Date: 06/11/09 12:31 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Don´t worry, the sex scene was really hot but what bothers me more is that the last sentences sounded like it was the last time they´ve seen each other. Tell me I´m wrong, pls.
Date: 06/11/09 12:31 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
... *Stares blankly at the nonexistant next button.*
*Tantrum.*
HOT, BUT I JUST WANT TO FREAKING CLICK NEXT.. ):
*Whine.*
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Date: 06/11/09 12:19 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
thank you =) that was very realistic and beautiful. I'm guessing Bill will leave the town now, right?
Date: 06/11/09 12:09 pm Title: I. Chapter Five
Sexy @ Bill describing a dude and making Tom snort. XD~
Author's Response: oooh nice to see you're reading this, too :)
Date: 06/11/09 12:07 pm Title: I. Chapter Four
I was just waiting for Tom to go tackle Bill on the bed. XD
I love this :D!
Date: 06/11/09 12:01 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
lovelyyyy you just take my breath away with this..
But I'm afraid that Bill leaves Tom I don't know why but I think he is going to leave.. I hope not...
OMG continue soon !! love so much this story!! .. In fact I love all ur stories :D
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, I'm glad you enjoy it so much :D
Date: 06/11/09 11:58 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Bill said 'Goodbye.' Bill does not say goodbye!
He says 'I'll see you.'
He's so leaving, isn't he?
That is why there was the suitcase and everything. =(
*is know going to read your bio because she's nosey*
Author's Response: You think so? Hm... I guess you'll have to wait and see :3
Date: 06/11/09 11:46 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Right, I was like, FINALLY a chapter that doesn't make I'd cringe with embarrasment! There was sex too, which made it all the better, then you had to go and make him appologise! Why? Seriously! Has the poor boy not suffered enough?
I did love it though, even if I'm dreading the awkwardness that I can tell you're planning for the next chapter.
Oh, the next chapter, (if it's not awkward) Bill's gonna be gone, isn't he? Or something like that, he was too sad not to be.
I'll be after you ifyou do something like that; I know where you live...well, I can find out, but I can make things happen, bad things.
You have no reason not to like this chapter, I frigging loved it
Author's Response: lol, sorry :3 The way you put it makes me actually feel sorry for what I put Tom through every chapter! I think if most of those awkward situations&conversations he's had with Bill in my story would have happened to me, I'd have probably not gone back to see Bill for ages :O And about Bill, I guess you'll just have to wait and see ;) Thanks a lot for the review, I'm so glad you liked the chapter, honestly! :)
Date: 06/11/09 11:45 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
nooo is bill leaving, well hope they can stay together, but maybe there`s something dark on bill like a secret right? well hope you update soon.
Date: 06/11/09 11:36 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Christ, I missed you. I'm excited to see how this progresses. Don't leave again, please!
Date: 06/11/09 11:22 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
gah so hot...
tomi boy needs more practice but bill will be there for him to do so...
hotness
Date: 06/11/09 11:17 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Jeez, you're churning them out now, aren't you?! But that's a good thing! ;) It wasn't awkward; it was actually quite cute, and I can totally imagine Tom leaving Bill's apartment all giddy and grinning and blushing with his guitar. :)) So sweet.
Date: 06/11/09 11:14 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
That was so lovely. I'm not liking Bill's secrets, though. He's too vague with Tom. He's leaving, isn't he? Poor Tom. He's gonna be so sad. At least high school is almost over and he can start anew or something. What's going on with Bill? Jesus!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah Bill is very vague with Tom, it's pretty unfair how he doesn't reveal a lot about him and keeps sending Tom mixed signals! You'll just have to wait and see :)
Date: 06/11/09 11:08 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
What what what? Why did Bill sound so... extreme? Like, you say "Goodbye" and "Take care" and smile sadly when someone leaves for long... ARGH! suitcase+sadsmile+takecare=IS BILL FUCKING LEAVINGGG????????? Oh just give me a clue please, I might just die if he was. O_O
As for the delicious stuff I read in this chapter... *O* you haven't lost your touch at all, miss! I must add it WAS hot and nice to read, I appreciated how their movements were clumsy at times but that's because of Tom's non existent experience and Bill's long lack of activity, lol. All I can say though is that they had got up a bit too quickly from the bed after it... I mean, I thought they'd have lingered a bit longer, no matter Tom had to be home early... am I wrong? And well, I also didn't really like what Bill said before, that he had never loved anyone and been loved by anyone, I don't really think it's true... is he always running away when he gets into something, like maybe he's doing even now, and that's why he hasn't loved anyone..? Oh gosh, you always leave me with more doubts than before I read! XD
I LOVED this quick post, let it be as quick again! I can absolutely and positively say this is my favourite story of your's. :) great job!
Author's Response: Sorry, I don't know whether Bill's leaving, you gotta ask him that ;p I'm glad you liked the 'action' and you're absolutely right. Bill ends it all way too quickly, getting up immediately after they finished whilst Tom still stayed in bed until Bill reminded him that he had to leave. And about the whole love thing, it will become more clear later on, it's not just thrown in as a quick explanation as to why Bill usually always pushed Tom away ;) I'm glad you like the story so much, thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 06/11/09 11:01 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
They had sex! Well.... kind of! But i loved this chapter!
Date: 06/11/09 10:54 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
That was interesting to say the least. I can't wait for more it will be interesting to see what happens next.
Date: 06/11/09 10:54 am Title: I. Chapter Ten
O_O OHHHHH, me likes! I'm so thrilled I'm not able to leave a proper review, I so want to go on, so see you in the next review!
Date: 06/11/09 10:48 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
I... I... I didn't like that Goodbye T____T *would say something else but her mind is focused on that word*
Author's Response: Sorry *giggles* :3
Date: 06/11/09 10:38 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
is bill leaving? the suitcase, the "goodbye" ?? :O he can't leave tomi behind!! I have a feeling some drama is on the way and i can't wait to read it. oh and this chap wasn't bad at all!! don't doubt yourself so much it's allways great, seriously!! i wish i could write as good as you do!! *hugs* xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always doubt myself ;p glad you enjoyed it :)