Date: 08/05/08 08:17 am Title: Chapter 4
It's okay, of course I'll read it on :].
At least now you know, and won't forget it lol, it could get only better from now on, good luck *laughs*.
Date: 08/04/08 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
This story is so amazing and was glad to see it updated. I loved this chapter it was really cute, and I can't wait for the next one.
Date: 08/04/08 04:47 am Title: Chapter 4
You know what? Lol.
Just to point that out... Bill said first (if i remember correctly) that he moved there about a week ago, and then he said he moved in three days ago PLUS with his MOM, but now came out that his mum left them when he was three and lives only with his dad. Oh, and one more thing, about cleaning Bill's room, there Bill mentioned, that his room didn't look like that usually, but he had just cleaned it, because his dad had been bugging him to do it for WEEKS, but he hasn't lived there that long, you know. ;D
That's it :], apart from that, it's kind of cute.
Author's Response: ok, so I'm really sorry for all of this.rnafter the third chapter, I thought I'd just drop this fic, because I just thought I can't write anything worth reading, anyway. but then I decided to just continue and see what comes out, that's why it took me so long. I'm really sorry for these stupid mistakes, and I fixed it, but I hope you don't think it's lame and just stop reading :( if you do it's okay, cause I really feel lame right now. anyway, thank you for pointing it out.
Date: 08/03/08 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
jeez...someone is kind of rude down there.
anyway, awesome chapter! love the kiss between bill and tom! so cute! please update this soon! i love this story! =]
Date: 08/03/08 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
get yourself a beta
grammatical mistakes are not really terrifying BUT in the second chapter Bill says that he moved there on a week ago, in the third he says that he moved in three days ago after his mom get a new job and in the fourth he says that his mom left when he was three!
the question is 'what the fuck?'
Is Bill lying and Tom is too stupid to pay attension? or maybe you don't pay enough attention to what you're writing?
sorry for being rude but you DEFINITELY need a beta
Date: 08/03/08 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
I loved it! Cute!
Date: 08/03/08 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yeah, they moved a bit fast to only know each other for, what did you say again, two days? O.o
Oh and btw, it's Georg, not George!
Date: 08/03/08 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
They kissed! :DD
Update soon!^^
Date: 06/26/08 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
This was a cute chapter I like how Bill told Tom right out he was gay.
Date: 06/25/08 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is just totally great!
I wish the chapter never ended!
Please continue! :)
Date: 06/24/08 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
The end was funny xd
Date: 06/24/08 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
heeeeeeeeeeeeeee. i love this!!!! update soon!!!! =]
Date: 06/24/08 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
Haha this is a good story! I really like it!
Date: 06/19/08 08:13 am Title: Chapter 2
oh..interesting^^
Date: 06/19/08 12:07 am Title: Chapter 2
please, more!
I love gay, nervous tom XD
Date: 06/18/08 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just "awwwed" out loud, haha. More please??
:DD
Date: 06/18/08 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww they're gonna be partners for the project. Too cute. ( when you start aww-ing over this kinda thing, it's possibly a sign of reading too many fan fics lmao )
Anyway, I love it so far. Looking foward to the next chapter :-) x