Date: 09/21/08 02:37 am Title: Chapter 9
I've said it once, and I will say it again... Mallory's going down. I will punch her... and not lightly either, haha.
Only one more chapter?!! I'm kind of sad, lol.
D:
Author's Response: You honestly hate her, don't you? Lmao. :] Well that's okay. She'll be dead with the rest of this story soon... Haha. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/21/08 12:19 am Title: Chapter 9
A-freaking-mazing ladeh ladeh!!! Ahhh love. I'll email you soon.
Author's Response: :D Thank you so much! :D Didn't you just love my question? hahahahaha. i think death could be fun. :) Everyone reading this is probably like, WHAT THE EFF? WHO IS DYING!? well, it's none of their business. Thanks for helping. :)
Date: 09/20/08 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
ooooh loveddd it
and mallory needs to stop being a bitch! >.
Author's Response: That's what I said. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 09/20/08 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
Goodness! Is it wrong for me to want to curb-stomp Tom's mom? Because I reeeeeally want to! *growls* For a second there, I thought Bill was gonna like, break up with Tom or something. I was like, "NOOOOO!"
And, yeah. Still pretty mad about the whole "Oh, guess what? Only ONE chapter leeeffftt!" thing. *sticks out tongue*
Great chapter, though =] *haha*
Author's Response: Brooklyn smile is better. ^_^ And I'd never ever make them break up. I just want Tom's mom to be a bitch again. :] Yes, one more chapter and MAYBE an epilogue, I haven't decided yet. Thank you very much. :]
Date: 09/17/08 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER!
I think you really took it up a notch with this chapter, usually I think you're writing is so/so (sorry :'( ) you really out did yourself with this chapter.
I loved it, update soon!
'Sorry for the kinda lame chapter.' *scoff* tch, lame chapter my ass!
Author's Response: I didn't really think this chapter was anything special... Lmfao. Thank you though! :D Thanks for reviewing, luff. Your reviews make me smile. :DDDD
Date: 09/16/08 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
i love them!!!
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 09/16/08 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
mmmm... what is going on with mallory??
Author's Response: hahaha. thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 09/16/08 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
yyeeeyyy!! ... i'm waiting for tommi to kill them
Author's Response: lmao. He will. :D Maybeeeeee! :D Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/16/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
yyyyeeeeeyyyyy!!! they are gonna meet each other!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/16/08 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG i love both of them!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/16/08 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
gosh! i just wanted him out of his mom's house
Author's Response:
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/16/08 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG where did u put tommi?!!?
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/16/08 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
thats bill's face!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/10/08 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
*smiles* I loved this chapter! Fuck Tom's mom though lol. Aww and Tom called Bill "baby" that makes me happeh....That video clip of him licking his lip ring never gets old *smirks*
Author's Response: :] I'm happy you did. :D I know, I've gotta surprise about bitch! :DDD SHES A MAN! no not really, i'll have the surprise in the next chapter or one after that. oh, only about three or four more chapters. :P Hahaha. I thought that was cute too. :D Hahaha. thanks for reviewing. :]
Date: 09/08/08 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love Tom's middle name. I hope Bill and Tom can live together soon enough.
Author's Response: Me too! :D But it's totally made up. :P Hehe. Only about three or four more chapters. Just wait it out. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 09/07/08 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG that was such a great ch!!!!
i love your fanfic so much!!
Author's Response: Aww, that's so sweet. :DDD Thanks so much. :]
Date: 09/07/08 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG.
GREAT CHAPTER!
p.s tom's mom is a bitch.
xD
Author's Response: ^_^ I know. Thanks for reviewing. :DDDD
Date: 09/07/08 07:34 am Title: Chapter 8
*grins* that so wasn't lame!
Orrr it were well good.
So fluffy, even the slag-head, Mallory, just made it more fluffy. If that makes sense?
Meh, I hope it does.
Before I even think about reviewing properly, I have something to say. ONLY A FEW MORE CHAPTERS! Nope. I refuse to believe it. Now, I can, and will, believe it, if you say that there's going to be a sequel. Then I'll let it slide.
If there isn't a sequel you'll have ALOT of angry abc's coming after you.
Think about it, me as a person, and letters chasing after you.
Is it really worth it?
I think not.
Kill Mallory, please? Have her get off the train back in their town and fall onto the tracks? Please
I really don't like her
It's like she's got a fucking multiple personality disorder.
You don't know how much I really do love this. You've wrote it pretty much perfectly in my opinion.
It's not cringe-worthy either, which is a massive plus in my books.
I really hope Tom gets all possessive and beats the shit out of everyone who's a cunt to Bill. *pouts* pwease let him do that.
If you do, I may just go mad in my next review. Even though I'll try to tone it down.
I think, and I probably am, repeating myself too much.
But I fucking adore this!
I think I need to apologize, this was kinda a shitty review, but, meh, a review is a review. My next one will be better. I hope. Please update soon.
Author's Response: First of all, damn, that's a long review. I'm happy that it wasn't lame. :) I'm so sorry, abc, but ever story - good or bad - must end. I may have a lot of angry abc's coming after me then. :P Kill her? No because I can tell you no one likes character death, even if it's the bitchy mother. ^_^ I do have a plan for her, though. :D Tom'll be so possessive it'll blow your mind, don't worry. ^_^ I absolutely love reading your reviews, they always always make me smile. This was no where near a shitty review. Thanks so much for reviewing. :DDD
Date: 09/07/08 04:48 am Title: Chapter 8
I'd like to say that your writing has really changed since the beginning of this story. It's only gotten better and better, and that's awesome. I just wanted to let you know!!
On to my normal review: I really liked Bill and Tom under the stars. That was so freakin sweet. I don't know if I can survive the two of them being apart for two weeks... and Mallory needs to go die... okay, not die... but just get hurt... slightly.
:/
Author's Response: >_> I'm hoping that's a good thing. Thanks. :DD Them under the stars was pretty cute, aye? I got the idea from a friends story, lmao. ^_^ Hey, don't worry, I'm bringing that down a bit so it won't be like 14 chapters more like three or two. Haha. Mallory will get slightly hurt, no worries dear. ^_^ Thanks so much for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/07/08 03:09 am Title: Chapter 8
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww. that is so cute. mallory is an extreme bitch. she needs to get hit by a train. well maybe not something that extreme but she should be taught a lesson. that is a horrible thing to do to anyone in oyur family exspecialy your son. shes a bitch. anyway this chapter was so cute. i love the way they ignored her. great job by the way. ok bye bye now.
Author's Response: I know. She's based of my sister. ^_^ She'll get her lesson in no time, dear. :] She shouldn't treat our little Tomi that way at all, you're right. Maybe she will get a badass lesson. Haha. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)