Date: 01/19/09 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am really really enjoying this story.
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 10/15/08 11:57 am Title: Epilogue
that was a really good read, I am sorry yuo had to kill of the professor... and Tom as an MI5 agent... whoo...
Author's Response: i'm proud of myself with this one :D
Date: 08/02/08 12:24 am Title: Epilogue
AH! I can't believe it's over! *wipes tears from eyes*
Amazing story, I loved it.
I'm so sorry I didn't review before, my internet completely left me. Anyways, I love the story and I hope that I can find another one as good soon. (But it will never replace this one in my heart :3) AND BY THE WAY.
I can't believe you made Tom 32.
hahaha.
(Dunja's...still a skank...but i'll accept her.)
Author's Response: lol. Your thoughts on Dunja are your own and I will acept them even though I don't agree:PrnrnI'm glad ou loved it!
Date: 07/29/08 02:55 am Title: Epilogue
So...secret fucking agent?!? That came out of pretty much nowhere! Lol...the whole thing was entertaining though. :] I'm glad I read it, thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: Well he would come out of nowhere, wouldn't he? Being SECRET and all :PrnrnThank you for reading it :D
Date: 07/27/08 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's more than a chance, I just have to be able to convince my parents to give me the train fair.
Author's Response: ::faints::
Date: 07/27/08 03:47 pm Title: Epilogue
Guh, I loved this, I think maybe the ending should have had some cuteness from Bill and Tom in it, yet, I really did like where it ended up
I was completely unsure of a 32 year old Tom, that's what tipped the balance of what I liked better, this or 'Eternity is not forever'.
There's only a slight difference mind
Oh, I don't know why I'm mentioning this, but I am. I have the chance to meet Dr. Zahi Hawass
But that's not important, I just have to say one last time how much I loved this.
Author's Response: You have the... chance...to... ::seizures::rnrnThank you very much for reading this :)
Date: 07/26/08 01:50 am Title: Epilogue
Well, this was excelent. Hope you don't mind my methods of reading. I'm glad they found the treasure. Thoungh honestly I would have liked a little more at the end about tom working for the governemnt, a funeral for Andi and the Doctor, and Tom actually telling Bill he loved him (not the point of the story I know, but a nice add on). I feel like I learned so much about egypt from this story! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing so much :).
Date: 07/26/08 01:46 am Title: Chapter 34
WHAT!!!! woah!!!! Tom's an agent working for the government? So was his excapade w/ Bill all fake, he says he cares, but how much? And he's 32? A bit older than Bill hmmm? And Dunja's on their side? And Saki switched sides? Wow, I must say, I LOVE the twist. He let too many people die though. I would have just called in backup the moment I saw them on the plane and prevented the deaths of Andi and Doctor H. Wow though...
Author's Response: =)) this is a really fun comment. Yeah, well, you kind of got all the points right except for calling backup.He was undercover and he had to catch these guys red handed. Even though they said they killed Andi Tom had to catch them while they were at it if he wanted to not have trouble with his bosses. You don't want to piss off MI5 bosses.
Date: 07/26/08 01:40 am Title: Chapter 33
Ew? Didn't need the David Dunja stuff. And Bill was doing what? Liked the mild humanity from Saki there.
Author's Response: Saki's 10000000000 (you get the point) times more human than he lets on, but being near David kind of taints people, as you might have guessed. The David/Dunja stuff were necessary for you to understand what her job involves her doing ;)
Date: 07/26/08 01:35 am Title: Chapter 32
He killed Doctor H? NO! And Gustav too?! You didn't say he was dead though... You're really on a bit of a killing spree here. And there was no treasure! It's not actually in Sudan is it?
Author's Response: As you probably saw, no, he didn't kill Gustav :P I loved him too much to do that to him
Date: 07/26/08 01:30 am Title: Chapter 31
I hate david too!!! What did he just do to bill?! How could he!
Author's Response: Well... he has the guns in this story, so he can kinda do anything
Date: 07/26/08 01:25 am Title: Chapter 30
OMFG!!! This is really bad! I hope the treasure doesn't have any gold! That'll be ironic! I'm so mad right now... David's evil!
Author's Response: David is indeed evil >:) I know. I wrote him that way
Date: 07/26/08 01:21 am Title: Chapter 29
Did you just kill Andi? I can't believe that! Andid didn't kow where the treasure was yet! How could they do that! Aaaaa!
Author's Response: yes indeed. i killed Andi... :-( i'm not happy with myself for doing it.
Date: 07/26/08 01:18 am Title: Chapter 28
I'm a little lost, what did Andi figure out? And what are they going to do to him?
Author's Response: Andi didn't figure out anything. They just needed to have a bit of alone time and give the work to someone else.
Date: 07/26/08 01:13 am Title: Chapter 27
Bill's so naive! It's a bit aggravating. I can't believe he took the ring! He's like a little kid.
Author's Response: It is aggravating, but he can't help it.
Date: 07/26/08 01:08 am Title: Chapter 26
Oh yes, and that's going to fly for how long? I loved how you put Tom and Bill and Georg and Gustav's conversations together. It was really cool.
Author's Response: :D Thank you. I enjoyed that part myself :")
Date: 07/26/08 01:02 am Title: Chapter 25
Well, that clears up what they found yesterday. I still don't know what the professors were arguing about though. It's cool Tom's learnin too.
Love the pic btw.
Author's Response: Loved the pic myself :)
Date: 07/26/08 12:56 am Title: Chapter 24
Oh, poor tobi. He's not going to stand for that. And what are the professors fighting over?
Author's Response: They were fighting about the fact that they kept each other out of the loop, so to speak. Georg didn't tell Gustav he was giving the paper to Bill and Gustav didn't tell Georg that he was planning something with Hawass.
Date: 07/26/08 12:54 am Title: Chapter 23
Well, let me explain myself. I loved this story, but I stopped reading it b/c it was driving me crazy w/ the suspence. And all this stuff I couldn't understand, so I decided I'd wait until it was done and then go through and review it and everything. Hope you're not mad.
So confused by this chater though.
Author's Response: I'm not mad at all. Lol. I'd love to see you read mystery novels.
Date: 07/25/08 11:57 pm Title: Epilogue
jhclvkjghdljdf it wass amazing
the end.
Author's Response: :)) this comment makes me feel really good. people, well, at least I only 'jhclvkjghdljdf' when it's a worthy story.