Date: 07/19/08 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
This story is really good, I really like it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 07/19/08 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW...please write more:)
Date: 07/19/08 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oooooh more quick please lol xxxx
Date: 07/19/08 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
*Chants* Write, write, write. . .
Date: 07/19/08 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yay! I finally get to read more! xD
I feel kinda sorry for them...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 07/18/08 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
WRITE!!!!!!!!! this is amazing!!!
Date: 07/01/08 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
here is another bright and shiny review for you!!! i forgot to read this update!!! scheisse!!! more please...when are they gonna realise?? grr...mehr wenn du kannst...
Date: 06/25/08 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
My review is not so shiny, just black & white, but I would love if you would post more. I really like the starkness of this writing style.
Author's Response: I'll take black and white. Its all good! Thanks so much. It's a new style I am trying out so I am so glad it works!
Date: 06/25/08 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
this was so cute.
The last line, especially.
awww (:
Date: 06/25/08 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
AWWW! I hope they realize that how they both feel for each other!
Date: 06/25/08 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love how you kepy us waiting for this moment... but please hurry! The suspense is killing me!
Author's Response: thanks. more asap. i kind of want you to live so you can read it lol
Date: 06/25/08 10:38 am Title: Chapter 3
Yep, more, more. I'm giving you a bloody shiny review, so give me more chappies, specially since this one was so short...
Kiss, babe, and cookies for ya.
Author's Response: lol im on holiday soon but i will post more when i get back. pwomise.
Date: 06/25/08 10:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww I really enjoyed these first three chapters! I love the way it's written. Look foward to reading more. X
Author's Response: thanks so much. i will be on holiday for a couple of weeks but i shall post more when i get back.
Date: 06/25/08 09:45 am Title: Chapter 3
...shiny...
want more...shiny...
Author's Response: im going on holiday soon for 2 weeks and i don't know if i wil post before i go but i will deffo post more when i get back.
Date: 06/21/08 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Please write more! I beg you!
Date: 06/21/08 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
very good
Date: 06/19/08 01:40 am Title: Chapter 2
I like that ch 2 is pretty much an answer to ch 1. So then where do you go? I'm really interested to find out, and look forward to your update :)
Author's Response: thank you . yeah i am writing the story pov about. for now. read and you shall find out hehe
Date: 06/19/08 12:51 am Title: Chapter 2
this is just as good as the first chapter :)
I really like this
Author's Response: thanks so much.
Date: 06/18/08 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
it's touching, it's beutifull and it is entierly forbiden!
^^ i like it ;P
Author's Response: thanks. yeah forbidden love. i thought i would try lol. thanks for the review.
Date: 06/18/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
keep going!
it´s really great
I´m loving it...
Author's Response: i willrnthanks so much.rnxxxxxxx
