Date: 06/11/09 08:45 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Uh oh. He said 'goodbye', and I'm pretty sure he meant it. This doesn't look good for Tom and I think the next chapter is gonna just hurt.
And the sex was great...like you never left. :)
Date: 06/11/09 08:10 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
:) please keep writing,this is really good
xx
Date: 06/11/09 07:34 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
hehehehe :) lol, I couldn't tell that you hadn't written sex in ages, I'm horrible at writing it though, so yeah :) and I like even though they just had sex, Bill didn't seem to back away from what he said last chapter :) it is something very refreshing, that just because Tom kissed Bill, Bill didn't automatically go all mushy :) poor Tom, home by 7 :P I just keep waiting every chapter for Bill to up and leave, and it is scaring the begeebusses out of me. but so far that hasn't happened! *squeeze* :) hehehe, love it :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad to know it was alright :) let's see what the next chapter brings ;)
Date: 06/11/09 07:19 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
That was beyond amazing, thank you for making my day better.:).
Date: 06/11/09 07:02 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
yay, good good I loved it, please update soon I loved it XOXOXOXOXOXO
Date: 06/11/09 06:33 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
I know I know I know there's lots to come in this story but STILL, Bill saying "goodbye" and "take care" is like a...ZOMG moment to me. Well...no really, I've been afraid of him to be gone at every chapter, for some reason and... He wasn't...those were stuff he PACKED, not the stuff he hadn't unpacked yet? He's leaving alltogether or just...not seeing Tom anymore? I know I know, I'm not asking, I'll just read it from the upcoming chapters but just...I'm confuuuuuused! Bill's like all "I like you" "No, it's not your age. There's nothing wrong about you." "Hell, let's make out" and then...GOODBYE!? I mean, he's like all mature and stuff here, making Tom look like a lovesick puppy following Bill around and then Bill just...does 'stuff' with Tomi, makes him fall in love with him and all and the chakalakaboom, LEAVES!? O_o
Lol, I'm so babbling now. I'll just shut up now -_-'
Date: 06/11/09 05:29 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
man this was such a turn on! *giggles*
Love it a lot! Always smile when i see you've updated:D
Author's Response: Haha, nice to know, thank you! :)
Date: 06/11/09 05:25 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Readable? Are you kidding me!! It was the best nighttime story ever :P (that always includes the hottest sexscenes for me, me = perv, I know) :P I loved it!! I hope you continue soon :D
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Well, if you're perverted for liking my sex-scene, then I'm even more perverted for having come up with it! :'D I'm glad you enjoyed it though ;)
Date: 06/11/09 04:28 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
I decided to review this. Ah, I feel so bad that I haven't already haha. But better late than never, right?
So, this story is amazing. I like the way it develops and it makes me feel so... gah, like I can feel what Tom feels. It's just that clear to me. And I can't help but feel like the next chapter will be a very sad one. Don't make me cry, please! Lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter. LOVE this story.
Author's Response: Don't worry about not having reviewed before, I do that often ;) I'm glad you enjoy this story so much, and knowing that Tom's character is so clear to you makes me very happy :D Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 06/11/09 04:25 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
That was so cute =]
Uh-oh. That 'goodbye' and 'take care' didn't sound too good to me :O *whimpers*
Date: 06/11/09 03:42 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
oh gosh these two chapters were adorable! PLEASE UPDATE MORE SOON!
Date: 06/11/09 03:28 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Oh my God. I'm sad now. Please, please, tell me that Bill is going to stay. I have an awful thought... Bill is not going to leave without telling Tom, right?
Beautiful chapter, you are better than before and I still love you sooooooo much xD
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Better than before? Sounds good to me ;)
Date: 06/11/09 02:57 pm Title: I. Prologue
my theory, a wrong one, maybe:
- you said at the beginning that the 2nd part of the story would be with Tom older, I was asking myself since a few chapters ago when because you also said this first one would be quicker.I think now's the moment?
- so Bill was really paking his things,and this last scene was a goodbye
- and there's something strange in Bill still, I had a felling the reason why he wanted Tom to go away from the bar was another that not his age, I already forgot the stipper-theory at least LOL.
- and if you really do a 2nd part, I'm really excited to see Tom older, his new way to deal with things, maybe more curious to know about Bills misterious life, etc
Author's Response: You're right about there being a second part, and it being soon. But I can't tell you more than that ;) I'm glad you're looking forward to the second part though!
Date: 06/11/09 02:35 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Yay ! love this story ! Tom is just so cute !
Date: 06/11/09 02:11 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Wow! That was excellent. You have NO idea how excited I was when I saw this story on the recent stories list. This has been one my my favorites for such a long time and I was so sad when it stopped getting updated. I love Bill and Tom's personalities in this story; they are so refreshing and different.
You are an amazing writer! Evey sentence is beautiful and clever. I love it! Please please please update soon or I will just have to kid nap you, lock you up in my basement, and force you to write =D
Author's Response: Oh so many compliments, what a nice review :D haha, thanks a lot, I'm so glad you enjoy it so much and like the characters. Thanks! :)
Date: 06/11/09 01:55 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
bill is going to leave isn't he???
love this!!
i'm sooo glad you're back
Date: 06/11/09 01:33 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Bill is going to leave soon isn't he? D:
Date: 06/11/09 01:30 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
That was definitely readable! I'm not liking Bills goodbye at the end though, and the suitcases that were mentioned in the previous chapter. I hope you're not going to do what I think you're going to do! Update soon?
Date: 06/11/09 01:19 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Wauw, great chapter! No problems with the sex-scene at all XD
I'm a bit confused about the last sentence.. it sounds like Bill says 'forever-goodbye' to Tom :o
Don't let Bill leave! :P
Date: 06/11/09 12:58 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Oh my god why do I have the feeling that Bill's moving...
poor tomi...
will it be like ...2 years after and then when bill will come back to will have a girlfriend and drama drama drama..
gosh im so exited lol.
you can read that I loved it ..
like the sex scene was perfect for this non-couple...cuz tom is inexperienced...
so it was amazing.
your amazing
Author's Response: Hm, amazing sounds pretty good, haha! I'm glad you liked it, thanks a lot for reviewing! :)