Date: 07/16/08 07:05 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
I loved it! =)
Author's Response: Good :D
Date: 07/13/08 03:38 pm Title: I. Chapter Four
If you dont write more I'll DIE! you dont want that to happend.. do you?
Please, pretty please! *write write write*
Date: 07/13/08 03:36 pm Title: I. Chapter Four
Oh my.. God! I loved the whole part ^^
Date: 07/12/08 05:01 pm Title: I. Chapter Two
I really like the direction this is going, its unique and i look forward to reading the rest!!
Date: 07/07/08 02:32 pm Title: I. Chapter Four
There's something very strange about Bill. I have the impression that in a way Bill's neighbor was right and Bill is trouble but not that he's a bad person. o-o And Bill seems very comfortable with Tom checking him out all the time. XD Though he's not a pedophile. I got the messege. XD Besides Tom isn't THAT much younger than him. Bill's only 20 in this fic so that's only a three year difference since Tom is 17. Soon to be 18 too so. XD Anyway, *favorites* I'll be waiting for an update.
Date: 07/07/08 12:43 pm Title: I. Chapter Four
awww, things are getting better! no more heavy tension! xD
Date: 07/07/08 05:10 am Title: I. Chapter Four
Tom seriously? Honey you've got to get a grip. While I find it adorable--and I'm sure Bill did too--there was still the whole "stakerish tendency" that Tom seems to be developing. But it's so cute that I can't be mad at him. But Bill handled being woken up by his potential suitor so early much better than I would have. LOL.
OMG...can you say sexual tension? I am not sure if that's what you're aiming for...but it's there. It's there and it's hot. Gah! The way Bill just left his door open and started changing...I think my eyes rolled back a bit in joy. *giggles* And then he stared at Tom. It was almost as if he was daring Tom to make a move. Again, I'm not sure if that was what you were aiming for, but it sure seemed like he was daring Tom. And I know Tom wanted something to happen, but he's still so tentative.
Bill though, Bill is not tentative at all. We still know nothing about him but I'm aching to see where you take this and where you take their budding relationship.
Tom...next time you get the urge to go touch Bill...do it. I think he wanted you to. Yummy.
Now please, please write more. Of this and everything else. *feeds you cupcakes*
Date: 07/07/08 05:03 am Title: I. Chapter Three
Wow. I'm beginning to wonder just what it is that Bill does. At first it didn't really register...but he seems to always be "meeting" someone a lot. And then he got kind of edgy with Tom when he asked him who. Now, it could be that really it isn't any of Tom's business or it could be that Bill is doing something really wrong or illegal. I remember the old woman telling Tom to stay away now...that Bill is "no good".
Hmmmmm.
I don't care if he's no good. He's fucking hot and Tom thinks so too, old woman, so there! *pouts*
I love, love, love how Bill basically told Tom in very few words "This is the last time", but then it wasn't the last and he came to his rescue. With the two creepy henchmen-like dudes.
Who were they? And what is Bill doing? I'm leaning towards Bill is a prostitute or Bill is a drug dealer right about now. Just speculating.
I also love how Bill will touch Tom like he's so fragile. A soft caress of the cheek here, a stroking of his face with his thumb there. It's all really rather breathless feeling and I'm sure the butterflies in Tom's stomach agree.
After all, his crush is growing in epic proportions.
One more part so far. *weeps* I want more!
Date: 07/07/08 04:55 am Title: I. Chapter Two
Very interesting. Seriously. Tom is so unsure of himself yet he's already making it quite obvious he's got a huge crush on Bill. I wonder what Bill's thoughts are during all this. At this point I mean. Right now, there's no romance between them...yet there's still a subtle something there. Bill obviously knows Tom really shouldn't be hanging around so much. I mean, he's not too old for Tom to hang out with, and yet he is. You know? It's like it wouldn't be frowned upon in some circumstances and then in others it would. So I kind of think Bill was nicely trying to say goodbye to Tom at the end, but Tom very pointedly said "See you" and Bill was amused again. Despite himself.
I think Bill is just as intrigued by Tom as Tom is with him. And I'm really wanting to know more. *squeals*
Of course, I could be wrong about everything, but that still doesn't stop me from speculating. :DDDD
To the next part I go!
Date: 07/07/08 04:48 am Title: I. Chapter One
I am really loving this already. You have this knack for getting me hooked on your stories until I'm salivating for updates. ;D
I did find the middle of this chapter a tad bit too wordy or something. I don't know. A lot of the explanation with Tom was needed, but it just seemed a tad bit...off. I don't know. Perhaps I was on too much soda at the time.
Other than that, I loved this chapter and Bill is mysterious and already sexy and Tom is completely crushing on him. So cute. It's refreshing to see Tom is the shyer role here. I kind of think Bill is amused by him--but not in a mean way. Just...teasing.
Heading off to the next chapter.
Date: 07/06/08 09:24 pm Title: I. Chapter Four
No offense or anything, but where is this going? (I'm sorry for my wording, I don't know how to say it more politely). Is there a big problem here other than the age difference and Tom coming to terms w/ his sexuality? I think I'm just looking for more angst (who would have thought considering I hate angst).
Update soon.
Date: 07/06/08 06:09 pm Title: I. Chapter Four
I had butterflies in my stomach all the time while I read this :D
I love it! ^_^
Date: 07/06/08 04:29 pm Title: I. Chapter Four
This story is awesome XD
Tom is being so adorable shy. He's a cuty :D Loved the scene were Bill didn't close the door :p
I wonder why, hihi. But what's up with Bill actually, how does he know those big guys. I don't know it's suspicious :-p maybe I'm seeing to much but I just want to know more about Bill :-p
I want more XD update soon ;-)
Date: 07/06/08 02:29 pm Title: I. Chapter Three
Yep. Love this. ^.^
Date: 07/06/08 09:58 am Title: I. Prologue
I am tentatively going to start reading this since I know you said you're not sure about it and I'm nervous about starting a fic and it not getting finished.
Nevertheless, I adore your work and I'm faithfully jumping in despite my anxiety, clinging lovingly to the side of your "ship", and braving any dangerous waters with bravado that I'm pretty sure I don't have.
Don't let me drown, woman. :DDDDD
I have faith you won't.
Excellent beginning. And I like weird. I'm pretty sure you got that from my ramblings above. LOL!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're reading this too! And don't worry, I have no intentions of breaking off/pausing/ending this fic any time soon ;) I hope you enjoy the first four chapters ^^
Date: 07/06/08 07:39 am Title: I. Chapter Four
awwwww! i' craving for more!! can't wait the next update!
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can ^^
Date: 07/06/08 07:31 am Title: I. Chapter Three
great chapter as ever! bill's class...But what does he do for a living?
Author's Response: Thank you! Guess you gotta wait and see ^^
Date: 07/06/08 07:12 am Title: I. Chapter Four
Oh Bill that tease!
awesomeawesomeawesome :D
Author's Response: xD
Date: 07/06/08 06:45 am Title: I. Chapter Two
SO ADORABLE!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 07/06/08 06:37 am Title: I. Chapter One
What a chapter! i don't have words anymore to tell you how beautifuly you write. It's clever and interesting but mostly, your characters are HUMAN!!! The way tom feels and all that...Everything is believable,nothing's rushed...
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! That's nice to read :)