Date: 07/10/08 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 7: Separation
Love it and your english is great! I hope Tom wasn't too drunk or going to regret this in the morning. I want him to feel the same way.
Author's Response: Thank you! I wish I could say something about what's going to happen, but of course, I'll keep it a secret. I'm so glad you love this! Thanks for reading and reviewing :D
Date: 07/10/08 02:14 am Title: Chapter 7: Separation
Love it. Seriously, your English is fine, better than half of the native English speakers. The emotion was so raw for Bill, the need, the fear, the helplessness against both. And oh my, Tomi was hot, being all commanding. Very nicely done. Thank you :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! *blushes* I'm very self-conscious about my English. I'm glad it's good! Yeah, I wanted Tomi to be all commanding cause that's how I have him pictured in my mind. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: 07/02/08 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 6: Truth
That pronouncement seemed to hit Tom pretty hard, but I though he felt similarly. I guess not...
Or maybe he's just hiding it from himself? The more optomistic explanation.
Will Bill be happy? W/ this relationship? In love w/ his brother, Tom knowing the truth, and nothing being done about it?
Update soon.
Author's Response: I'll try to update as soon as possible and make it as good as possible. You'll see what happens in the next chapters, but I think you'll like it :D Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/01/08 11:47 am Title: Chapter 5: Cover Up
Gah. -headdesk- -pants- That was hot. Really, really hot. -brain is mush- Sorry, can't think of anything else to say. Except that Bill should really tell Tom. -nods-
Author's Response: Haha, thank you SO much! You should read the next chapter, then. I just updated this story. Here comes the truth! *dundundunnn* Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06/28/08 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 5: Cover Up
I hope they still stay together! Love is love! You can't help that!
Author's Response: Hehe, I know! Love is love. Thanks for reading and reviewing ^^
Date: 06/28/08 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 5: Cover Up
I loved this chapter! They finally made out, and more! But they're so going tregret it. At least that's the way it sounds. Which is too bad b/c they seem so happy. More please!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'll update as soon as I can. Prepare for the drama! Thanks for R&R =D
Date: 06/28/08 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 5: Cover Up
Loved it!
Author's Response: Danke! I'm glad you love it :D
Date: 06/25/08 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 4: Lies
I don't know what your talking about, your english is great. As was this chapter. What's holding Bill back now? It's obvious that Tom returns his feelings. Update soon.
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you SO much! I try ^^ Don't worry, you'll see things are going to get better eventually. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06/25/08 10:42 am Title: Chapter 4: Lies
Loved it!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you love it! =D Thanks for R&R!
Date: 06/25/08 10:22 am Title: Chapter 4: Lies
good!
Author's Response: Danke schön! :D
Date: 06/16/08 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Fantasy
awwww soo cuuute!!!! more please...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll try to upload as soon as possible. Stay tuned!
Date: 06/16/08 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Fantasy
love it cant wait to read wut happens next keep it up
Author's Response: I'm glad you love it! Thanks for R&R. And I'll update as soon as I can.
Date: 06/16/08 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Fantasy
I want an older bro like Tom
Author's Response: Who doesn't, now? ^^
Date: 06/16/08 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Fantasy
this is good
Author's Response: Danke schön!
Date: 06/16/08 11:02 am Title: Chapter 3: The Fantasy
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
THIS STORY IS AMAMZINGGGGGGGGGGGG
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favorite times a bajillion!!!!!!!!
poor billa :[ all confused and scared!
:P
Author's Response: Haha, wow. Thank you so much! *hands cookies and gummy bears*
Date: 06/16/08 06:40 am Title: Chapter 3: The Fantasy
Awww that's so sweet, cuddles and gummy bears. Bill should have cried everyday just to get Tomi treat him this way.
Author's Response: I know, right? But we all know Bill's not like that... I guess!
Date: 06/16/08 04:54 am Title: Chapter 3: The Fantasy
aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
this story is a turn on!!! xD
mooooooreee
Author's Response: Haha! I'll update as soon as I can. Danke schön für R&R!
Date: 06/13/08 11:49 am Title: Chapter 2: That was close
i loved it wow that was close lol so write another soon dont give up just b/c there aint many reviews who care really as long as u have people reading that love the story
Author's Response: Thanks! And you're right... but don't worry, I won't stop reading cause I'm actually happy how this story is turning out. Thank you sooo much for reading and reviewing! *hands cookies*
Date: 06/13/08 10:10 am Title: Chapter 2: That was close
OOO! I want to see what happens next! I hope Tom feels the same!
Author's Response: Woo! Don't worry... I'll upload soon and I think people will be pleased with the next chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing! *gives cookies*
Date: 06/13/08 07:32 am Title: Chapter 2: That was close
takes the cookies.. ^_~
poor Bill with raging hard on.. come on Bill, i think Tom feels the same way
Author's Response: *gives more cookies* Bill needs to calm down, doesn't he? Thanks for reading and reviewing!