other like this/not loving on each other more… when their connection and energy and interactions other times before have been so sweet, loving and beautiful it makes me a bit sad. But I should’ve expected a rocky path forward for all of them ^^ And I still adore your writing… I just really hope things will get better/more loving asap at least a bit 🥹 😇
Date: 04/10/25 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 51. Little black pearls of wisdom.
Omg noooo why did Gustav have to say that to Bill >.< also his thought that Tom is his, noooo he’s only Bills 🙊
Date: 04/09/25 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 47. Rampant bed bouncing.
Lol they’re all super gay I can’t with their “I’m not gay”’s anymore ahahah.. I hope it will be only the twins with each other from now on and the G’s with each other… but I bet it won’t but one can dream 😇
Date: 04/07/25 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 30. The calming effect of chocolate.
The bit about the blowjob and how Bill wanted a forced one from Tom and that it was the best one he’s ever gotten was 🥵 Also funny that Bill got jealous / mad wondering who Tom had maybe practiced that before on when a little while later he’s fantasizing for a little while about another man 😂 These boys haha… But it IS very realistic and human to be hypocritically jealous/think of others/being attracted to others sometimes while being in love, even when one is so in love one is so possessive at the same time. It’s quite steamy and interesting IMO 😂 Also I love the pacifier thing and that both the twins seam to be quite orally fixated ^^, You sure seam to know a lot about many different topics as well which is important for a longer story to keep on being interesting; this one is very intriguing, can barely stop reading when I need too 🙏
Author's Response: I'm glad the story isn't disappointing you so far, haha
Date: 04/07/25 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 30. The calming effect of chocolate.
Oh wow this is IT, one of the sexiest Toll smut scenes I’ve read actually… and it’s long and quite detailed too ;> Alriiiiie 😎 👊🏻
Date: 04/07/25 12:03 am Title: Chapter 27. Topping from the bottom.
Bill closed his lips over his hand and licked himself clean, refusing to waste anything so precious of his brother. Tom flushed; he watched out of the corner of his eye fascinated as his big fucking cat lapped at his hand, cleaning up. It was so fucking arousing.
- this was also extremely great and passionate, as was the part before it, jeez you’re magnificent my friend ;) 🔥
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's very kind of you!
Date: 04/06/25 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 22. Unusual sex toys.
Yeah, for example the smut in the start of this chapter is absolutely AMAZING, thank you 🙊 knew I could count on you ;)
Date: 04/06/25 01:14 am Title: Chapter 17. The ribbon was black satin.
Of course I’m not here only for smut, I clearly stated I’ve picked up on that those parts isn’t very lengthy and I like them as they are just as I like longer more detailed such scenes which I was hoping there maybe was some of it further ahead sometimes. But it doesn’t have to be included for a story to be good, like I said I like you’re writing and I always want a plot, I often read fics without any smut at all also :) Yeah I see your point or what you mean. Although I know for a fact Bill has always though Tom is gorgeous and hot even when he was younger and more soft and feminine in the face, in real life that is, but in this story he has another type you say and that’s ok ofc ^^ I just love it when the twins are all for each other in a deeply passionate way and are their most wanted/perfect match/type as a result of how strong their love and passion for each other is. Anyway I love to read this fic and that there are so many chapters still to go through; thanks for the entertainment ;) Have a nice day 🥰
Author's Response: You are so kind and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! I hope to hear from you again!
Author's Response: You are so kind and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! I hope to hear from you again!