Date: 06/10/09 04:24 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
Woah... So hot. They made out... finally! *grin*
I loved the chappie, plz update soooon!! Need to know what's gonna happen! :]
Date: 06/10/09 03:51 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
Oh My God.
It's so sweet! Believe me, I was almost crying. I wanna read more lol
Thank you so much for posting
Author's Response: Aw, don't cry! But I'm glad the story made you feel something :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/10/09 03:03 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD!!!
Why stop now?! Bring it on again! And don't you dare to make Bill change his mind!
Author's Response: lol, I'm going to the beach all day today, but I'll continue writing as soon as I'm back home and if I finish before 2am I'll post it today ;)
Date: 06/10/09 02:26 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
And I can't believe there was a cliffie..
*runs to a corner and watch the minutes pass for another update*
I wonder what happened to Bill to make him say those words..-____-
Mooooooooorrreeee...XD
Author's Response: Sorry :) I'll update as soon as I can, which might be today!
Date: 06/10/09 02:21 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
I'm not sure if I wrote anything before, I think not.
But I like this! It's not surprise, I just love your stories (like I told you that Valentines Day is at my TOP2). This is different, it's not moving to fast or slow, you really live the story with the characters.
Keep up the good work with all of your stories! :)
xx
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm glad you like this too, thanks a lot :)
Date: 06/10/09 02:12 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
OMG!!!! this chapter was just great!!
U are making this story soooo prefect, I really love it...
I hope Bill finds love with Tom... :D
Author's Response: Aw, thank you :) Glad you enjoy it so much!
Date: 06/10/09 01:33 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
Wow, another whole new part :D I loved the chapter!! *reads it again and again...* I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll do my best to update asap ;)
Date: 06/09/09 11:49 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
Oh dear sweet and merciful gods...you left it there?!?
*rocks in corner while babbling*
Oh my gosh. Is this really happening? Is Tom dreaming? Oh my goodness this chapter took my breath away and they didn't really do anything except kiss--which was hot by itself. I kept screaming for Tom to move his goddamn hand!
LOL!
You, missy, like to tease us. I'm not making you cupcakes anymore--until you update again of course.
But...but...Bill doesn't believe in love? That is so bizarre for someone to say. What I mean is, I can understand if he was in love before and it ended badly and now he's cynical and jaded about relationships. But for him to say he's never loved anyone and no one has loved him...
Is Bill an alien? Has he just miraculously appeared in this location on Earth and will pack up and fly back home when the winds change? OMG, that's it, isn't it? *goes to check story categories for Sci-fi/supernatural label* Okay there isn't any sci-fi or paranormal or supernatural or fantasy in your story apparently, so I'm still back at square one with Bill. Who I hope is going to ravish and be ravished in the next chapter.
Or just have Tom move his hand. Please. He's so close. So. Close. LOL
Great job as usual, and I appreciate you staying up and posting even this bit for us, so thanks for that. Come back soon! :DDDD
I still think Bill is an alien. *pouts*
Author's Response: Sorry :3 Don't worry about the Bill-no-love thing, I didn't just randomly throw that in as an explanation as to why he always pushes Tom away (usually ;p) There will be more on that to clear things up ;) He probably is an alien though, I find he's a bit weird... but then again he sprung from my very strange mind :'D Thank you! There might be an update today later on, depending on how long I'm at the beach for... *looks forward to getting a cupcake*
Date: 06/09/09 10:57 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
I loveee thisss
Author's Response: :D
Date: 06/09/09 10:22 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
awww Bill doesnt believe in love... i liked this chap very much, please update soon :P
Date: 06/09/09 10:10 pm Title: I. Prologue
Oh, holy HELL - please don't go away for a long time again!!!! I REEEAAALLLYYY need the next chapter!
Date: 06/09/09 10:07 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
This may end up being my favorite story of yours. I'm such a huge fan of your other stories, I think that's saying a lot. This chapter was so, so good. :)
Author's Response: Aw thank you, that's so nice to hear! I'm glad to see you're still reading my stories, and like this one so much :)
Date: 06/09/09 10:03 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
OMG
I can't believe that Bill actually wanted Tom in a sexual way..
Date: 06/09/09 09:57 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
plzplz update soon thx soso much=]=]
Date: 06/09/09 09:55 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
I certainly LOVE this chapter :) I found myself holding my breath right up until the very end, this whole scene was just beautifully carried out, you don't need to worry at all!
The only thing that threw me off a little tiny bit, to be totally honest, was the mention of Bill feeling 'an unwanted stir in his belly'. Up until now, Bill has been very mysterious to us because we can only really see him through Tom's eyes, we only get Tom's observations to go and make our own interpretations of. So that minor and really quick shift to seeing something from Bill's perspective kind of felt a little wrong to me. Was there a reason that you put that in, though? Is it a sign we'll be seeing more from Bill's perspective soon? I kind of like how mysterious he is in this, watching Tom slowly unravel him, but that could be interesting, too :)
Author's Response: Thank you! That's very nice to hear :) As for the perspective thing: you're right, it's mainly from Tom's perspective but I'm sure I've thrown in a little of Bill here and there! In chapter nine I mentioned him feeling a soothing tingling sensation when Tom caressed his guitar, for example. I'm surprised it threw you off, but I'm sorry it did! The story will continue being mainly Tom's perspective but you might find a few of Bill's thoughts or feelings thrown in once in a while. I'm never going to give away too much about how he feels, though. He'll remain as mysterious as he is, don't worry ;)
Date: 06/09/09 09:34 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
;o
i really like this story :d
i cant wait for the next one, you should update it as soon as you can.. im hooked
Date: 06/09/09 09:26 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
man this was soooooooooooooo cute and soooooooooooooooo effing HOT!
Get some rest chick!
Date: 06/09/09 09:21 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
*sputters*
Oh...omigosh. Such a mean cliffhanger xD How dare you! *lol*
(I squealed when you said that this was only the FIRST part! :D God, I'm glad this story will be around for a while =])
♥
Date: 06/09/09 09:14 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
love this ^_^