Date: 09/07/08 02:28 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG!!!! I love this story sooo much!!!!
Author's Response: OMG! I love reading reviews that say that. Lmao. Thanks so much for reviewing. :DDDDDD
Date: 09/07/08 01:11 am Title: Chapter 8
gosh your story is so wonderful, i really enjoy it!! :DD and this chapter was not lame at all...and im starting to really really NOT like mallory at all. grrrrrr!
Author's Response: Mallory is a bitchy mary-sue. :DDD Ahh shit. Haha. Lmfao. Thanks for reviewing. :DDD
Date: 09/07/08 12:03 am Title: Chapter 8
Lame chapter? NONSENSE! =]
That was awesome. Bill wishing on a shooting star was so cute! I hate Mallory, though. What is she, bipolar or something?! XD Anyway, I'm glad Tom is holding his own, and standing up for Bill.
I loved the chapter! It was great! Update soon!
Author's Response: Aww, well thanks so much! :D My story loves you for the reviews. :DDD
Date: 09/06/08 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 8
this story is soo amazing ! i loveee itttt
Author's Response: Aww! Danke! :DDDDD
Date: 09/06/08 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
I really like this story ^^ Bill and Tom are so sweet together, and I like a story that shows Tom with little experience :P
Mallory is such a bitch!
Author's Response: Hahaha. I love Tom/Bill stuff. ^_^ Hahahaah. Anyways, I hate Mallory. Haha. Thanks for reviewing. :DDDDDDD
Date: 09/06/08 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
lame? LAME?!?!?! this chapter was fucking amazing! like seriously i think its my favorite chapter yet. so i totally knew mallory wasnt just going to let bill and tom fly. and im actually really happy about that i like obstacles. they make relationships stronger and it causes sexual tension, which means its even better when they finally get to be together. plus i like hating characters and she's so easy to hate. now even though i said i liked obstacles i do not like great wall of china obstacles. more like the fence dividing mexico and the us. an obstacle thats slightly challenging to over come but not overly challenging. because those get old and frustrating. im so excited for the next chapter!!! you dont even know. so update soon before i jump out of my skin from excitement!
Author's Response: I love Mallory's bitchiness and I mad her to be hated. ^_^ They needed a good obstacle huh? I mean, living so far wasn't bad enough. Lmao. Anyways, I love the Mexico and US border fence thingy, that made me giggle. I'm starting to fall in love with your review, fyi. Thanks for reviewing, dear. ;DDD
Date: 09/06/08 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
:D
I loooooove it.
Author's Response: :D That's great! Thanks for reviewing! :DDDDD
Date: 08/29/08 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
*claps* aw that was a very fluffy chapter if not a bit fast... I kind if miss Tom's mother being a huge bitch, but I think your bit of forshadowing is leading up to it.
mwahaha
Anyway wow, very long thank you not you have there 0_0
Okay can't wait for an update, love love love love love
PS Tom crying was major win, and sweetness
Author's Response: Fluff is nice from time to time. :) Haha. Just wait and see about Mallory. ;) I'm happy you 'love love love love love' it. :] Thanks for reviewing. ;DDDD
Date: 08/28/08 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
This chapter was sweet. Can't wait to see what happens At Norma's house.
Author's Response: Hehehe. Fun shizz. xDDD Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 08/28/08 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
They boys are dating. Lalala. ~breaks out in a happy dance~ I'm so happy for them. [:
Author's Response: I know! ^_^ So cute right?! :D Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 08/28/08 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill is not moving. I won't allowed it!
Author's Response: Hahahaha. Too bad. :PP Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 08/28/08 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm guessing you have 'I. Am. Blown. Away.' like that for effuses. Haha. It wasn't that depressing but it was sad because I know how you feel. I'm glad you didn't skip it. [: Good job! MOREE!
Author's Response: Hehehe. Yesss. I'm glad it wasn't depressing but it was sad. :) Hehe. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 08/28/08 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
They met and kissed?! What the fuck!? I wasn't expecting that... Haha. But it's not a bad thing. I'm really happy
Author's Response: Hehehe. Yes they did. But if you noticed, they only kissed twice. Haha. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 08/28/08 09:01 am Title: Chapter 7
OH MY GOD.....
I really really really love this fic....
Great Job...
Sorry if the english isn't very good, but I'm from Portugal
kiss
Author's Response: You're English is fine. :) Hehehe. Thanks for reviewing. :DDDDD
Date: 08/28/08 12:55 am Title: Chapter 7
Ahh you're amazing!!
Author's Response: No you are amazing! Thanks for reviewing! :DDD
Date: 08/27/08 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh my, it was so cool seeing what you had on "Thank you!" and "Holy crap!". I'm glad you're happy.
As for the funeral scene, I think you did well by not having it too sad. Because this fic is light and by that I mean the blossoming of a relationship between two teens that found each other throught WonderfulMatch. Having a really tearful funeral could make it heavy...and make me cry!
Author's Response: I totally understand what you mean. I was trying to get the point across that it was sad without everyone bawling. Lmao. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 08/27/08 03:28 am Title: Chapter 7
My internet lost connection while I was writing my reivew D: Ugh, I don't remember what I had written -_-'
Just that it was long, and I actually think it had a meaning O.o (never saw that one coming did you? xD)
It's really sweet. I'm happy you didn't skip the funeral. And you let Tom cry, a little bit :P
But how is the relationship going to work if they live so far away from each other? D: I mean... it's hours away O.o
Anyway, great story, you deserve every single review you get, it's awsome! :]
Author's Response: Ugh, isn't that the worst? That happens a lot to me right before I post a chapter. :P Aahahahahahahah. You'll have to wait and see what I do to torture them next. :) But I will tell you, the next chapter shouldn't have too much bad happen. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 08/27/08 01:21 am Title: Chapter 7
awww im so sorry you lost your uncle...i know how you feel cuz i lost a guy who was like a brother to me this year and reading the funeral scene brought back his funeral... i really loved this ch tho!!!
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it and I'm sorry for your friend... Thank you for reviewing. :)
Date: 08/26/08 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
*dies all over your thank you note*
You're so sweet!
:DD
I really loved the part where Tom's grandmother totally caught him with the lipgloss all over his lips. I laughed a bunch. I think you did a good job of not making the chapter super depressing or anything. It was a very nice balance.
Amazing job as usual!!! Is this review number 100?!??! I sure hope so!
Author's Response: Hehe. I'm happy you liked it. :) He's going to get caught many more times too. ;) That's good. :DD Thank you times a million, you are my 100th review. :DDDD
Date: 08/26/08 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 7
im sorrya bout your uncle, but im so not sorry at all that i started reading this, just a little sorry i waited this long to start. anyway great story. its so cute and the funeral was nicely described. not to depressing but you got the greif across. great job. im looking forward to more. : )
Author's Response: Awww. :D Thank you. I'm happy you liked it. :)