Date: 09/28/08 09:17 am Title: Chapter 8
Xavier. :]
What made you think of that?
I absolutely love it! :D:D:D
And Bill and Tom are sooooo cute in this story.
I'm totally in love. ^_^
Author's Response: Yeah, it's cute. :] I don't know. I was thinking Alexander and I was like 'No... more creative Erika! Hmm.... XAVIER!' Lmao. :} Thanks for reviewing. :]
Date: 09/27/08 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
FUCKING HELL! O: you endet it like that?! *freaks out*
God, I was sad while reading the last chapter, because it's the end and how it ended D:
Yeah, so I love the B/T ending a lot - amazing! But the whole Colin maybe coming back and causing trouble for the happy couple? I don't like that at all. It kinda puts a black cloud into the otherwise bright sky. It was by far a fabulous ending, actually. You wrote it so good. I like that it wasn't all ONLY happiness, but also the black cloud.
You just wanna smash Colin and Steve's heads together and let them rot in hell. But yeah, still amazingly written.
And the last line: "Causing pain is still fun, right?" - makes you wonder soo much, and the 'right' is soo questioning and playful. God.
I like how you wrote the whole relationship with Bill and Tom - you come in and know that they have been chatting for some time on Wonderfull Match, and then you just kinda see them develope.
You have written Tom so good - he's not the popular guy (as you see in most fics) - I love that. And God, he really need to give that Colin fellar a good old beat down. (if he don't I sure as hell will D:).
But then again, I think it's good that Tom isn't all beating the crap out of him (even though he should), and still is very understanding of what Bill.
I like that Tom's showing his fellings, like crying in the church, and not being cold.
The fact that you wrote Tom a little unexperienced, I really like. Like when Bill tried to french kiss him, and Tom pulled away - yeah, I liked that. (not meaning that I don't want dirty stuff xD)
Bil is so cute in this fic. But God, you made me fall in love with him, when he stood up to Colin at the car. He is normally portraied as the weak one, and I don't really like that. And here he isn't - love it.
When Bill was the one to try an go further in the kissing department, I was like rooting for him - it's unusual to see Bill taking lead. Amazing!
Mallory's a bitch. I just simply hate her. Bitchy much? At a certain time, it's like you thought she might cahnge, but then she turned back to good old bitchy mommy.
Aw, Norma's so cool, and when she said: “Get that lip gloss off your lips too” and “Oh, you’re boyfriends a looker" she soo won over my heart - overly cool grandma!
I have loved this fanfic since I started reading it. I remember when I first saw this fic I was debating on wether to read this or not. I had read so many other 'match' kinda ff's, but God, I'm so glad I read this. This has an amazing plot, and this actually is one of the few AU's that I like. I really like AU's, but I'm picky, but this particular AU makes me utterly amazed and I'm addicted, soo yeah. I love this.
Now I know never to doubt any fic, with the name, tokiobillhotel, written as the author upon it.
What made me fall in love with this fic, I think, what probably the way you wrote Bill and Tom's relationship - the way it blossomed. You wrote it perfectly - not too fast, and not too eiter, just perfect.
And also the way you wrote Tom, absolutely in love with this fic.
GOD! I can't wait for the sequel! O: I have already set my phone to beep me, with sign saying: "UNPREPARED!". I'm soo excited, and scared, too..
There's a loooong time until the October the 3rd O: like almost a WEEK! D:
Buuuuut I can't wait! *spazzes* I loved this fic to the death, aand I'm sure that "Unprepared" will kick some serious ASS! XD
You're an amazing writer! :)
So much for long review D: sorry, will review the sequeal better than this, promise.
Much love from da Sakiness xD
Author's Response: I'm actually speechless. I have no idea how to reply to this kind of review. I sort of feel like your bowing at my feet, kissing my toes because you gave so much praise to it. I'm blown away that you liked it so much. "Now I know never to doubt any fic, with the name, tokiobillhotel, written as the author upon it." I love you. That made me feel wonderful. No one has EVER said something like that to me. Thank you, Saki. :] You really made me feel great about this story. :] I hope to see your reviews more often when 'Unprepared' is posted. Thanks for the utterly amazing (and longest) review ever. ♥ You get lots of love back. :DDDD Erika
Date: 09/26/08 05:11 am Title: Chapter 10
Next Friday is 3rd October? Woooowwww..
Author's Response: Yep yep. :] Thanks for reviewing. xDDDDD
Date: 09/25/08 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love you for making a sequel to this story, I don't know what I would be reading if you didn't. And I can't believe how this chapter ended. And I don't know how I am going to make it until october 3rd.
Author's Response: You'll make it, dear. :] Read something else by me? Haha. That's my only idea. I may actually post it on October 2nd, just because I want people to say Happy Birthday in the reviews. :] Hahaha. I'm greedy. Thanks for reviewing. :DDDDDD
Date: 09/25/08 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
i really like this story :) yay, sequel!
Author's Response: :D I'm glad. And yes, YAYAYAYA! xD Hahahaha. ;]
Date: 09/25/08 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
Colin = dead!
DD:
I will kill him, haha.
Author's Response: You have fun with that, Ivy. :] Thanks for reviewing. :DDD
Date: 09/25/08 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
haha that would be totally rad!
happy almost birthday!
Author's Response: :D Thank you.
Date: 09/25/08 03:29 am Title: Chapter 10
GAH! I loved the update!
I want the sequel!!! Please!
What happens???
Author's Response: Just wait and see. :] The sequel comes out October 2nd. :D Thanks for reviewing. :)
Author's Response: I meant October 3rd. xD
Date: 09/24/08 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
:D oh so corny! I LOVE IT! can't wait for the sequel
Author's Response: The sequel comes out October 3rd. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/24/08 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG this is so mean!!! how could end a stroy like that!!! i want to know more!! lol really good story tho :)
Author's Response: The sequel comes out October 3rd. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/24/08 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
GOD I need now the sequel, and I mean it, NOW. This is just too good.
Author's Response: Sorry, luff. October 3rd. :] Thanks for reviewing. xD
Date: 09/24/08 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
Noooo, the last one :( I really liked this story =)
Author's Response: Sequel will be posted on October 3rd. :] thanks for reviewing. xD
Date: 09/24/08 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
:O:O:O
Regardless of the...worrying? last few lines, I'm well buzzing!
*dances* *sings* SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL, SEQUEL SEQUEL SE-QUEL!
Woop.
Before I review, and review properly, I want to tell you how sweet your authors note was! I was like *o*!
It's sad to see this end, but brilliant to know there's a sequel on it's way. *buzzes*
I adored how you wrote the characters in this. Every last one of them, even though some deserved to be killed, preferable by a very fast train, but I still loved how you wrote them.
Bill, I was glad that, for once, Bill wasn't the hated/ignored one. Sure, I know there are other fics like that, but they're usually wrote badly, or wrote well, but everything happens so fast, and they're too short.
I though that what you did with his mother was really good, like, being there for him yet at the same time not, forgetting about him and what not, but still loving him alot.
Also, back to the first point, I love even more that he wasn't Mr. Popularity, even though he could be. That he chose solidarity and a close relationship with someone over having god only knows how many friends, but nothing deep and meaning full. I like that, alot.
Saying that, how you still had him as vulnerable, and not closed off and cruel, made it all the more better.
Tom, once again, a change from the norm. I loved it in this, sometimes, it's done all wrong, in this it wasn't. Usually, if Tom's the one with little to no friends, then he automatically becomes weak and needs to be saved, with isn't something I agree with. Sure, if it fits the story, I agree with it, but not in something like this.
I'm still rooting for him to beat the shit out a few people. *cough* Colin (and Steve now) *cough* It'd be him doing it in Bill's honour, which makes me heart melt and my chest tingle. I like that.
So if you could do that, I'd well buzz, even though, it's your fic, and it's up to you what you do, but I'm sure I'll love whatever you choose to do. After the initial pouting and whining.
How you've wrote Bill and Tom are probably my two of my favourite ways to write them in an AU.
Now, onto the dirty slag, Mallory.
Even though I hate her, she fit in perfectly.
She gave them (Bill and Tom) to open up to each other, share more things.
If she hadn't been like she was then things wouldn't have been the same, so...in a sense, I'm glad that she was in. Well, sort of. I still think she needs to bugger off and die, as she just pure fails at fucking life.
Norma, even though she was only in it for a few paragraphs, and only in a few chapters, I loved her! She was such a sweetheart!
I felt so sorry for her, loosing her husband and what not. Bless her heart, easily the best grandparent I've read on here.
Oh, that was something else I meant to add, you wrote an abusive mother, not an abusive father, very, very, nice touch. It's original to say the least, and in my opinion, a lot better to read. There was no chance of Tom hitting her back like he would with a man, it just wasn't in the Tom that you wrote.
I've adored the fluff in this, every last single little word! I can't get enough of the stuff.
I really can't wait until the sequel, this was beyond great!
Author's Response: I couldn't stop this. It needed a new story for the new drama. :] I'm glad you did because really, if it weren't for you and your long ass reviews -coughcough- then I probably wouldn't have thought about doing another one. I'm so very glad you liked how it was written. I put a lot of my time -mainly homework time- into this to keep all my little readers happy and coming back for more. I as well, like how I did Bill and Tom's character. Still their personalities with some tweaks. :] Norma, Mallory, Colin and Steve are all going to be in the next story! :D Exciting, right? Well, for Norma is it. Hahaha. Mallory, Colin and Steve have some issues. Oh, a heads up for the next story, more Simone. ;] Hahhaa. Abusive mother, thumbs up! xD Tomi doesn't have a daddy anyways. Haha. He left..? I think, I don't remember. Hahahaha. Well thanks for your wonderful reviews throughout this story. They mean a lot to me and always make me smile. PLAN ON SEEING THE SEQUEL ON OCTOBER 3RD! :DDDD Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/24/08 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
i want the update noowwwwww! please? :)
Colin is a wanker! and Steve is just... ugh. I don't like him at all.
Author's Response: Sorry, luff. You'll have to wait like everyone else. But keep your eyes open the sequel will be posted on October 3rd. :] Colin and Steve shall die, correct? Hahaha. Thanks for reviewing. :DDDDDD
Date: 09/24/08 08:28 am Title: Chapter 10
I love this story, and I am so happy that you are making a sequel! :D
I`ll be waiting.
Author's Response: Sequel will be posted on October 3rd. :] thanks for reviewing. xD
Date: 09/24/08 06:16 am Title: Chapter 10
pleze hurry w/ da sequel!!!!!
Author's Response: Sequel will be posted on October 3rd. :] thanks for reviewing. :]
Date: 09/23/08 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
NOO! Don' be a meany Colin! Anxiously waiting!
Author's Response: Lmao. Sequel will be posted on October 3rd. :] thanks for reviewing. xD
Date: 09/23/08 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 10
You so did not just leave us hanging like that!! You're evil! Boo for evil colin and friend, yay for sequel! ^^ I am so looking forward to the sequel!! But I really really really really HATE colin and Co. Grr! anyway, Awesome story can't wait for the sequel! yay! ^^v
Author's Response: Hehehe. :] Sequel will be posted on October 3rd. :] thanks for reviewing. xD
Date: 09/23/08 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
you're evil =.= xD
I got all excited that they were FINALLY back together, but now this? :O
Well now I have to read the sequel! I can't wait :D
Author's Response: I know I am. :] Yepyep. Not every relationship is perfect, love. Things are going to go wrong, couples will fight and break up and people will try to ruin it. Hahaha. :] Sequel will be posted on October 3rd. :] thanks for reviewing. xD
Date: 09/23/08 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 10
omggggggg dont let steve and colin ruin it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love this story, i hate colin and steve tho!
>.
Author's Response: I hate them too and I freaking wrote this! :P Sequel will be posted on October 3rd. :] thanks for reviewing. xD