Date: 07/06/09 09:03 pm Title: II. Chapter One
dude that sucks for Claire... and i do wonder why bill left thou so plz hurry
Date: 07/06/09 09:02 pm Title: II. Chapter One
noo ! you cant stop here ! i wanna know Bill's story! lol cant wait for more, soon please :D
Date: 07/06/09 08:38 pm Title: II. Chapter One
He seemed a little timid, though, compared to before;
I was going to comment on how shy Bill seemed, before I read that bit. He was so bold before, that seeing him in this way is a bit of a shock. I think it's really cute, though. =]
Ooaofhdsfjfas, a cliffie! :O Meanie XD
Date: 07/06/09 08:31 pm Title: II. Chapter One
Yeah! We're all dying to know, Bill! Damn I'm so curious. Also, I like Claire. Just thought I'd mention it, she's a great character.
Date: 07/06/09 07:48 pm Title: II. Chapter One
Where. Has. He. Been?
And. Why. Did. He. Leave?
I really really wanna know!!
*tries not to whine... Fails*
Date: 07/06/09 07:48 pm Title: II. Chapter One
OMG i was close, nephew haha. OMG please have Bill explain this whole mess, I need to know about Bill, he is so mysterious and dark its so intreging but weird at the same time please update soon please XOXOXOXOXOXO
Date: 07/06/09 07:16 pm Title: II. Chapter One
Yeah, it's a bit boring but bearable.
Is a good fanfic but it would be a great story if you just put a little more effort in it, since it seems that you don't.
You always write wonderful things and after reading "Valentines Day" and "Barefoot," this is not what is expected from a writer like you (at least me). Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to criticize you, I just think you could do better :) (and don't blame the heat xD)
Date: 07/06/09 07:06 pm Title: II. Chapter One
*bites nails to stop squealing over Bill remarking on Tom's manliness*
Date: 07/06/09 06:55 pm Title: II. Chapter One
It's kind of like their roles were switched the way Bill just wants to be with Tom and how Tom is just hesitant about everything. Awww I hope things work out soon.
I love this story. Update again soon! :)
Date: 07/06/09 06:53 pm Title: II. Chapter One
So, what will happen will Bill & Tom get back together?
Date: 07/06/09 06:47 pm Title: II. Chapter One
This is heartbreaking.
I can't believe you've been even meaner to Tom!
As much as I want your other fics updated, you need to update this as soon as possible.
It's killing me.
Bill was adorable in this, well, I don't know if adorable is the right word, but I awwed so much when he cupped Tom's face, and talked about his deep voice.
And oooo, Tom's deep voice, om nom nom.
Squee! Tom's older now, the feeling that he's like a little kid is gone :D
Yeah.
Please be nice to him.
And have him together with Bill again, in the next chapter.
This has left me with a lump in my throat, I feel sick, it's impossible for me to think of them like they are now, it's devastating.
Date: 07/06/09 03:45 pm Title: II. Prologue
wow. Poor Bill and Tom.
Date: 07/06/09 02:49 pm Title: II. Prologue
Omg! This preview is so good! But who's Gustav? Is he their child or something?
Also, how far in the future is this from when Bill left? The heat is killing me too, and I can't write either! Update whenever you can.
Date: 07/06/09 12:37 pm Title: II. Prologue
Aw!Little Gustav is cute *_*
Props to Bill for remembering thr song without the music notes XD
Or maybe Tom forgot them at his place? o_‘
Thank you for this and take your time.I mean it. lol the heat is killing me and you don't want to know where i am XD
Date: 07/06/09 11:43 am Title: II. Prologue
I simply cannot wait for this to continue. It's like an addiction to me and the only twincest story i will read aside from the valentine story. You're an amazing writer, adn the only writer I read on here. I made this account after reading the first chapter of the valentine story.
Date: 07/06/09 11:11 am Title: I. Prologue
Well, I live in a small village near Javea. It's one hour away from Valencia. And yeah, the mosquitoes make my life a living hell. We have a pool, and they breed or something in the goddamned pool, and the thing is, we have mosquitoes almost two cm long. They bite me here and there, and they leave a scar :S
Date: 07/06/09 11:10 am Title: II. Prologue
O_O like- WHAT?! I so hope that isn't a SON, omg. I- Bill learned how to play the guitar..?? Wtf, you seriously can't leave me hanging like this, not after what I read. :o I've alwyas been addicted to this story, ever since I first read it, but now... omg now I'd just do anything to read more. o.o I can't believe my eyes... please update soon!
Date: 07/06/09 09:10 am Title: II. Prologue
oh my god. oh my god. OH MY GOD.
I'M DYING TO READ MORE NOW D: greeeeat start for the second part of this story!!! :3
Date: 07/06/09 08:32 am Title: II. Prologue
*has this crazy image of Tom yelling at Bill in front of his girlfriend*
This is going to be a bit of a bumpy ride is it not?
How is Bill going to get Tom to walk to him?
And I kinda feel sorry for Tom's gf... It's not like she's a bitch or anything.. Seems nice. =/
*gives you some of our weather*
Quite cool around here.
Author's Response: Bumpy ride... I guess so :) I'll update asap ;)
Date: 07/06/09 08:00 am Title: II. Prologue
Aaaw he is finaly back.
i'm not a crying kinda girl, but when Bill left I did, it was just so sad! Well this is my first review and I hope it doesn't suck to much but I just wanted to say that you are a great wrighter and I love all your story's. Can't wait for the next one!
xAlay
Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry for not having reviewed before, I do that sometimes ;) Glad you're liking the story! Thanks a lot :)