Date: 10/03/07 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
...terrible. I can't fucking believe that this shit happens sometimes. They should burn in hell forever motherfuckers! I'm so angry at Tom, he should be there! Not fucking around with the first stupid date that's in sight! Grrr! Poor angel, he doesn't deserve this.. I'm so sad/sorry for him.. ç_ç cruel world. When will you update? I can't already wait for more!
Author's Response: Ok, i changed the story because i didn't like this chapter, i wrote it at like 8am and had been up all night trying to write. The grammar was pretty bad too and i just thought it was too much to happen and it didn't turn out how i had wanted it too.rnrnSo i re-wrote the whole scene that happens after school so please read that otherwise chapter five won't make sense.
Date: 10/03/07 11:21 am Title: Chapter 4
oh jeesus how i hate them, they are.. they can't.. they can't do this to him. reading this breaks a little piece of my heart. i'd die if someone would do this to him.
like fucckk everybody!
give me more.
Author's Response: I know, if this really happened to Bill i would hate that person so much, like, i'd hit them and scream at them and cry, but this does really happen to people in real life and it's so stupid! I know this story is a fic, we know Bill was sort of teased at school but probably not to this extent.rnI really like writing it, cos it feels sort of real,i guess that's cos it happens to some people too :'(rnrnBut i'm glad you like it :)
Date: 10/01/07 06:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Uuuuuh poor sweetie! The storm! No, the monsoon xD worse xD ans ende der Zeittttt poor Billie.. well, it's nice Tom's confort for Bill :) yeayeayea I definitely like this story, mooore!
Date: 10/01/07 04:18 am Title: Chapter 2
They are so adorable! Thinking about their mom's happiness before their own needs...
Very well-written so far. A few minor mistakes here and there but all's good. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Minor mistakes??rnWhat do you mean??rnThanks :D
Date: 09/30/07 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
YEh! gOOD tOM! I liked this chapter too, good story :) add more soon please! I'd love to read it :)
Date: 09/30/07 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
:( saaaaaad but damn true :( it's not fair! By the way, i like your writing :) so i'mgonnareadmore :)
Author's Response: Thankyou :)rnrnI am going to post the next chapter today!
Date: 09/30/07 09:54 am Title: Chapter 2
its so sad but its beautifully written and the scene is really good so please continue
Author's Response: Thankyou. I am halfway throught the third chapter now.rnI am glad you like it :D
Date: 09/30/07 09:21 am Title: Chapter 2
it's interesting !
Author's Response: Is that a good thing or a bad thing? :S