Date: 07/25/08 01:24 pm Title: I. Chapter Six
O.O why didn't Bill react?
what is he actually doing in that club? I don't believe he just works there... maybe its just me being suspicious, but yeah
tnx for the update!
xxx
Date: 07/25/08 01:14 pm Title: I. Chapter Six
Shit, yes. And by the way, I wouldn't mind if Bill was a pedophile XD
Date: 07/25/08 01:12 pm Title: I. Chapter Six
That was a bit of an arseholey thing to do. * scowls at Bill *
Aww no, poor Tom. I hope Bill isn't gonna start being a jerk. Love this story! x
Date: 07/25/08 01:09 pm Title: I. Chapter Six
Why is Bill doing that? ):
I'm gonna have to waiiiiit.
I loved it btw. (:
Date: 07/25/08 01:07 pm Title: I. Prologue
Is all of this going to be Tom POV?
And don't worry about your writing, its still amazing! :D
Date: 07/25/08 12:07 am Title: I. Prologue
i just need mooooooooooooore
omg
it was so.. *breathless*
^______^
Date: 07/24/08 06:43 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
Aww uber cute chapter! Nervous tom is so adorable!! Keep it up XD
Date: 07/24/08 04:06 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
I loved it! :D
I haven't been able to read anything the last week since my laptop charger died. -_-'
And I'll have to wait 2 more weeks until I get the new charger >_<
(I'm borrowing my dad's computer now).
Anyway, now I'm being very off-topic, so once and again: I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
Date: 07/23/08 09:54 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
i really like your story. i like all of your stories. you write it beautifully ;)but anyways theres like, no other way you could write this chapter. well done. cant wait for your next update :P
Date: 07/21/08 05:04 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
this is turning out really good cant wait for the next chapter.
oh! and just a suggestion can you make tom and bill take turns being the bottom? lol
that would be so hot if tom was on the bottom.. just once?
Author's Response: Haha, I'll see what I can do ^^
Date: 07/19/08 11:24 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
I loved it, bill and tom are just so cute (^_^)
Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Date: 07/19/08 10:19 am Title: I. Chapter Five
OMG! I love this chapter! now we know (almost) what bill's job is.
I also loved the moment where Bill tells tom that school's important. Tom didn't even argue, he simply nodded,looking bill in the eye.He's hypnotised!! makes him sooo cute!
Bill's personnality is so interesting.He's the kind of person whose hidden parts you want to know about.He goes straight to the point and speaks frankly.He seems so...Carefree!It's understandable how tom got attracted so bad.Tom must wonder how can bill be so relaxed and all,talking nonchalantly of him being gay as if he was talking about the weather.The way you discribe everything about bill makes him "special".I don't know how to express what i want to say XD,major lack of vocabulary in english i guess.Sometimes i wish it were my mothertongue.
Tom's question shows how confused he still is ne? I mean, he's always so tense and when i read about him,i imagine him all nervous and at the same time seeking attention from bill.He's a teen looking for something:attention. And bill gives him that plus a certain sense of security.
That all my impressions about this chapter^^(hope you're not too annoyed).
I'm still wondering about Bill's job...Maybe he didn't tell tom everything and if tom can sneak in one night he would be surprised? O_O(i'm imagining things,sorry XD)
Anyway, i think that being with bill will change tom and he'll grow a bit more confident?Protective,caring and see that his life's not wasted? And what about his parents?Aaaaaah? I have so many questions XD! I can't help it! you brought me into the fic, now that i'm all in, it's hard not to wonder about everything in it.
I like it that you don't rush anything(that's why i love every fic you write,because as it progress,it's worth all the waiting,making the end special and more intense!)
Now,i'm patiently waiting for the next chap! see ya^_^
Andy.
Author's Response: oh, wow, haha. You sure get into the story! That's good ^^ Well, I hope your questions will be answered in further chapters, and I'm glad you're liking it so far :)
Date: 07/19/08 03:52 am Title: I. Chapter Five
Awesome! I love it when Bill tells Tom, 'welcome to the dark side'. :D
I can never think of Bill as an old man. Hahaha, and now I'm getting a bad mental image. Hoho. Update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, I'll update asap ^^
Date: 07/18/08 06:17 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
I loved it! I've been procrastinating on my reading and finally had the chance to check this out. It was truly amazing! Love it! Oh Tom, just admit you're hot for Bill!! Looking forward to more XD
Author's Response: Thank you! I#m glad you're reading and enjoying this too! :D I'll update asap ^^
Date: 07/17/08 10:47 am Title: I. Chapter Five
That was such a cute chapter!
I think on some level, Bill knows that on has a crush on him.
Dont worry about the late update, I totally understand about the laptop being a willy wonka with you lol, I dont mind waiting if the chapters are as cute as this one lol!
Author's Response: aw, thanks a lot, glad you like it so much :)
Date: 07/17/08 09:33 am Title: I. Chapter Five
that was sweet
tnx for the update!
xxx
Author's Response: Thank you ^^
Date: 07/17/08 06:51 am Title: I. Chapter Five
I love this story so much.
Awkward!Tom makes me smile.
:]
Author's Response: Glad you like it :)
Date: 07/17/08 04:59 am Title: I. Chapter Five
it was amazing! Just like the rest of the story! I'm reading it only now, but i enjoyed it really much! it's so unique!! =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're reading and liking it :D
Date: 07/17/08 04:40 am Title: I. Chapter Five
Lord...I can't stop reading this over and over. I fear I may be addicted.
I also wanted to say that I feel that there's a lot more to Bill than meets the eye. I feel he didn't finish school himself from his comment to Tom. I feel that he's strangely testy about his job because he gets a bit standoffish whenever Tom questions him on stuff. I don't know if I'm reading that wrong or what.
I just think there's a darkness to Bill that lying there underneath the surface. I don't really think he's dangerous--at least not to Tom--but I feel there's a lot more to him that what he's showing Tom right now. Gosh this is driving me crazy wondering. LOL!
Author's Response: I love how you analyze everything xD I'm not gonna tell you whether you're right or not though :p But you'll find out ;)
Date: 07/17/08 02:46 am Title: I. Chapter Five
Haha that was so cute!
I feel like Bill's just gonna break Tom's heart.
Author's Response: Thank you! I guess you'll have to read on to find out whether your feeling's right ^^