Date: 07/26/08 04:47 pm Title: Honorable Dealings and Shady Feelings
Loved it!
More? :D
Date: 07/26/08 01:57 pm Title: Honorable Dealings and Shady Feelings
That would have been hot! But I want to see the twincest.
Date: 07/26/08 09:23 am Title: Honorable Dealings and Shady Feelings
Love. That was awesome.
Date: 07/25/08 04:39 pm Title: Honorable Dealings and Shady Feelings
PURE AWESOMENESS!!! :)
Date: 07/25/08 12:30 pm Title: Honorable Dealings and Shady Feelings
I know this is het, but, dammit, the sexual tension between Bill and Tom is killing me. I want them to do something about it, lol. ^^;;
You know, I really wasn't so wild about Sullivan when I first started reading this, but, ever since the last chapter, when she took the blame for ditching Bill at the club, I've developed some respect for her. And I like to see that she's not always so cool and collected around either of the boys, such as blushing when Bill kissed her. I thought that was cute.
Anyway, I'm really enjoying this story, and can't wait for more. ^_^
Date: 07/25/08 09:02 am Title: Honorable Dealings and Shady Feelings
Damnit, Sophia, loosen up :( Just kidding. I'm not really into het, just like 90% of the members in this fandom lmao, but the underlying twincest and the fact that Sullivan is kickass is enough to keep me reading. Can't wait for the next part!
Date: 07/25/08 05:08 am Title: Honorable Dealings and Shady Feelings
This time I agree with Sophia. I like the way Bill's acting towards her and her shoving her tongue down his throat would be a big no-no right now. :)
Date: 07/25/08 03:32 am Title: Honorable Dealings and Shady Feelings
Awww too adorable, which was a popular and suitable adjective for this chapter. ♥ I always love Bill telling off guys lol.
Date: 07/25/08 02:21 am Title: Honorable Dealings and Shady Feelings
Damn it Sophia, stop holding her back. She has great ideas!
Date: 07/23/08 08:28 pm Title: At Best, A Simple Request
This chapter seems shorter than the last, but maybe I just like this story too much.
Date: 07/22/08 05:42 pm Title: At Best, A Simple Request
Ughhhh oookay what's gonna happen next *bites fingers*
And ahhh at last Bill is invading Tom's mind when he's having sex. Looks like Tom is going to be the first one to be absolutely confused in his thoughts and feelings towards his twin. But I better not be assuming anything and wait for further chapters!
Date: 07/22/08 01:27 am Title: Dull Dates and Soul-Mates
Well written, love the sarcasm. And tom is totally sullivans bitch...it's awesome haha!!! Looking forward to reading more!
Date: 07/22/08 12:47 am Title: At Best, A Simple Request
:D this is awesome :)
Date: 07/22/08 12:30 am Title: At Best, A Simple Request
And the witty end notes continue!
This was hot and angsty and cute all over. I can just picture Bill being like this after Sullivan, or any girl rather, runs into him after fucking with Tom. Just sort of humble. ♥ Can't wait for more!
Date: 07/22/08 12:25 am Title: At Best, A Simple Request
I love it
Date: 07/22/08 12:09 am Title: At Best, A Simple Request
percy!!
that's so.... original! i like it. argue with sophie. tiger is already taken!!
ah well, funny and entertaining as always.
Author's Response: Achtung: Sophia hates to be called "Sophie".
Date: 07/22/08 12:08 am Title: At Best, A Simple Request
Aw Bill is like a saint in this story, if I was Sullivan I'd certainly be thinking twice about which brother I was spending my time with. Then again she seems to enjoy Tom the way he is.
Date: 07/21/08 11:52 pm Title: At Best, A Simple Request
*grins* haha. Amazingggg.
Date: 07/21/08 12:49 am Title: Dull Dates and Soul-Mates
Props for the Labyrinth reference. 50 Lizard coolness points for that one! (on top of the hundreds you've already earned for great writing) :D
Author's Response: Hehehe, sooo glad someone got that.
Date: 07/20/08 04:31 pm Title: Talk and Walk
Amazing. More?