Date: 10/24/07 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 7
btww you don't get bruises on your stomache, dunno why, something to do with blood and veins and organs and shizz. just to let you know.
Author's Response: What do you mean?? I've had bruising on my stomach before... and i've seen pictures on the internet of abdominal bruising, i checked before i wrote...
Date: 10/23/07 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
Of course you must continue There is such warmth in your writing, it makes you feel sympathy for each character, I am sorry for Bill being so weak, but he is sensitive in exchange, just like I hope he is in real life.
Author's Response: Thanks (:
I think Bill is a sweetie in real life, how he always talks about his feelings, its how i based his character in this stoy [of course] but yay, thanks for reading!!
Date: 10/23/07 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
i really am loving this :)
i look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks (: I'm glad you lika it!
Date: 10/23/07 11:53 am Title: Chapter 8
ahhh dats just so good, i love it.
Date: 10/23/07 10:18 am Title: Chapter 8
I like this chapter! Nobody hits Bill today! Awww Sophia and Bill... it`s so cute... Good job!
Date: 10/23/07 05:19 am Title: Chapter 7
I loved it so much!! Sofia is sucha bitch for ignoring him though, he is sad now and i hate when Bill is sad cos im sad too and yeah =[ But ye, great story, please post next chapter SOOOOON!
Date: 10/23/07 05:18 am Title: Chapter 1
This is written so beautifully, i love your writing! CAn't wait for more!!
Date: 10/23/07 05:17 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh thatas not fair :(
Date: 10/23/07 05:17 am Title: Chapter 2
It's cute how they share a burger, not fries. Like, that shows there bond and thats sweet. And how they dont argue or think anything of it either. Ye, i love this story!
Date: 10/23/07 05:15 am Title: Chapter 4
Ah thats so mean!! How could they do that to Bill, i'm almost crying, HOW DARE THEY DO THAT!! He did nuthing wrong ever!!! God i hope Sofia doesn't do anything witht that notebook...
Date: 10/23/07 05:13 am Title: Chapter 2
That's so cool how they are talking about being straving and stuff and then they decided to spend the money on some flowers for their mom who probly wouldnt even hav time to appreciate. Cute twins!! ^^
Date: 10/23/07 05:12 am Title: Chapter 3
Ah this is so dsad how he is stuck in the storm aw i feel so bad for poor Bill!!! T_T It was cut how Tom climbs into his bed to comfort him. It's like in the edge of the line of twincest but it's not; it's just brotherly love. You are a good writer too, can't wait for more!!
Date: 10/23/07 02:40 am Title: Chapter 7
Aw stupid Sofia!!! Why did she have to lead Bill on?!! I like Tom and Bill playifighting at the bank, it's cute ^^ Why can't Sofia be nice to Bill- he seserves it!
Date: 10/20/07 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
OOOoooooooooooh I hope Sofia isn't like that really :( she may talk to him - he'd be so happy :) more more more
Date: 10/17/07 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
I must say I LOVE this story ^_^ The only thing is, is this befor there band or did the band never happen and this is were they would be now?? Update ASAP!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like. I think during the story, there is Devilish but they have not been approached by a record company [SONY BMG] but i might include some Devilish a bit further along...you'll se (;
Date: 10/17/07 05:14 am Title: Chapter 7
Aaaaaaaw i really like this story!!! it's really great :b!
Date: 10/16/07 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
i really loved the update! please update it soon, and please carry on with the story! =]
Date: 10/16/07 07:16 am Title: Chapter 7
aah, i'm so sorry for Bill , everything is so hard for him.
gosh, anyway, that'sso goood, and somehow i want Tom to know about it, but yea..
okay im waiting more.