Date: 06/17/08 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 12
jeeeeeeeeeeej they kicked david's ass!
go go go twins^^
Date: 06/17/08 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
o_0 david you sick fuck!!!
Date: 06/17/08 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
omg I knew it!:O
David you hypocrite!!
Date: 06/17/08 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
whoa man Bill, telling david0_o
I so hope you're right!
Date: 06/17/08 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 7
0_o they fell asleep like that!
oh man XD
Date: 06/17/08 07:01 am Title: Chapter 4
man that must have been awkward XD poor tom:P
Date: 05/31/08 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
i no all fan girls say this but...
ZOMG i love this story so fucking much
Date: 02/16/08 05:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I thought Bill would choose David o.O (too many detective stories, i smell a rat everywhere xD)
But everything's alright, Bill and Tom are happy so I am ;)
Yaaayyyyyy i love this story *____* like every of yours.
thank god i know english a lil bit (what would i do without 'freiheit' or 'have a little faith'?). I wish i knew it better... longer comms, more understood words (do you know the feeling when you're reading sex scene and must look to the dictionary? i do xD), maybe i'd post a story (because i am a writer too, but in polish).
(oh, dixx, stop offtoping)
my keyboard needs to be fed.
(i swear, it took me more time to write this comment than to read this story xO btw, why do people write so short comms there? i could not write only 'ohhh what a sweet chapter', jeez. but maybe i'll get used to it, i am too lazy to write long comms. maybe this is why many times i dont review at all? XP never mind. don't you think it's not a comment but one big offtop? whatever xD)
Your own groupie,
Dixxi
Author's Response: HAHA dude, you're my groupie, if anyone's allowed to go offtopic in a review, it's you darling :) And for the record, I am way too lazy a person to even bother with the dictionnary. I just assume the word means something, make up some far-fetched meaning that makes sense, and continue reading my fic XD ... Not very practical, but hey, at least it's fast!
Date: 12/31/07 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Caity,
Just thought you'd like to change this typo. 'Membrane' is not equal to 'member' ^^ I don't think Tom would like to have a membrane dangling between his legs ^^
Author's Response: XD oops did I do that?
Date: 11/24/07 02:36 am Title: Chapter 1
omg i love this story, it's freaking amazing! =D
Date: 11/21/07 01:27 am Title: Chapter 12
aaaaaw
such a perfect ending, and I smiled like a fool when Bill punched David, it was such an amazing sight for my inner eye^^
Date: 11/15/07 08:35 am Title: Chapter 12
omg! god i love dthis one! yay! really good!
Date: 11/10/07 05:21 am Title: Chapter 12
thank you for reading this? thank you for writing it! i enjoyed it so much and got so excited every update!
im so glad there was a happy ending! really i am :)
Author's Response: your comment really touched me... *tears up* :') I'm glad there was a happy ending too ^^
Date: 11/08/07 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 12
omg it was amazing i really thought bill would turn on his brother... omg.. it's breath taking!!!!!!!!!!!! when u write more tell me on buzznet or email me...
Buzznet_ TxOxKxIxOxHxOxTxExlx
Email_Snowduck27@yahoo.com
Thanks!
Date: 11/06/07 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
Yea boy. Bill is fucking amazing! I love Bill! Go Bill. Go Bill. Go Bill. Kill Dave. Kill Dave. Kill Dave. Simply Wonderful.
-Jherri
Date: 11/06/07 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
amazing!!!! i love this story so much!!!!! your such a good writer!!!!! hope you write more like this...different plot obviously but i hope you write one with lots of chapters ^_^
Date: 11/06/07 09:02 am Title: Chapter 12
So good, i couldn´t have ended in a better way!
Date: 11/06/07 02:20 am Title: Chapter 12
aww this was so good !! : D ! You're such a good writer !! !!
Date: 11/06/07 01:52 am Title: Chapter 12
*squeaks* such a great ending! keep writing, your'e great, I loved this story!
Date: 11/06/07 01:09 am Title: Chapter 12
jesus, i was about to believe that Bill'd choose david, im weirdo.
that was a great story :) !
Author's Response: lol well that was kinda the point ;)