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Reviewer: Dizzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 10:39 pm Title: Winner Takes It All

damn! mamma be a bitch!!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 07:03 pm Title: Winner Takes It All

Great, why'd Jorg come home early? And what's up w/ Bill's mom? Stuck up bitch much? How could she say that about her son?! I guess that's why Jorg hates Bill so much, he blames him for everything. And why Bill's mom isn't part of his life either. They can't go live w/ her now can they? Does Jorg have money at least now? If he works all day... Love Leila. She's so funny.

Update soon.

Reviewer: billliebttom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 02:32 pm Title: Winner Takes It All

I like this, it's cute! C:

Reviewer: Dahlia-Starr Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 02:29 pm Title: Winner Takes It All

love itt update soon!!!
Tomi and Billa are soo cute!

Reviewer: lililu7777777 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 12:07 pm Title: Winner Takes It All

update soon please! ^_^ its so good :D

Reviewer: SacredMonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 10:07 am Title: Winner Takes It All

Bill's mom was so harsh =( Loved the chapter!

Reviewer: Pia_Elise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/08 07:23 pm Title: I Want You To Show Me Love

oh god this is coming to be a very good history

Reviewer: shylyte329 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 04:09 pm Title: I Want You To Show Me Love

I like the pace... I wouldn't want them to jump in the sack with each other after like one day, haha. Curse Jorg coming home and ruining things!!
:/

Reviewer: lililu7777777 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 02:56 pm Title: I Want You To Show Me Love

it so good i love it soooooo much ^_^

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 02:31 pm Title: I Want You To Show Me Love

Quite frankly, thank you, it drives me nuts when the relationship moves uncannily fast. Now they just have to hide and pray Jorg doesn't find them, or at least Bill. And Tom's really gotta tell Bill the truth. I hope no one tells Jorg Bill's there. Update soon.

Reviewer: pandasarelovex Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 12:22 pm Title: I Want You To Show Me Love

xD All their little special moments are always ruined by someone busting into the room.

Reviewer: SaraInes Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 11:43 am Title: I Want You To Show Me Love

He's home! He's not gonna hit Bill, is he? He sounds that kind of a bastard *shrugs*

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 11:09 am Title: I Want You To Show Me Love

:O WTF, he just had to go and ruin the scene! Damn Jorg :/ omg what will happen now? :O I hope he won't hurt neither of them! And... I fear something bad will happen when Tom spills the truth :/ uh, go on go on!

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 11:00 am Title: I Want You To Show Me Love

Oh My God!!! Go on!!!!

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 11:00 am Title: Ya Make Me Wanna Lala

I liked the 'twist'! :) seeing Tom moving in wouldn't be bad, at all ;) but how would Jorg handle the news...?

Reviewer: SacredMonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 10:58 am Title: I Want You To Show Me Love

Jorg, my goodness, can you please just NOT come home anymore? Haha. Loved it!

Reviewer: Midnatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 09:47 am Title: I Want You To Show Me Love

I love the smut, even if they didn't take it the whole way!^___^

And you're right, they shouldn't have sex after just one day, even though they want each other that badly...;*

Reviewer: MissHateBrazenGirls Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 09:16 am Title: I Want You To Show Me Love

I REALLY like xD
Nein Nein, I REALLY love =D
And I agree you can t have them have sex just a day after...I mean this isn't Romeo and Juliet xD...well i dunno if in the book there was a scene...but in the movie there was one implying that...oh well anyway...

Keep it up =D....Meeee wants MORE xD...
So, like satisfy me? *puppy eyes* xD

Reviewer: lililu7777777 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/08 10:19 pm Title: Ya Make Me Wanna Lala

oh i love it!

Reviewer: SacredMonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/08 09:44 pm Title: Ya Make Me Wanna Lala

Loved the twist! Totally makes the story even more interesting! Loved it!

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