Date: 12/02/07 08:45 am Title: Chapter 15
WTF?! Well, I was saying how cute this chapter is, finally life's for Bill is ok, and.. why? Why did it end like this? Does he deserve this? ç_ç fuck that's cruel! That man is a bastard and his daughter.. why did she say it? Why did she need to hurt him more? Aw fucking people! There's not even Tom anymore there..
I was waiting for this chapter so much man (L) I'm glad it came, and I'm already waiting for the next one more hungry!
Author's Response: I will write some tomorrow night (:
Date: 12/02/07 04:39 am Title: Chapter 14
loved the update, and yay, they finally kissed! update soon
Date: 12/02/07 01:02 am Title: Chapter 15
Ugh, don't be dumb Bill. She just said that to get her father out of the room. I hope this doesn't become a cliched little argument. The chapter was good besides that, and especially sweet when Tom and Bill fell asleep on the phone talking to each other. They're right the phone bill is going to be huge. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12/02/07 12:24 am Title: Chapter 14
OMG!!!
This story is so awsum nd wat keeps me alive
luv yhoo Tascha
luvvies
Pazcale
Date: 11/30/07 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 14
YEY BILLS HAPPY XD
Date: 11/29/07 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yay! you didn't do what you text me and said you would do! I was so fucking scared! Aw! Well I MSNed you my opinions... so I'm just commenting you cause I can!
Author's Response: I havent's done that yet.
Date: 11/29/07 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
So good!! Please updat more SOOOON
Date: 11/29/07 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh no!! Thats so sad, you almost had me in tears at the monsoon but it was sweet between him and his mom in that moment aww!!
Date: 11/29/07 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 14
More soooon pleaseee!! This story is just the best!
Date: 11/29/07 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 14
They kisses O.o thats so cuteee! New it was coming :)
Date: 11/29/07 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 14
omg freaking amazing chapter!! update soon!! =D =D
Author's Response: I decided what chap15 will be, i played it all out in my head this morning and.. sheesh ):
I took the day off schoo today and i cbf going next Tuesday or Wednesday so you should see the chapters coming up every few days now. Enjoy (:
Date: 11/29/07 10:39 am Title: Chapter 14
ohh fck its so goood.
Date: 11/29/07 08:28 am Title: Chapter 14
Owww! Their phone call was so sweet, it metls hearts! It's sad to know that they can't be 'together' physically, but phones have been created for this :) I'd like to see them together again though :( and Sofia.. I can see something good raising between them :p hope her dad won't cough her! Bye and see you in the next chapter, soon I hope! xoxo great writer
Date: 11/29/07 03:52 am Title: Chapter 14
You have me wanting to kill Lucas now. Well, I wanted to seriously maim him before, but now, I want to kill him. Goodness gracious! This situation with Tom and Bill apart, that has to stop. Mien heart can't take it, and neither can they.
Author's Response: Poor Tom and Bill aye ): Maybe it will just take some time until they cope. Thanks for reviewing (:
Date: 11/29/07 03:14 am Title: Chapter 13
Oh the end of this is just to cute!!
Date: 11/28/07 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG!
I"m sitting here with tears running down all over my face since I read Tom was gone and then he died too 0_o.
Damm girl that was so mean!!! Even thought I had a feeling something like this was gonna happen, but still.
My gosh you write so well!
Please continue this story soon.
Mann I need to go wash my face now...
I've never cried so much about a story!!!
please continue.
Author's Response: Sorry for making you cry ):
Thanks for liking it though (: