Date: 07/11/08 07:47 pm Title: Week 9
*Toms speech is so lovely and sweet and nice and and and..waw!
*You're so right about the eyebrow piercing, I got mine 4-5 months ago, and it didn't hurt much at all,I wont pierce my tongue either, my lip maybe :)
*“We never asked mom.”
And that’s how we happened to be grounded for the remaining of the summer.
-> haha, nice way to end the chapter :D
Date: 07/11/08 07:38 pm Title: Week 8
I'm glad they like Gordon :)
Damn, the bedroom-scene was so hot !!
Date: 07/11/08 07:24 pm Title: Week 7
I like how you described Bill and Tom not knowing what to talk about and feeling a little weird around each other.
Nice chance in the conversation, from serious to joking to serious again.
Well done!
Date: 07/11/08 07:17 pm Title: Week 6
Awww, I so love Bill being so insecure and Tom being so understanding and all, it makes my heart melt!
Date: 07/11/08 07:11 pm Title: Week 5
I'm pretty much speechless right now, wonderful chapter!
Love it!
Date: 07/11/08 07:02 pm Title: Week 4
“How come yours is bigger than mine?” I asked, pouting. -> haha
This was sweet, hot, a little sad, just awww :)
Lovely chapter.
Date: 06/27/08 06:40 am Title: Week 10
:D Great cute beautiful perfect ^^ What do you wanna hear :P lolz xD I loved reading this story and I'm sure I'm gonna read it again ^^
xx Chi
Date: 06/27/08 01:58 am Title: Week 10
I love it. I just don't want to be over. That really makes me sad. ):
Write another killer story?
Author's Response: Thank you!
rn&Maybe I will, who knows? (:
Date: 06/26/08 05:39 am Title: Week 9
Great chapter :D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Date: 06/25/08 09:50 am Title: Week 9
Hahahah, that last part really cracked me up XD Anyway. I love it :')
Date: 06/25/08 05:09 am Title: Week 9
Wow this be better and better..
Date: 06/25/08 12:33 am Title: Week 9
lmao. they didn't ask their mommy.
that's funny.
i'm happy to see Bill's better with their relationship. (: it makes me smile like this :D hehehe.
i can't wait for the next chapter, even if it is the last one. this story kicks butt. :)
Author's Response: hahaha (: I couldn't help but add "we never asked mom" XD rnand thank you! your comment made me smile like this :D too!
Date: 06/24/08 03:30 am Title: Week 8
Great chapter ^^ I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Date: 06/24/08 01:10 am Title: Week 8
YAY! Bill's finally happy with Tom and he acts it. I was hoping he wouldn't break poor Tom's heart. And he didn't. Oh, snap! There are still two chapter. He isn't going to break Tom's heart, is he? Nein! He can't. Oh, he can't. Update soon, I'm dying.
Author's Response: You'll see ;)
Haha, you know I love a happy ending (:
Date: 06/23/08 01:34 am Title: Week 7
Date: 06/22/08 09:15 pm Title: Week 7
god, i love it!
moreee?!
yeah, you have to, or you'd be killing someone.
lmao. ;D
great job.
Date: 06/22/08 09:10 pm Title: Week 7
Great chapter ^^ I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Date: 06/22/08 03:12 pm Title: Week 6
Great chapter :D:D:D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Date: 06/21/08 03:43 pm Title: Week 6
this comming to be good... really good...