Date: 10/23/08 01:19 am Title: Faltering Sexiness
Awww poor Gustav! Being tricked into the performance by Natalie!
And poor Mary! I hope she is ok.
As for Tom... Well he either has to trust Natalie or not be with a circus performer (though I'd be just as jealous myself ;) ).
Author's Response: Haha, Natalie and Mary just couldn't help themselves! You'll see if she is. Well, Tom justs wants to believe the situation was a set-up, so it's more of anger than jealousy.
Date: 10/22/08 08:39 pm Title: Faltering Sexiness
Good, very good indeed darlings. *smilez*
Author's Response: Thanks, we are very glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 10/10/08 08:18 pm Title: The Beginning
I like that this story has a unique vibe to it. There are a lot of cinderella storys on here, and while that can turn out quite well, its been done to often. I like the direction your story is going and it stands out from most things i've read on here. Can't wait to read more =D
Author's Response: Thank you very much! We truly wanted to write a story that would go into many unusual and unexpected directions. Cinderella stories are a good dose of sugar every now and then, but we're glad you agree that a change of sweetness is always lovely!
Date: 10/10/08 06:08 pm Title: A Public Affair
i love the way your so graphic with the choryography it really makes me see hteeses dances in my head
amazing chapter again loved it
update soon
ly
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Author's Response: We're glad that you can see the choreography - that's exactly what we want our readers to experience! Hope you are enjoying the story!
Date: 10/07/08 12:15 pm Title: Double Date
this was amzing i love this so much its actually so amzing i love it
dude i said that wice hehe
very nice
update soon
luv i t
ly
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Author's Response: We're really glad to hear that! Hope our updates are fast enough for you!
Date: 10/07/08 11:49 am Title: Double Date
Sex soon? :D
Haha no! :P I liked the chappie! I'm glad Tom and Natalie are ok despite Estelle and Robbie.
And poor Bill! Who ever thought a guy would want to wait for sex! XD
So I guess I should say: poor Mary! ;)
Keep it up! :D
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not... you never know what could happen! Haha, aww, he was just too nervous! We're very glad you liked it!
Date: 10/06/08 10:30 pm Title: Double Date
Awww... that was so sweet! I want more! Please? *begs like a puppy* lol.
Author's Response: Thanks! You should be able to read every few days or so!
Date: 10/06/08 09:59 am Title: Long Way to Happy
Awww I'm glad everything worked out! Though I doubt this was part of Estelle's plan... She just wanted to drive a wedge between Natalie and Tom, right? :P
And a great promotion for getting STD tests, even if you've only been with someone once! (Or even more if you've been with someone only once. Who knows how often they've been with someone only once!)
Keep up the good work, girls! :D
Author's Response: Well, you'll find out! ;) With some of the events that have occurred and will occur in this story, we felt it was important for the characters to be responsibly informed about the potential consequences. Thank you, Koos! We're glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 10/05/08 08:17 pm Title: Long Way to Happy
Aww, that was nice of Robbie to be so calm about this. I hope that Natalie and Tom will be able to be together. This is a really good story.
Author's Response: We're glad you enjoyed this! Well, Natalie promised Tom a date for being a good sport with the bet...
Date: 09/27/08 05:14 am Title: Two Solos And A Duet
Thanks for updating! Still loving this story!
Author's Response: That's good to know!
Date: 09/21/08 08:34 pm Title: Two Solos And A Duet
Aw. That was good! That was a cute song that Tom and Natalie sang, and I'm wondering who Gustav was searching for? Mary's song was awesome. Gotta love Alicia Keys!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Well, time may just tell... Absolutely, who couldn't love Alicia Keys?
Date: 09/21/08 04:37 pm Title: Two Solos And A Duet
this was super na haha i only just heard of the first song today and ere it is again ironic i think not
lol
loved it
updte soon
ly
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Author's Response: Wow, that is insanely ironic but fantastic!
Date: 09/21/08 04:12 pm Title: Two Solos And A Duet
Oh, that was cute. I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: 09/19/08 04:20 pm Title: The Phone Call and Locket
omg that was amazing i cant waIT FOR THat esstell bitch to dieee ekkk i hate her sorry i do
anywho update soon
love it
ly
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Author's Response: Thank you very much! Well, you're allowed to feel whichever way you want about Estelle, or any of the characters for the matter!
Date: 09/18/08 08:28 pm Title: The Phone Call and Locket
Ohhhhhhhhh, awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that was so cute, I can't tell you how much this story means to me. It's so adorable!!!
Author's Response: Aaaww, thank you very much! Your review was also very heart-warming! We're glad you enjoy the story so much!
Date: 09/16/08 01:58 am Title: Tabloid Jokes
Yeyy new chappie!
It really brightened my morning just now because I woke up with a realllllly sore throat. :( So it was nice to have something good and short to read (I love it that your chappies are always short, so they don't drag on and on and you find yourself scrolling down to see how much left XD).
I'm glad Natalie isn't falling for Estelle's obvious bullsh*t. I just hope Estelle doesn't run off with Tom...
Author's Response: Aww, that's wondeful that the chapter brightened your morning! I'm sorry to hear that you aren't feeling well and hope you get better! Thank you; we're glad that you feel that way! Hmm, maybe Estelle could be smart enough to make Tom think that he likes her more than Natalie... or maybe not!
Date: 09/14/08 02:15 pm Title: Tabloid Jokes
Great job! It's so cool. I'd die without this story, okay, maybe not die, but it's still really good. Add more and make meh happeh again!! XD
Author's Response: Wow, that's a powerful statement! We wouldn't want you to die, but we are very glad that you love the story so much!
Date: 09/12/08 05:23 am Title: Practice at Nine A.M.
Oooh what is Estelle up to??
I'm glad to see things are going well with Tom and Natalie! :D
More soon please!
Author's Response: You'll find out! Thanks for reading and reviewing, as always!
Date: 09/10/08 03:07 pm Title: Practice at Nine A.M.
this is great but i really wanna no the suckish sonng =[ this is amzing luv it
update soon
ly
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Author's Response: The song will be revealed soon. ;)
Date: 09/09/08 05:34 pm Title: Practice at Nine A.M.
Aw. That was cute! Plus, we get to know a bit more about Natalie.
Author's Response: We're glad to know you enjoyed it! That's very true.