Date: 09/08/08 11:53 pm Title: Getting to Know you
keep writing, this chapter is beautiful!!!
Date: 09/06/08 11:26 pm Title: Getting to Know you
i thought that was cute with the orange, since thata Bill's fav colour lol! i really enjoy this story, apart form a VERY FEW mixed up words...like three in all these chapters this is like perfectly written, truthflly though i shouldn't be one to complain about mixed up words since i do it all the time, lol.
so please don't tkae me mentioning that, in the wrong way, i just apreciate when people critque my work, so i do my best to give what i would like to recieve...you know? lol
anyway, i love the plot to this story, and how you focus on her feelings, and memories, i like how you didn't rush into her and the boys getting to know eachother, it feels well timed. XD
hope you update soon
Author's Response: I'm actually really happy you caught the orange thing, since i completely put that in there for that reason. rnrnAnd thanks for mentioning the mixed up words! ^_^; I do that sometimes, to be honest before i reread i have ALOT more words that are all mixed up. I'm going to try to get better about that! And i'm super happy you liked it!!
Date: 09/06/08 10:41 pm Title: Home Comings
AW!!! kawai! i'm loving this story.
Date: 09/05/08 02:29 pm Title: Getting to Know you
Hmm. Well, I'm glad she got a new studio. It sounds great. And that part at the beginning was very telling about relationships (her's I mean).
Glad she's warming up to Bill.
Date: 09/04/08 10:48 pm Title: Getting to Know you
really excellent!! i love the description of her painting.
Date: 09/04/08 10:35 pm Title: Getting to Know you
eek!!! i love it. i would have commented on the other chapters but its really late and i have class tomorrow so i hope this comment will b enough for you to update!!! its an amazing story!!! thank you so much!!! i love it!!!
Date: 08/31/08 04:24 pm Title: Learning To Say Hello
Me loves it!!!
You have to update this!
Please!!
Date: 08/30/08 10:43 pm Title: Learning To Say Hello
moremoremore!
please:]
Date: 08/17/08 12:43 am Title: Learning To Say Hello
The effect Bill has on her is so funny. Does he know or does he think she just doesn't like him?
Date: 08/07/08 01:23 pm Title: Learning To Say Hello
your story is wonderful. at some parts i laughed so hard, i think i made my parent wander what's up with me. i just love it!
i'm looking forward for next chapters!
~BTW sorry for my horrible english, i not a native speaker :S~
Date: 08/07/08 04:14 am Title: Learning To Say Hello
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Author's Response: i take it you liked it then? ^_^'
Date: 07/24/08 12:10 am Title: Don't Look at Me
What happened last night? So lost.
She's having trouble w/ this bed isn't she? She should put pillows on the floor to cushion her fall.
She's got a great sense of humor. And what's wrong w/ squeaking? I hate being poked! I'm still tickelish for some sick reason (some one up there hates me).
Update soon.
Date: 07/23/08 04:59 pm Title: Don't Look at Me
this is totally gr8
update soon
ly
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Date: 07/23/08 02:33 pm Title: Every End Is Really A Beginning
lovely story
I'm fairly certain this is one of my favorite ones so far, so I was ecstatic that you where able to update again.
Date: 07/15/08 04:48 pm Title: Home Comings
eek eek squeeeeek!
Date: 07/13/08 04:06 am Title: Home Comings
Loved this chapter!
Date: 07/12/08 10:49 pm Title: Home Comings
Lovely ending to this chapter I must say. However I was fairly dissappointed that we didn't see more of a responce from tom upon meeting his new foster sister.
In the last chapter btw, I really loved the part where they were talking about the people they'd lost. It was kind of amazing actually. I had this smile on my face, from laughing about him having the pj's but then he said his sister was dead. My smile was gone so fast...
I was just really impressed. With both chapters actually.
Author's Response: To be honest, you'll see more of Tom next chapter. I'm pretty sure in the first rendition of this chapter he had a rather lengthy talk with Calli, but somewhere around the third write up of that particular scene(mind you it was at 3 a.m.) i just said screw it and decided to have Tom play a bigger role than planned in the next chapter to make it up to him. rnrnAnd Thank you! I'm really very happy you enjoyed this chapter!! =D
Date: 07/06/08 11:21 am Title: A Day Out
hey i really really like this! i can't wait for her to meet Bill and Tom. Please update :D
Author's Response: ^_^ Danke!
Date: 06/22/08 08:42 pm Title: A Day Out
Update soon pleaseee (: I LOVE IT!
Date: 06/22/08 03:41 pm Title: A Day Out
aww im glad she feels at home! this is getting really awesome!