Date: 06/14/08 01:05 pm Title: Tom's Flabbergasted
OMG that car and bike'd totally suit him ^^ and I like the story :)
Author's Response: :D thanks!
Date: 06/14/08 11:25 am Title: Tom's Flabbergasted
hahaha its good!!
Author's Response: thank you!!
Date: 06/10/08 10:30 pm Title: Bill Passes
you should totally continue! it's awesome. and yes, twincest! keep up the good work on this!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! I've got like, half a page done for chapter two, and hopefully I'll update sometime in the near future. x33
Date: 06/09/08 11:46 pm Title: Bill Passes
YES YES!! On both!
Continue it please und twincest would be so hott!
Please?!
I love it so far!!!
Author's Response: hah, I shall continue. :D thanks for the review!
Date: 06/09/08 10:41 pm Title: Bill Passes
OMG!! So, hot!! The car and bike fit Bill perfectly!! I can't wait to see the other boys' reactions when they see Bill on the bike!!
Twincest please!! I can just imagine Tom's face, his jaw slack as Bill pulls up and gently tugs off the helmet (Total Baywatch-ish moment, hair flying around gently, you know??). As Bill gives him a coy smile.......
Ok, I'll stop now. Anyways can't wait for the next piece!! +Fav
Author's Response: *fantasizes about Bill on Baywatch* I'm going to have the BEST dreams tonight, man! haha. oh, Tomi's gonna get a surprise alright. ;) "Bill.. where's your car?" ... "At the shop, Tomi." ... "How'd you get here, then?" ... "hehe, my pretty bike..." ... *faints*...rnrnOkay, now I need to stop, or I'll write the whole teaser chapter here. and you might want that, but I don't wanna ruin the fun. :D thanks for the review!! x33
Date: 06/09/08 10:26 pm Title: Bill Passes
Naaah! Never mind that! It's your story and your universe! Anthing can happen! Remember that! And if you say that there's only one licens for the car and the bike, then that's the way it is! Going to sleep now, and hopefully dream of Bill on that bike. lol!
Author's Response: haha, thanks. I'll try to remember that.rnrnsweet dreams, and remember, Bill's motorcycle is black and sleek. he's wearing a black helmet that's also sleek. he's wearing black clothes with sleek black hair. his eyes with make up, while he's grinning insanely is like seeing into the vortexes of sexy hell, and man, you better have some good dreams. cuz I know I will. hahaha.. ;) rnrnI know, what I said above made no sense. but I was having fun naming sleek and black things.
Date: 06/09/08 08:34 pm Title: Bill Passes
twincest would be great and vehicles are SEXY
i love your story so far :)
Author's Response: ooit ooit, someone loves my story! haha. that's what I was thinking (the sexy part) when I saw those two cars. they schrei Bill! ;PrnrnThanks for the review! x3
Date: 06/09/08 08:24 pm Title: Bill Passes
OMG the car and bike are heavenly :o. I could so imagine Bill riding both. (wow that sounded slightly dirty :]) But I like the chapter very much. Can't wait for the update. -Toasty
Author's Response: maybe Bill should ride them... *giggle* aren't they hawt? when I saw them, I was like, "OMG BIIIIILLL!!!" (well, I thought that at least, with a HUGE squeal to add)rnrnThanks, and I shall update!
Date: 06/09/08 05:07 pm Title: Bill Passes
all I can say is HOLY SxxT I WANT THAT CAR AND THAT BIKE and yes I think you should continue the story and yes there should be twincest^_^
Author's Response: your thoughts are my command, Akuji. ;)
Date: 06/09/08 05:06 pm Title: Bill Passes
NO NO NO NO TWINCEST! Sorry, I just don't like that stuff. I'd still read the story, but I wouldn't enjoy it as much LOL Good Story, and the car is so sexy, just like Bill :P Bill would need to take a seperate driving test to get a motorcycle license, but who cares, it's fiction ;)
Author's Response: yeah... someone told me about the license thing... :\ my bad. if I choose twincest, it'd be fairly light, so hopefully I wouldn't scare you off. just a peck, here or there, y'know? not total sex-a-holics. (even though... that'd be SO hawt! O_O) thanks for the review, though!! x33
Date: 06/09/08 04:54 pm Title: Bill Passes
Its good
Author's Response: thanks! or danke! or uhm, gracias! or uh... well, just thanks! hehe.
Date: 06/09/08 04:37 pm Title: Bill Passes
i LOVE the bike!!!!! sleek ans sexy the both of them!!! twincest? you choose (but its always nice - i prefer a bottom tomi ) qontinue? definitely!!!
Author's Response: I like it when both take turns bottoming. ;) Yeah, thought it was really pretty so I chose it. :D I think I might go into the twincest. thanks for the review!!!!
Date: 06/09/08 04:36 pm Title: Bill Passes
I like it! Especially the idea of Bill on a Bike. There's just one thing that's nagging me here.
You'd have to take two different licens; one for the car and one for the bike.
Author's Response: oh shoot. really? dammit. MY BAD! I'm really sorry 'bout that, I had NO idea. O_O I hope you won't mind that I can't really change it now... because like, I dunno, that'd change the story... :( sorry if it bugs you. I really am. if I had any idea I'd rewrite it to be that way. I hope you'll still enjoy the story, though.
Date: 06/09/08 04:18 pm Title: Bill Passes
You should continue, it was rather good like. If you do, there MUST be twincest.
Author's Response: that's what I was thinkin. :D ;P they're just too hawt to pass up, y'know?