Date: 07/17/08 01:13 am Title: I. Chapter Five
That was so cute!
Ooh, Bill works at a bar...
What type of bar??? lol. (Perverted Mind)
Aww, But Tom is billsexual!!!
And Bill is gay! How cute!
I love gay guys. lol
Next Chapter... pweez
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I'll update as soon as I can ^^
Date: 07/17/08 12:29 am Title: I. Chapter Five
ILU Tom. You are just so wonderfully confused which just makes you so wonderfully cute.
Author's Response: xD
Date: 07/16/08 11:57 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
LOVE IT!!! I'm still trying to figure out Bill's character...but I'm loving that too. He's so...not anything I've ever read before. I love how you made Tom too. Completely different than the way I envision him. Keep up the good work ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks a lot :D
Date: 07/16/08 11:33 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
jeasus
I didnt know u were writing this fic too.
jeez, now I know that ALL of ur fics are good.
jeez, ur really one of my fav author.
Don't ever stop writing.
I wanna read more
Author's Response: Haha, thank you very much! :D
Date: 07/16/08 11:17 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
i really like the way you've made them get to know each other. it's so refreshing. some writers tend to jump to the smut at once and forget to develop the attraction part.
keep it up! i love your stories so much. XD
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
Date: 07/16/08 10:39 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
xDDD yaaaaaiiiii x.x more more...I'm biting my nails @_@ getting crazy...naa u won't escape Bill xDDD MUAJAJAJA u are gonna fall soon jijiji *o*
Author's Response: haha, I'll update as soon as possible ^^
Date: 07/16/08 10:31 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
I really like it. That helped me figure out where they both stand feelings wise. However, I get the feeling the community doesn't really accept either of them and really wouldn't accept them together. Oh well, they'll be happy and that's what matters. Thanks for the chapter w/ all the computer trouble you've been having.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing ;) and I'm glad you like it!
Date: 07/16/08 09:47 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
oooh, you're back. *worships*
I love the flirtatious vibe between Bill and Tom and Tom's shyness. This is a refreshing change from Tom always being the sexually wild and promiscuous one.
I'm loving this. :D More soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoy writing this so... I'll update asap :D
Date: 07/16/08 08:47 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
ah, I love how this story goes so slow ^^
really sweet chapter, can't wait to read more (L) :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update asap ^^
Date: 07/16/08 08:31 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
Hey! ^^
I'm a really big fan of ALL your stories, but this one happens to be one of my absolute favorites. It feels like I'm actually there, watching Bill and Tom (sounds stalkerish, I know) and I can describe their character so well that it feels like I actually know them.
Are they getting together soon, or will it take a LOOOONG amount of chapters for them to finally confess their undying love for one another? XD
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you can get into the story so well! About the love and action... you'll see ;P
Date: 07/16/08 08:18 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
*clap clap clap* yay new chapter, i'm glad you were able to get into the writing mood easily enough to get this written, i'm so sorry about your computer.
i'd die if that happened ot mine!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, it's pretty shit, but I gotta get over it someday :) and I enjoy writing so it's a good way ^^
Date: 07/16/08 08:06 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
OMG! This has to be the most perfect story ever. I feel butterflies everytime I imagine Bill smiling at Tom, and I'm also do the annoying "Aaaaaw" everytime Tom acts like a little kid when he's talking with Bill. So cute. *__*
And about your computer. Oh, I know how it feels. *hugs* I had the same problem three times, but thank god I always save my pictures on photobucket and my works and texts on a private livejournal. Don't worry, you're an amazing writer, I know you'll write the new chapters even better than before. YOU CAN MAKE IT, GIRL!!! ^^
Awesome job.
Author's Response: aw, thank you, and I'm glad you enjoy it so much :D
Date: 07/16/08 07:57 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
I'm pretty impressed that you posted this so soon after your laptop crisis! Good job, girl!
I'm liking how we're starting to learn more about these characters; it's interesting to see Bill be the one in the power-position (omg would he top??? That'd be sooo hot *drool*) and I can't wait to find out even more!
And btw, Bill's description of a man's body was...very hot XD It reminded me of why I like a man's body ;D Haha.
Good luck with the rest of your updates!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it ;) The description is exactly what I like about a man's body too *drool* I bet Tom's is like that xD
Date: 07/16/08 07:49 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
I heard about your computer, it's a shame D:
I like this story; It's original :D
And Bill is the older one; rather than Tom, it's good to have a slight change! (:
xx
Author's Response: Glad you like it ;)
Date: 07/16/08 07:33 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
aaaaaawwww AMAZING *jumps* :D
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 07/16/08 07:22 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
To him he was just Bill, and suddenly he was glad that to Bill, he was simply Tom.
Aw, i love that part.
Welcome back sweetie. =D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to be back :)
Date: 07/16/08 07:18 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
aww that was really cute. I'm glad we know more about Bill now. ^^
Author's Response: and you will find out even more ^^ might take a few chapters though xD
Date: 07/16/08 07:15 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
:DDDDDD so stoked to see this updated.
I love Tom. ^_^ XD
Author's Response: :D
Date: 07/16/08 07:12 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
You are back! Great chapter,as always :)
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 07/16/08 07:11 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
Ah yes we're learning more! woo hoo that makes me happy. This chapter was really cute.
Author's Response: Thank yooouuu ^^