Date: 06/22/08 02:02 am Title: Chapter 2
wow. that was really hot hehe you're an amazing writer xD
Date: 06/22/08 12:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Whoa. That was ridiculously hot. I think I'm gonna love Coach!Tomi...heh...
Date: 06/22/08 12:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Jerking off with the panties? Oh, HELL Yeah! Now that's a sweet little kink...
Date: 06/21/08 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh god I was so excited to see more of this, and you described something that I love thinking about just perfectly. :O
Date: 06/21/08 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
I felt a little faint reading this scene. You portrayed the details perfectly. Is Bill faking innocent or is he really so? That doesn't matter because it's so hot. Need of see how Bill gets more 'coaching' from his brother.
Date: 06/21/08 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was great, but still, i'd like them to take things slow. I mean, last chapter Tom jerking off with Bill's pantie was so appealig because he was being naughty ;) more of that please!!
Date: 06/21/08 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
I don't know whether to call that cute or hot, haha.
Anyway... MOOOAAAR? please?
:DD
Date: 06/21/08 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
:O
more...
i mean, moar...
Date: 06/21/08 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
great chapter! it's original and i can't wait to read more of it!
Date: 06/21/08 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
OOO! I love it! I want Bill to know how Tom feels and fall in love with him more than a brotherly way!
Date: 06/21/08 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Omg i LIKE this!!!! It's pretty different and it's sexy too. I was hoping Tom was gonna jerk himself off with the panties... and he did ;]
Can't wait for you to post more of this!!
Date: 06/20/08 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH God!!
HAHA HOT! :D
Please poste more soon!! ;P
Date: 06/20/08 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
OHHHHH MY GAWDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!! You described everything sooo damn well. I could picture everything as it happened perfectly. GREAT JOB. I mean seriously .... FANTABULOUS!!
Date: 06/20/08 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't want to say sweet, because it doesn't look like the angle you were going for, but alas I thought it was sweet. I liked it a lot, great job!
Date: 06/20/08 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I totally loved this.
Please, more. OMG.
Date: 06/20/08 09:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow homg that was sooo hot!
I love the fics where Tom is masturbating while thinking about Bill. God, its such an awesome concept. XD. I really hope you write more to this! ^^
Date: 06/20/08 06:12 am Title: Chapter 1
omg please update soon i swear sometimes i wish there werre endless chapters to these things
Date: 06/13/08 02:20 am Title: Chapter 1
This is good. I can't wait for the next chapter.