Date: 06/16/11 10:56 am Title: Epilogue
superb story, marvellous writting, excellent plot. i loved it :)
not only is your writing style brilliant, but also the plot is interesting. it kept me on the edge of my seat. amazing work :)
Author's Response: thank you evry much for enjoying it so much :D
Date: 04/25/11 07:56 pm Title: Epilogue
I've been interested of ancient Egypt ever since I was in grade school and new the Gods names and other things but over the years I forgot about them. Reading this just brought smiles to my face since I knew what was what xD But I will admit the last chapter I wasn't expecting Tom to be some spy! I love your brain! ^^
Author's Response: thank you :P
Date: 04/25/11 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 8
I hate math with a burning passion. But I do like business math since I understand it.
Author's Response: I learned to love math, over the years
Date: 03/27/11 11:09 am Title: Chapter 32
DUDE! You killed Doctor Zahi Hawass!! I've been watching him on NatGeo since I was in, like, 7th grade (that's over 7 years now)!! Not cool man. Not cool.
The story is amazing so far, especially for an intellectually nerdy person like me! I may not be an Egyptologist, by any means, but I've been fascinated with Ancient Egypt since I was little, so this fic is really cool for me. Thanks and great job!
Oh and I just thought I should mention that Abu Simbel isn't on the Nile, it's on the shore's of Lake Nasser. >.> Just FYI. :D
Author's Response: I know. I was like, who'd have the balls to kill the dude?rnrnIndeed, but the lake is part of the Nile, since it was created after daming the river.
Date: 02/19/11 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
eh I'm not a huge fan of Zahi Hawass but okay He's what I call JUDGMENTAL. I'm also not a huge fan of history. I'm more of a English and art person but it's still a very intriguing and catching story.
Author's Response: thank you for thinking so :)
Date: 02/19/11 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 26
awwww it's cute every time and ewww Gustav and Georg are old. well not ewww but that means they have beards and wrinkles and stuff. I thought they were 30! now I have to change my whole perspective on this story. Now when they have sex I have to imagine it slower and not as fun. (well that last part was personal but still.)
Author's Response: :))
Date: 02/03/11 12:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Hi can ask a question how old are Gustav and Georg suppose to be. I love this fanfic and have read it many times but I can't figure it out.
Author's Response: they're supposed to be in their late 40s early 50s
Date: 06/19/10 10:16 pm Title: Epilogue
My God! How did I miss this story?? It's a good thing I decided to go through the archives a second time...just in case. Amazing novel! Imagine if this had been made into a movie. I'd watch it!!
Author's Response: I'd kidnap someone famous to hold hostage unless the band actually starred in it! XD
Date: 05/15/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
awsomeawsomeawsomeawsome
Author's Response: thankyouthankyouthankyou
Date: 03/17/10 09:33 am Title: Epilogue
Overall, this is a very well-executed story. Some odd or "wrong" word choices here and there, but overall good writing. I liked the sheer nerdiness of it, and making Tom a math genius is just one of those so-weird-it's-right ideas.
Author's Response: thank you very much for the nice review. always good to know where my wrongs are so i can make them right again :)rnAnd you just know that Tom secretly is the nergiest person on earth XP
Date: 12/26/09 03:23 am Title: Chapter 14
I have been to the Grand Bazaar in Istanbul, Turkey and it was the most beautiful sight I have ever seen.
I went there with my mum four days in a row lol
Wonderful chapter,
Have to read more!!
Author's Response: thank you. Bazaars are just the most wonderful sight i have yet been blessed with seeing :D
Date: 04/27/09 11:26 am Title: Epilogue
Wow, you are either very smart or a very good bullshitter! I got sucked in and read it as fast as I could! Amazing level of detail. I love Egypt and all the magik that can happen there. I'm also a huge fan of The Davinci Code and National Treasure. I love how you tried to explain things and never quite left me hanging in the dark. Fantasic story, and the end really caught me by surprise. Tom, as a secret agent? I never would have guessed that! But I suppose that was the point, huh?
Beautiful job!
Author's Response: i have been called good at bullshitting, but i did big research for this. :DrnI'm glad you liked it.
Date: 04/26/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
I think I would still have punched Tom, and THEN turned around and given him a kiss.
Author's Response: yeah, it does sound more artistic that way :P
Date: 03/22/09 08:12 pm Title: Epilogue
Man, really, you combined in this story two of the things I like most in this world!
Bill + Ancient Egiptian History = Heavens for Me... xP <3
Good job.. =) Though It could've used some more Bill/Tom Romance.. But it's okay.. I still Really Loved it!^^ Also, I Read it all in one sitting! :D
Author's Response: thank you very much for taking the time to do it :)
Date: 01/24/09 10:30 am Title: Epilogue
okay, yeah, this one was definitely worth a lot of praise. it was perfect, with a little of "the mummy"'s magic to go along. breath taking. i applaud you. *applauds politely*
and after reading this, i must say, i finally got some inspiration after a three month dry spell. more applause. *continues clapping, then stops abruptly* except everything i wrote turned out to be VERY similar to this story. hmmm.... except with mob bosses and prostitutes and noincredably hot gay professors and in vermont and not cairo or britain and they wree all sixteen except for the bad guys and....
on second thought, it was nothing like your story. if you're interested in the summary--you're probably not, but still--give me your email address and i'll see if i can keep my attention span long enough to give you a sinopse. seriously though, i have the attention span of a bendy straw. red and white stiped ones. yeah.
i'll tell you one thing: your stories are definitely a cure for writer's block. congrats!!!!
Author's Response: haha. I'd love to hear the rest of the sinopse really. ancamocan2003@yahoo.com, if you're in the mood to talk about it :PrnrnAnd glad i helped you with your writer's block. it can suck beyond measure, that i know. :)
Date: 01/19/09 06:43 pm Title: Epilogue
It was amazing, I really enjoyed reading this story. It was so well written, gosh I can't believe it's over.
Author's Response: thank you very much for takng the time to read it :)
Date: 01/19/09 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 30
OMG OMG I love it, this is insanely good.
Author's Response: glad you do :D
Date: 01/19/09 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 25
This is so interesting
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 01/19/09 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 21
Wow this is getting intense.... love it.
Author's Response: :D
Date: 01/19/09 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 17
I love drunk Bill, I thought it was pretty funny.
Author's Response: drunk Bill is always funny