Date: 08/28/08 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
dun dun dunnnnn *dramatic background musik*
Author's Response: Hehe :)
Date: 08/28/08 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
awwww )=
*is sad*
i'm really glad this happened, but i'm still really sad about it )=
and OMG! bushido tried to RAPE bill?!
*wants to help tom and bill out*
please update soon? (A)
Author's Response: Aw, yes. Will try.
Date: 08/28/08 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
OOOOO!!! WOW!! I don't think I can put my emotions into anymore words, so yeah. WOW!!
Author's Response: Hihihi ;P
Date: 08/28/08 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG... Someones PISSED at a certain Bushido. Poor Bill, Poor Tom :(
Author's Response: Aw, yes.
Date: 08/28/08 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh, oh, really good XD... and poor Samy u___u but... He deservs it XD
Anyway... I wanna read the part when Bushido trays to rape Bill owo (or maybe is in a previous chapter and I didn't read it @____@)
Author's Response: It was actually a story behind that... In reality, they were all just supposed to be pissed at Bushido, but the characters didn't fit to that, so I had to add that element of rape, so it hasn't ''happened'' in any chapters yet, but.... it will be more about that, yes. And thanks for your review :)
Date: 08/28/08 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
“Go on, Bill. Tell him what you told me,” Bill said, folding his arms.
ahh thought you ought to know :)
Author's Response: Hahah xD Whopsies. Thanks, I'll change it right away.
Date: 08/27/08 06:32 am Title: Chapter 9
OH MY GOD! HOT TEDDY SEX! Thank you so much! You're the best! So now, Samy won the bet. (I almost wrote bed... Ahahah, isn't that funny? Okay, I'm sick at the moment, so don't care about the...weirdness of his review :D You know, every time I need something to cheer me up, you've updated! It's magic! It must be!)
But now things won't go on so nicely? Am I right? There'll happen something horrible? When Tom finds out about the bet etc.
You know, I'd really like it, if the teddys would fall in love or something as fluffy as that :D
Okay, that's all, all my braincells have died 'cause of my flu so this wasn't too intelligent review... I'm so sorry! :D
Could you please continue...? *puppy eyes*
With love,
Gry
Author's Response: Hehe, he kind of won the bed, too ;P Aw, so glad my fics can cheer you up! Of course there has to be some drama... (a) Thanks for your review and get well soon! ;D
Date: 08/25/08 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 9
This was a good chapter even thought it was just sex, for some reason even though Tom said they could be gay for one night I think that Tom may like him a little more and yeah I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks :)
Date: 08/25/08 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
i dont care if its just sex
im ok ready just smut lmaoo
“But they have a hole made for just that!”
OH GOT!!!!!!!!!!!
im still laughing!!!!!
& remember
Author's Response: Haha, genious picture. And glad you laughed! ;D
Date: 08/25/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
OH MON DIEU!!
what the heck just happened there!!
THAT WAS AMAZING!! i would never have thought Samy would have won the Bet....
...WOW!!...
Author's Response: Hehe, glad you didn't see it coming ^^
Date: 08/25/08 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
OOOOOh i loved the sex scene *__*
"At three?" he asked, sounding like a little kid.
Hihi :D my lip is still bleeding after my face was trampled by laptop when I was laughing XD
Don't let Bushido fuck Bill x.x Tom and Sammy are at least fair, but Bushido... uhh.
please update soon!
buzi;*
Author's Response: Oh, God! I am so sorry xD
Date: 08/25/08 12:27 am Title: Chapter 9
And BINGO!!! Samy's won the bet!
Author's Response: He sure did :)
Date: 08/24/08 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
What do you mean whatev? THat was ultra hot!!!
Author's Response: Whatev is how I tend to say Whatever :)
Date: 08/24/08 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
*Funny, counting and then taking their shirts off xD
*“At three?” he asked, sounding like a little kid.
-> Whahaha, are you serious? They're counting again? xD lol
*Samy was enormous! No way was he having that thing injected anywhere in his body!
-> Woops, Tom is in panic! (I'd be too, yes even in my state of being a girl)
*“But they have a hole made for just that!”
-> You have a point, Tom!
*understanding why some women seemed to like this so much. Heck, he'd probably end up doing this again some day!
-> Giving a blowjob turns Tom on :p
*“You'd just make me come too soon,” Samy said,
-> I think Tom is pretty good at giving head.
*How deep was Samy's mouth, really, Tom had to ask himself. What he did not dare to ask was how short his cock was.
-> Awww, is Tomi a little insecure? I bet his size is just fine ;)
*Haha, that lube thing really sounds as something Georg would do xD
*The fact that Tom's penis was there, all proud and erect, bothered him a little.
-> What did you expect, Samy?
*That was pretty hot!
*“I guess we can be gay for one night,” he whispered.
“Sure thing,” Samy said and wrapped his arms around Tom and pulled him even closer.
And like that, they fell asleep.
-> Aww, such a lovely and cute ending!
Nice chapter!
Author's Response: Haha! This review had me laughing and giggling all the while reading it. Thanks! xD
Date: 08/24/08 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 9
haha that was prolly the best chapter ever but i really HAVE to know what bushido and bill were doing!!! ahhhh!
Author's Response: haha! Thank you so much! That will come in the next chapter :)
Date: 08/24/08 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter :D I wanna know if Bushido did his part of the bet too :P I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Hehe, could be, could be ;)
Date: 08/24/08 11:58 am Title: Chapter 9
*blows off steam* that was so sweet. i wonder what will happen now.... update next week too?
Author's Response: Hehe, will try ;) And DAMN YOU FOR BEATING ME TO THE SEX! :P xD
Date: 08/24/08 09:55 am Title: Chapter 9
sam wins!!! oh what is tom gonna do when he fidns out about the bet!?
Author's Response: Ah, you will see ;)
Date: 08/24/08 09:21 am Title: Chapter 9
Well well, seems like Samy won huh :-p
Nice, maybe a bit awkward sex :-p
But that only would make sense since well it Tom's first time with a guy and it's seems like it's the same with samy.
Well aren't they cute =D
I so want to know what will happen next so you go on, please! ^^
Author's Response: It was in my notes for this chapter; WRITE AWKWARD SEX! So, I guess I did what I tried to do ;)
Date: 08/24/08 03:26 am Title: Chapter 9
Gay for one night XDD
continue please :]
Author's Response: ;D