Date: 10/16/07 07:07 am Title: Chapter 7
Well, Bill looks more helpless than he seems to be in real life, but the story shows 2 sensitive sweet twins, that make it very attractive!
Date: 10/16/07 04:20 am Title: Chapter 7
Love this storyyyyy!!!! I'm really curious, is Lucas ashamed? I can't read when he's beating him! Although is all fiction is very cruel... poor Bill :'(
Author's Response: Lucas doesn't even care, he thinks it's funny to beat Bill :(
Lucas should watch out because when Tom hears about this...
Date: 10/12/07 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
really good story. cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Writing it now, will be up before Thursday i promise!! And please please everyone comment it, cos i like to know what you guys think shiuld happen!! Hugs&kisses TaschaTokio.
Date: 10/12/07 06:32 am Title: Chapter 6
omg it's such a cute story !!!! let's have some more of that please xD!
Author's Response: Chapter seven up now!
Date: 10/11/07 11:14 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh poor sweetie, he's always hurt by someone/thing.. I hope it will end soon D; and I think that Tom should find out something ;) but not Mom xD and I hope Sofia will talk to him again U.U and that fucking Lucas HAS to apologize!! Oh a lot of things have to happen in the next chapter ya xD so, I'll wait patiently :) oh, I was almost forgettin: good chapter **
Author's Response: Bill doesn't want Tom to find out about Wednesday because , when Lucas found out Greta was going with Tom, [and Lucas likes Greta] he was like angry and hurt Bill for it, so it's kind of Tom's fault that Bill got beaten then, and if Tom finds out, Bill knows Tom will be really really angry at himself, and Bill [sweetie] doesn't want Tom to think it's his[Tom's] fault.
Thanks for reading!! I' writing Chapter7
Date: 10/11/07 07:52 am Title: Chapter 6
OMG GIVE ME MORE!! I LOVE IT XD
Date: 10/11/07 07:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Aaaaaaaaw that is simply just THE cutest chapter ever !!!
Author's Response: ^^ thanks
Date: 10/11/07 05:50 am Title: Chapter 6
that's really like, so well written and i know some people really live some kind of a hell like this through, and that's sort of a sick, i've always looked at those people, like i'd like to help them but at the same moment i'm feeling too little, i don't know. the fiction about this topic really would make people think about this.
i hope those wounds will heal well for Bill. and that's like so dramatic, but that's how i like it.
i'd like to read more about Bills feelings, my fav thing to do is to read persons feelings about hurting, i dunno that's my side of being weird.
so, i love it and i'd like to read more soon (: .
Author's Response: Yay! That's how i've always liked to structure my writing, the action and then what the person thinks about it, or a conversation and then what the person is thinking too, and i'm going to try and do that more when i write chapter 7 (atm) because the story is about Bill's feelings, and i guess we need to know better than actions. [If any of that made sense]
So i'm going to put more of his feelings in this, hes a bit confused with the whole Sofia thing atm ut we'll see.....
Thanks for reading!!! hugs!
Date: 10/11/07 03:38 am Title: Chapter 6
Delicate and touching.Please write more, I love it.
Date: 10/11/07 02:19 am Title: Chapter 6
I liked it was really good.
Date: 10/06/07 11:01 am Title: Chapter 5
my fucking god, i love that Sofia, she's so nice.
i so much need more, c'mon!
Author's Response: I think Sofia's just the person Bill has been waiting to help for a long time, but will she stick on Lucas' side or did th lyrics rea;;y mean as much to her as she said they did? Has her impression of Bill REALLY changed??
Chap 6 up this week!!
Author's Response: I think Sofia's just the person Bill has been waiting to help for a long time, but will she stick on Lucas' side or did th lyrics rea;;y mean as much to her as she said they did? Has her impression of Bill REALLY changed??
Chap 6 up this week!!
Date: 10/06/07 06:49 am Title: Chapter 5
Pooooooooooor (forgotten lolz) kid :( I like the way you write, it's so nice, and I really enjoy this story :) keep on writing chapter six, I'd read it with much pleasure! I want to know if Bill will see Sofia again and if Tom will find out what had happened that afternoon. I think Sofia was really nice to him - but he deserved it! Will she behave this way again (also in public) or will she just.. forget him? Mmm interesting! Keep writing please :) when the sixth? Much love.
Author's Response: I hope Sofia doesn't forget all about Bill when she goes back to school, Lucas should realise that he's gone too far this time- i mean, beating him so bad he passed out, and all over some lyrics!!
rnIf the lyrics touched her as much as she said they did, we hope she will help Bill from now on.
rnBut we'll just have to wait and see xD
rnChapter six up within this week. School holidays are over now :( so i wont get as much time to write but i'll try hard!
Date: 10/06/07 03:13 am Title: Chapter 5
that was nice of sofia,but her dad is way annoying
Date: 10/05/07 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
I Loved it I thought it was good. Bill gets beaten up alot doesn't he.
Author's Response: The stupid kids hate him for just trying to be himself.rnWell, he doesn't usually get done this worse. like, he has never passed out before on the floor... int eh middle of the road :'(
Date: 10/05/07 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww, dude, poor Bill. :(
Date: 10/05/07 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ow.. I still see the beating :( it's so sad.. but it happens sometimes. I hope that in the past he didn't get this treatment.. it's too bad. Poor kid.. I hope Sofia will help him :( anyway, I'd like to see more! :) when??
Author's Response: I have the fifth chapter finished and i have already began the sixth, however i wasn't going to put the fifth up yet because i wanted people to read how i had re-written chapter four, but i can post chapter five now if you like? And then i'm going to bed, its 10/15am and i've been up all night xD
Date: 10/04/07 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG! This is so sad! I HATE the bit where they hurt Bill; i want to hurt Lucus and his gang SO MUCH! Bills Music Is not shit, its the best music around! this is to sad for me, *Cries*.. hurry with the next chapter Tascha! xD
Author's Response: I know! His lyrics are so amazing [even when translated differently] and it's just amazing that he writes all his feelings down to share them with the world even though he knows there will be some haters and cuss him about them, but he knws it's worth it and it makes us so PROUD of him and happy and sad at the same time. rnI am listening to Monsoon atm,rnTom's guitar and Bill's voice are just beautiful together T_T
Date: 10/04/07 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey Tascha
its Ellie, amazing first chapter!
The bit about Tom is really sad, i could feel my eyes wattering!
thanks for showing me this site; now i can write my own stories xD
Author's Response: I love this website!rnTheres so many different stories that whatever mood i am in can look through the categories and read about the bys!!rnrnPlease do write your own stories, i would love to read!!rnrnrnAnd btw everyone, fifth chapter is finished but i won't upload it for a day or two because i want to give people a chance to read the rewritten chapter4.