Date: 08/06/08 11:20 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
This was SOO amazingly cute. i just love this story. it's the best. you're like one of my favorite authors on here, if not my favorite. i hope you'll be able to update soon! can't wait!!!
Date: 08/06/08 10:44 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
Oh yes, this was nice, thank you! Just the smallest touch, SOMETHING...I'm so glad to see it. I understand why it took so long, but I think I was as anxious for it as Tom! lol Nicely done :)
Date: 08/06/08 10:41 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
i love you. that is all.
Date: 08/06/08 10:37 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
Im in love with this story i think.
Every time i see an update i get some stupid grin on my face ahaha
awesome work and i can't wait till the next chapter!
Date: 08/06/08 09:32 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
ahaaaaaaa.....updates.......ahhhhhhh...love it!!!!!
Date: 08/06/08 09:29 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
Its sooooo cuuuuuuute
Date: 08/06/08 08:30 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
I didn't see any mistakes. >
Date: 08/06/08 07:52 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
Awwww, Tom is adorable. He seems so innocent and... lost? i dno what word to use.
ohh, Naive! thats it.
i love this; Bill is so lovely (:
Date: 08/06/08 07:47 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
so sweeeeeeet *_* (L)
lovethislovethislovethis >:D
Date: 08/06/08 07:47 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
Can I have more?
Date: 08/06/08 07:06 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
I love this story! I squealed when I found out you'd updated, haha. I'm so glad that Tom has finally admitted his feelings, but how does Bill feel? Was that a "I like you, too" smile, or a "How cute! He has a crush on me!" smile? *haha* At any rate, I'm glad he's put it out there. Hope to read more soon!
Date: 08/06/08 06:28 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
YES! YES OH GOD YES!! SWEET GOODNESS, THIS WAS WONDERFUL! I've been waiting for this for what seemed like an eternity, considering that it's one of my EVER-FAVOURITE stories, and this was totally worth the wait :D I've loved the tension and the small action, but I'm a bit disappointed at Bill's reaction too... why couldn't he had done a bit more? Doesn't he feel the same maybe? I'm afraid he's just consenting Tom but not coming back to his feelings :( though I'm glad you clarifyed what happened in the tube ;)
I hope you'll post soon and more and uhhh X3 I'm just going CRAZY! CRAZY OVER THIS. Luvvv.
Date: 08/06/08 06:14 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
Eeek Congrats to Tom for manning-up haha.
Date: 08/06/08 06:09 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
*rolls around* Love this.
Date: 08/06/08 05:59 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
OMG! The last bit was so cute! *melts*
Date: 08/06/08 05:47 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
Very cute! I loved it!
Date: 08/06/08 05:47 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
Date: 08/06/08 05:38 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
It's so sweet. ^_^
I loved it.
Date: 08/06/08 05:32 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
Cant they just kiss, god damn it!! xD
Date: 08/06/08 05:30 pm Title: I. Chapter Seven
I was hiding behind my hands for the last part of this, I was proper cringing! and for the getting out of the pond part
I'm still not ecstatic about an older Bill, but I do love this fic, big surprise there
I want Bill and Tom to get together, but I just can't stop thinking about Bill being older, yet it really works
Oh, and I hope you like living in London, just make sure if you ever come up North you drop me or Paradox a line.