Date: 06/16/12 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
that is.. Epic
Date: 06/16/10 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have read this story three times and still love it as much as the first time!! Heartbeat by I-Yaz goes with it really well. I would love to see a follow up to this!! I know it's supposed to be a cliff hanger, fill in the blanks kind of ending. But I would love to see the after effect of this seriously hot night.
Date: 10/24/08 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
gosh, i can't believe i've read a lemon! I haven't for such a long time that I partially forgot how they were. My! George and Tom being that close is just so freaking hot! Hey, I like twincest, but Torg is also pretty cool too. Having cheated on their boyfriends is kind of sad but I wouldn't worry too much. They just lived the moment and enjoy themselves for a while! Quite sure they are gonna make it up for their boyfriends someway
Date: 07/13/08 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
No lube...kinky bastard x] Nice!
Date: 07/11/08 02:18 am Title: Chapter 1
...*gasping for air* heh heh cute ^^
Date: 06/23/08 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
what ever did you boys do that for!! i know you just couldn't help yourselves but ... eh what the hell. who am i kidding. i enjoyed ever word of this. yummi. TORG!! *drool* i'm obsessed with writing Torg. and this is why. It's so hawt!
Date: 06/21/08 11:30 am Title: Chapter 1
It had my heart beating fast, and my stomach dropped at the last line.
You truly are a master of words! Ich Liebe Dich, Shelly!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Personally, I didn't think it was anything special... I still don't in fact, I kinda hate it, but if you like it, it's all good.
Date: 06/18/08 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1
*cries*
Author's Response: ... I don't get it... why are you crying??rn
Date: 06/18/08 05:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Love you too Shelly!
And remind me again how the hell i helped come up with this?? I don't remember this at all! @_@ Did you spike my tea?!
This was very good! But (sorry if i'm wrong about this being your first) in future smuts, you could do more detail- read Toasty's stuff. Tis great "Reference". =^^=
Oh, and by the way:
I STOLE YOUR FIC'S VIRGINITY!!! I'm the first reader AND reviewer!!! *shines fingernails* Oh, yeah, I am the Master! er... Mistress... WHATEVER!