Date: 07/19/08 03:43 pm Title: Talk and Walk
darn.
really fun to read, nice work on the speedy update too.
My roommate bet me that the reason I was popular with the guys was because I was blonde."
"That's harsh."
"I know!" Sullivan looked indignant. "She's totally overlooking my rack and blowjob techniques!"
best line.
Date: 07/19/08 01:41 pm Title: Talk and Walk
Pretty dandy. Tom and Bill are fighting over a ladeh. Oh oh. lol. Amazing.
Date: 07/19/08 12:25 pm Title: Talk and Walk
Things are really heating up. Love triangles are interesting.
Date: 07/19/08 11:31 am Title: Talk and Walk
aw god I actually feel really sorry for Bill after that, but I loved when Tom told Sullivan off for calling her Tomi.
I snorty giggled at the end notes.
Date: 07/19/08 05:28 am Title: Talk and Walk
That part with the "don't call me that!" really made me hot somehow.
WHat I like about this is how liquid everything in this fic is. The outcome is uncertain, like in real life, and the characters are many-sided, complex, have a lot of ties and obligations to a lot of people and sometimes they are pulled in opposite directions. But the reason why that scene in the bxo got to me was bc it suddenly became tangible how much the twins are terrified that someone would come between them. And it's not like they can say: oh, nothing comes between us, bc you never know. You can never know what life throws at you and how you are gonna react.
So that's why I like this fic.
(And of course hoping for a slashy conclusion...)
Date: 07/19/08 04:36 am Title: Talk and Walk
Oh yes, what about Bill? :( I'm so torn of who I want with whom. It's killing me to be this indecisive, but I bet it's all part of your scheme. Guess I'll just have to roll with it and wait for the next update.
Date: 07/18/08 02:15 am Title: Silence and Penance
down, tiger.
funny as always, and the whole beginning part is quite insightful.
Date: 07/17/08 03:29 pm Title: Silence and Penance
I love this story lol. It has the perfect balance between the subtle hints of Slash and the not-so-subtle hints of Het. The paper ball fight between the twins sounded very in character to me and played out smoothly in my head, just like I was watching it on a television screen. :) Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 07/17/08 02:37 pm Title: Silence and Penance
Oooh now that's twisted and interesting. I haven't read any stories similar to this one. When the twins are hanging around one girl. It will be interesting to read further when they get to act around a girl. And of course, twincest is expected, huh?
Anyhow, I am really enjoying this. The bit with the twins making up and spending time in Bill's bunk was so sweet. Also, I liked Tom's thoughts in the beginning as well as nearing to the end of this chapter when he was sort of looking out for his brother. That was really nice of him but I bet there will be a lot of trouble coming. Anyhow, yeah. Looking forward to the next chapter soon!
Date: 07/17/08 01:55 pm Title: Silence and Penance
Amazing. *grin* I'm excited to see the next chapter. Tom's a bad boy.
Date: 07/17/08 10:24 am Title: Silence and Penance
haha nice
Date: 07/17/08 09:10 am Title: Silence and Penance
I love this story yadayadayada...
(Okay so about Sullivan. Yes, she is cool and everything but if you consider it's not that difficult to be more mature than Tom, and anyway why should everyone swoon at his feet just like that. Not every girl is a groupie. Tom is a pushover. Just scrape the surface of the lady killer and he is only a kid. He deserves someone who does not see him as the badass rockstar and tell it to his face too. You have a lot to learn, boy.)
...yadayadayada and cant wait for the next chapter:)
Date: 07/17/08 03:43 am Title: Silence and Penance
God if Sullivan really existed in the real world... i would spend all of my money to get her to REALLY meet Tom.
Oh what a fun thing that might be. :3
Date: 07/09/08 07:12 pm Title: Unexpected Guests and Brotherly Distress
Awesome as ever!!!
Date: 07/09/08 11:25 am Title: Unexpected Guests and Brotherly Distress
I like like like it! And Sullivan is cool.
Date: 07/08/08 05:04 am Title: Unexpected Guests and Brotherly Distress
:)
Date: 07/08/08 02:23 am Title: Unexpected Guests and Brotherly Distress
:/ I'm a new reader and i love your story so much..it's so addictive.