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Reviewer: tomiluva92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

...WHOA...

Reviewer: vampgurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

Loved it I hope you update it soon.

Reviewer: xXmonsoonXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

oh mein gott...>_<
that was awkward...xD
UPDATE!!

Reviewer: GeorgeousBeefcake Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

oh dear god. Add soon plz!

Reviewer: PinkFluffyandEvil Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

o0o0o0o0o0. What's gonna happen? I obviously don't know. Update please.

Reviewer: Kassimmir Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

yeah! finally!!! :lol:

finally they really get dirty :p

love it!!!
update soon!

Reviewer: ezmye Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

O_O gooooood golly... I wanna know what happens next!! pretty please? ^^

Reviewer: emoqueen04 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

OMG OMG NOOOOO!!
Whats gonna happen to them? =[
omg awesome chapter!
Please update soon! xD

Reviewer: my_last_hope Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 11:55 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

Oh wow

O_o

I want more noa

>___>

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 10:57 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

:D Great story ^^ I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi

Reviewer: Toasty Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 10:45 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

Yay finally Emma! Just kidding. But it was about time. I wonder what Georg, Gustav, Dani, or Age will say about this. I sure hope that Tom is going to be ok and not lose his mind solitary confinement. But I'm still glad that Tom is making an effort to get better and in the words of Bill: " he's proven he's not a threat to himself." I'll be reading and reviewing Em. -Toasty

Reviewer: kelsLIVES Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 10:36 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

i'm twisted cuz i love mental stuff (haha!)
and thats why this is particularly interesting to me =]
you definitely seem to know what you're writing about

sucks to be caught during the act though ><
i've been there.
not fun.

please update soon!!
i'll be waiting =D

Reviewer: DeeDee200892 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 10:26 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Punishment

oh god dis barker is a fuckin idiot i hate him

Reviewer: tomiluva92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/08 07:50 am Title: Prologue: You're own your own my little nightmare

decorating you say?

Reviewer: ezmye Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/08 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Chapter Where Tom Becomes a Level 5 (BILL & EMMA GET DIRTY)

hehehe... I love how you're called Emma too, ^^ Emma you rock! O_O boy was that weird to type... more please?

Reviewer: Kassimmir Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/08 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Chapter Where Tom Becomes a Level 5 (BILL & EMMA GET DIRTY)

LOL!! i tought they really GET "dirrty"

ja, anyway, LOVE IT!!!

keep goin`!

Reviewer: emoqueen04 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/08 09:15 am Title: Chapter 5 - The Chapter Where Tom Becomes a Level 5 (BILL & EMMA GET DIRTY)

Awesome chapter!
I can't wait to see what happens next, please update xD

Reviewer: DeeDee200892 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/08 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Chapter Where Tom Becomes a Level 5 (BILL & EMMA GET DIRTY)

nope it wasnt wot i tought hahaha

but bill is soo sweet he finally kissed her

and tom aww he gave her his blessings aww

more pleasee

Reviewer: Jumbi_x Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/08 12:40 am Title: Prologue: You're own your own my little nightmare

wow, I thought this was going to be some really creepy story or something. But I loved it.
I loved the mud fighting part.It was funny. More please?
-looks cute-

Reviewer: xxscreamxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/08 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Chapter Where Tom Becomes a Level 5 (BILL & EMMA GET DIRTY)

I thought it was going to be something else but I guess not that was a good chapter update soon.:)

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