Date: 07/08/09 10:59 am Title: II. Chapter One
I didn't find it boring at all! :) Instead, I was actually a lot thrilled to see some action between them again, and I must admit I love the way Tom behaves now, it's so realistic it seems like watching a real life scene playing before me! :) Wonderful, as always. *hearts in her eyes* Oh look, I found the girl pretty hasty and SO possessive, I don't like the way she behaved when she suddenly saw people in TOM's home - not even their own or her own... gosh, she's been so rude *glares at her* I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! *itches*
Date: 07/07/09 07:07 pm Title: II. Chapter One
plzplzplzpzl update sooooon thx soso much=]=] i luvz thiz=]
Date: 07/07/09 07:07 pm Title: II. Chapter One
plzplzplzpzl update sooooon thx soso much=]=] i luvz thiz=]
Date: 07/07/09 06:06 pm Title: II. Chapter One
Its not boring, but I wish the chapters were longer. You're an amazing writer (:
Date: 07/07/09 12:00 pm Title: II. Chapter One
GAH!!!
They're FINALLY back together and now Tom has a blonde? Damn damn damn...
Anyway, go on.
Date: 07/07/09 08:45 am Title: II. Chapter One
-tries not to murder Claire for ruining the moment-
ugh.. need. more.
Date: 07/07/09 07:38 am Title: II. Chapter One
Divine. Im so in love wi this story
Date: 07/07/09 06:35 am Title: II. Chapter One
How could anyone find this story boring? It's so good and I literally squealed when I saw this story had been updated!
Update soon? I really can't wait till the next chapters.
Date: 07/07/09 04:25 am Title: II. Chapter One
How sweet *loves*
Yes, they need to talk. Tom is sad because Bill left, and I hope Bill tries to make things right.
Good chapter ;)
Date: 07/07/09 04:18 am Title: II. Chapter One
waaaaaaaaa *cries*
I want more!!! MORE!!! AND MOREEEEEEEEE!
*blushes* I think i already like this story more that 'oh brother', and that had been one of my fave stories since i read that first... about a year ago.... omfg.
I NEED MORE OF THIS RIGHT NOW CUZ I JUST WANNA SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN + I WANNA SEE HOW TOM WILL BREAK UP WITH HIS GIRLFRIEND AND THEY WILL HAVE SEX WITH BILL AND HAVE MANY MAN BABIES!!! 
Date: 07/07/09 03:12 am Title: II. Chapter One
I totally forget there were more parts xD I'm sooo stupid xD But yeah, a whole new beginning!! I love it :D I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 07/07/09 02:48 am Title: II. Chapter One
Update!!!
Finally they are talking again, oh Bill looks to be very shy, Tom was the one who was shy but now is different...
Mmm I donn't like Claire I don't know why...she is not a bad person (I think) but she looks like to be a little possessive, maybe I'm wrong... well I don't know.
I want to know what happened with Bill, why he left and why he is back after 4 years??... I want to know everything!!! XD
Great chap! I will be waiting for another, one take care!
Date: 07/07/09 02:27 am Title: II. Chapter One
Tom, just get rid of that girlfriend of yours! She's no use there! You don't love her as you love Bill and we all know!
Date: 07/07/09 01:31 am Title: II. Chapter One
It's not boring- I'm just impatient for more chapters xD
Date: 07/07/09 01:08 am Title: II. Chapter One
No, it wasn't boring at all. Girl, I don't think this story could ever be boring. I'm pretty sure I'm starting to repeat myself, and for that, I apologize. But I'm still entranced and I still squee every time this updates. :)
Date: 07/07/09 12:25 am Title: I. Prologue
Evil. Evil! EVIL!
Evilevilevilevilevil!!!
Have I mentioned that you are evil?
Date: 07/06/09 11:51 pm Title: II. Chapter One
Yay! I want to learn more about Bill!
Claire didn't seem a nice person, by the way. Of course, it's too soon to make conclusions, but she just seems pushy and unfriendly.
Date: 07/06/09 10:13 pm Title: II. Chapter One
Mmmm... I need more action! This chapter was definitely too short, but I totally understand the heat making it difficult to concentrate! Do you need someone to buy you a fan to help you write? ;-)
Date: 07/06/09 09:28 pm Title: II. Chapter One
Yay for the update. Can I stab Claire? I mean, I don't have a problem with her, but she's find of in the way, that's all XD Gustav was so adorable as a little kid. . . .Random I know, sorry Xd
Date: 07/06/09 09:23 pm Title: II. Chapter One
NOt a lot happens, but happens enough. So sorry heat is killing you so badly. I understand you perfectly. Let's hope next chapter comes soon.