Date: 07/20/24 10:01 pm Title: Epilogue
The ending was very vague…. Feels like a chapter is missing in the end and I see that many agree. Not even a proper sex scene with the twins which was the whole build up of the story and what everyone was waiting for to happen atleast one time, they went to break up with her then the epilogue is just them being a bit flirty with each other again at a club like okey, we wanted the twin passionate love making scene Damn it :,(
Date: 06/24/12 07:57 pm Title: Epilogue
So, although we didn't get much of it, I'm guessing they all ended up together in a threesome??? XD Well done, and I can't wait to read more of your stuff ^-^
Date: 06/22/12 12:19 am Title: Tongue-Tied
Just wondering, who, exactly, is "Sophia"??? *tilts head* I'm guessing she's your beta reader, or an alter ego, or someone you've made up so you can say "Sophia wouldn't let me" XD But which (if any) is it???
Date: 06/21/12 04:33 pm Title: Elations and Frustrations
I know what some of those words mean, so I'm gonna guess... "I wanted to put the message in English, but Sophia wouldn't let me"??? Also, just wanna tell you, this is BRILLIANT. Bill and Tom both fall for the same girl, and she happens to like both of them XD Well done, so far ^-^
Date: 03/04/11 08:18 am Title: Slut Jokes and Armpit Pokes
hahaha the end notes always make me laugh so hard. As a great ending of a great chapter :)
Date: 04/28/10 03:19 pm Title: Epilogue
You were right Meg I loved the ending. I really enjoyed this story a lot, probably one of the best hets I have ever read. One of these days I'm going to write great like you two.
Date: 04/28/10 03:10 pm Title: Turnabout
Ha I feel dumb. The whole time I thought I was on chapter 30 I was about to say "What a cruel way to end this" but then I seen the little "Next" button. So yeah, you guys aren't dicks lol I liked this chapter.
Date: 04/28/10 02:17 pm Title: All For One
My goodness, I was supposed to finish this yesterday but nooo I got SO distracted. So today I am finishing this before I do ANYTHING else. and OMG! That scene was hot, I loved it.
Date: 04/27/10 07:05 pm Title: Tongue-Tied
So much for Sophia not letting you lol.
Date: 04/27/10 06:47 pm Title: When Two Become One
This shall be interesting.
Date: 04/27/10 05:13 pm Title: Drinking On An Empty Heart
=] I may actually get through this today, yay. I definitely have enjoyed it a lot so far, you guys have done really good creating a female character.
Date: 04/27/10 09:37 am Title: Circle of Friends
I thought for sure that Tom and Sullivan were going to have sex, yep.
Date: 04/27/10 08:33 am Title: Shifting Sands
The Dark Knight is one of my favorite movies =] I'm glad you mentioned it. It's good how they're (the twins) still sensitive about the whole thing. It's much nicer then that whole "I love you! OMG let's screw" 'cause you know that's not awkward at all, no.
Date: 04/27/10 04:58 am Title: Bicoital
I don't usually point these out to you guys but up, yeah ""Thinks still weird between you two?"" Typo. Anyway, wow...they got twincesty...just um odd I guess. I love Bill's boldness in this, it's much more realistic in my opinion.
Date: 04/27/10 04:43 am Title: Near Miss
*shudders* Guys I was listening to the music channel and Lindsey Lohan song came on, since when does she sings anyway? Now, I know I said I was going to finish this yesterday things got in the way >.> So maybe today. I wish they had kissed though :( but I sort of like how you guys avoided it too lol. I guess I just trust you guys to do whatever because I know I will love it in the end.
Date: 04/26/10 07:21 pm Title: A Fine Mess
I like how you're explaining Tom's emotions instead of just saying "Tom was pissed".
Date: 04/26/10 01:00 pm Title: Cease and Desist
My goal is to finish the story today. I really do like how the character's personalities have developed and what they are right now. The way Bill and Tom feel about their about their "relationship" is perfect and believable and the they way they're handling it is good.
Date: 04/26/10 12:22 am Title: Elations and Frustrations
I'm running out of things to say in reviews.