Date: 06/11/09 10:34 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
I've been enjoying this fabulous story for ages and am so glad you've been able to come back to it!
Date: 06/11/09 09:59 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
omg (L) I love insecure Tom ^^
I have an exam tomorrow, so I'll write a longer review next time :3 hahah
Date: 06/11/09 04:11 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
hi, so I feel the need to let you a proper review, since my last review (on summer blossoms) was REALLY short, but I read it on my Itouch, and I really can't type on that thing, so yeah...
so first of all I wanted to let you know how EXTREMELY exited I am that your back! *squeezes*
I actually never thought you'd return, I figured you got bored with writing or something, but her you are! yay ^^
Secondly, I just adore you're stories. They are so well written, end you can really feel what the characters are feeling. I also like the fact that you don't end your stories when they're finally together, you actually let us have a glimps at the reationship. There are loads of stories on here, in which the boys dance around eachother the whole story, and then, when they finally end up together, that's the end. I mostly like to read about the part AFTER thet get together. you get what I mean? xD
oh, and I don't kow if you actually remember, but when you wrote 'barefoot' I looked for the movie, and watched it. Well, I just wanted to let you know that a couple weeks ago, I showed it to my mom and she also loved the movie ^^
it's really beautifuul!
anyway, I think this counts as a proper review.
Did I actually say anything thing about this chapter? hms... well, let me just say that I like the fact that you made Tom the insecure one. Mostly it's the other way around, but I like shy and insecure Tom. It makes me want to hug him :D
x
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad you're excited about my 'return', and even more glad you like my stories and the way I go about with the characters relationships in them :) The movie is beautiful, isn't it? I couldn't help but imagine Bill in the woman's place throughout the entire film lol he just makes a very good vulnerable mental person :3 Glad you like the Tom I 'created' for this story, too. Thank you!
Date: 06/10/09 11:08 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
This was a mean cliffhanger! But it was a good chapter. A little short, but I liked it. I want more! You are doing a great job of picking up where you left off.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! That's good to hear, glad you're liking the story :)
Date: 06/10/09 09:39 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
Oh, that's something new! Love it love it, love it!
Date: 06/10/09 03:39 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
hehehe, I love this chapter :) Bill and saying how he doesn't believe in love, but then him and Tom :) and oh :) you just write them so well together :)
"Some people would frown upon a romantic relationship between a seventeen and a twenty year old, but in a few years time those three years won't mean a thing."
Its so true, and I'm so glad that you recognized that in here :) some people just forget about it, but you didn't :) lol, so glad about that :) so part two coming soon right? :)
Author's Response: Thank you! & you're right, as far as I remember I have gotten a few reviews saying how Bill might be a pedophile or how the age difference is kind of weird. But if Tom were twenty and Bill twenty three, nobody would find that odd! And it's not even time for part two! Part one isn't finished yet ;) I mentioned there being two parts to this story in the prologue but I figured many people might have forgotten so I thought I'd mention it again :3
Date: 06/10/09 02:23 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
hmm..i kinda liked this chapter...i want the next part!
Date: 06/10/09 01:59 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
I love this story with all my heart. It's so innocent and beautiful. You are one of my favorite authors on this site, truly.
Author's Response: Wow, you do know how to compliment someone! Thanks a lot, that's very nice to hear! :)
Date: 06/10/09 01:20 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
I liked everything in this chapter (loved the last part) except for the I love you.
Honestly, why do it? I went as red as a tomato.
Poor boy!
It was cute though, I'll give him that, though he seemed so much younger once he'd said it, especially with Bill's reaction.
Oh, oh oh oh oh oh.
That Tom would handle Bill with just as much care, seriously, that proper did things inside of me.
And then him actually treating BIll like that, guuuh.
Author's Response: Oh I know I know I know, I cringed writing it! But it had to be done and now it's over and done with haha. Let's see whether Tom can handle Bill so gently in other places too... ;p
Date: 06/10/09 12:43 pm Title: I. Prologue
Ahhhh, now that you mention it, I do remember those bits from Bill! Maybe it was because I was just so in the moment that it affected me this time - but I think that says a lot about the moment ;D
Thanks for your response!
Author's Response: That's what I thought after having responded to your review and re-read the chapter! The chapter is very 'in the moment' from Tom's perspective, I can imagine that one feeling coming from Bill might have come across a bit odd to some readers :)
Date: 06/10/09 12:31 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
*squeal!* Seriously, much more of that? O_O I damn, I'm in heaven.
Date: 06/10/09 12:23 pm Title: I. Chapter Ten
O.O Bill is so dumb sometimes, he's got love dancing naked while squealing 'yay!' in front of him and he doesn't see it -_-' anyway, the chapter is so...full of this feeling I can't even start to describe, gah, I give up trying to explain myself. I love it.
Author's Response: Aw thank you, you don't have to explain, knowing that the chapter had a feeling to it at all is enough to make me happy :D
Date: 06/10/09 10:56 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
Awesome chapter! I'm so happy you're back :D
You really should like it, for a while it felt like the story was standing still, you know, but this is like a giant step forward! I'm so interested in Bill's story, why he won't believe in love and all that :)
Oh, and the most perfect song came up when I read, Heartbeats by José González. I don't know why, but it fit so good with the last part of the chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you! You're right it was standing still for a while but I had to go through all those Tom-visits-Bill chapters before moving on! Glad you liked it :D
Date: 06/10/09 10:49 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
GRRR! i have waited soo long for this story lol. i love it! please upload soon! this is one of my fave stories on this site! lol i dont know why lol but i just love it -Blushes- aww... bill dont belive in love well tomi's gonna change that right?! ;) teehee
Date: 06/10/09 10:37 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
aw, yay! This was lovely, not rushed at all or anything. Already awaiting the update :)
Author's Response: That's something I always worry about, so that's nice to hear! Thank you :)
Date: 06/10/09 08:24 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
I like this chapter :D !! pls update soon xx
Date: 06/10/09 07:49 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
You stopped there?! Cruel woman. lol. Love this story so much. Screw the beach or at least bring your laptop with you. You can always get a tan while writing :) Just kidding. I'm waiting (im)patiently for the next chapter.
Date: 06/10/09 07:14 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
Yes! I had to come back to the first chapters to remind me what was going on in this story, but I jumped back into the story very quickly. It´s perfect!
I love the way Bill becomes the less dominant and Tom gains his new role. It´s really exciting considering their different age, different life positions and inbetween the hot attraction.
Continue pls, you´re doing it so well!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you like it! I'll continue soon :)
Date: 06/10/09 06:54 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
I like their relationship. They treat each other very gently, and Bill did seem a little mysterious. I like a quiet, shy Tom once in awhile.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like their relationship and characters, thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 06/10/09 06:09 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
...wow...I need to catch my breath after that...Ok, I'm good! This was amazing, and I loved this chapter. You have to update soon, I won't be able to manage if this is left for a while!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm writing the next chapter 'as we speak' lol should be up soon ;)