Date: 06/21/09 10:07 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
*cries* just just...
*whimpers then sobs uncontrollably*
Author's Response: :O *gives donut*
Date: 06/21/09 09:52 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
Oh my Gosh, I fucking knew it..! Bill is such a coward... but oh wait, can't judge if I don't know what made him go away so quickly and "unexpectedly"... but I still hate him for what he did to Tom. That's immature, unfair, whatever bad adjective in the world. :/ I want more so badly! :x
Author's Response: Yeah it was kinda shitty from Bill to just up and leave without a word. BUT we don't know why he did, yet. So... gotta wait and see ;) thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/21/09 09:51 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
AHHHH!!!! *screams*
just when I thought Bill wasn't going to up and leave!!!! omg, that was tugging at my heart and I keep thinking, nuh-uh, nuh-uh, Bill did not just leave, he did not friggin' leave!!!! but part 2!!!!! WEEEE!!! that means Bill is coming back right? Or Tom finds Bill, or something....
“He left a note I think, he was very friendly!”
oh my, that line right there from Simone, that just hurt so badly, especially sort of seeing it from Tom's POV, and it was just, she doesn't understand how much that effects her son. "he was very friendly" It was just sort of, to me, the worse possible thing she could've said and it got me to start tearing up. And that she said it in past tense, no idea if you did that on purpose, but she said was, and ohh..... :'( make Tomi get better. Please? *puppy eyes* :)
Author's Response: aaaah I know I'm very mean to Tomi, poor thing. I'll try make him better :3 I felt bad for having made Bill come by and Tom miss it! But, ya know, that's life *shrugs* Now... let me go work on part two ;)
Date: 06/21/09 08:56 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
I fucking knew it! I said this was going to happen. I'm trying so hard to stop myself from calling you every name under the sun.
Erghhhhh
No.
I refuse to believe that he's gone!
Fucking shitting bloody cunting hell!
He's back next chapter, right?
I can't even write a proper review, so I promise to leave a good one next chapter, which will be written soon and in it you will make everything better, allowing me to love you once more.
Author's Response: hahaha sowwy :3 poor tom, i make him suffer so much *sigh* thanks for reviewing ;)
Date: 06/21/09 05:14 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
I totally missed your update! I put in in my favourites as well as in my tracking list just so I wouldn't miss it and still I did. Hmm. Didn't get a mail like I usually do. Anyway, absolutely loved the entire scene and you're in no way rusty. lol. very hot indeed. *fans self*
Date: 06/18/09 02:56 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
it was way too readable :D
aww i still dont get bill... this is worrying me, i dont want tomi to get hurt in the future cuz of bill nonlovelife he got *pfft* anyway, i do love ur stories! :D keep it up n sowwie about the other review with nothing on it... the mouse just gave click n there u go *cries*
Date: 06/16/09 10:52 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Awwe, i love this story so much. I'm so glad that you continued with this one because i love it so much :)
Thanks for coming back, i missed your fics! :D
-Andi
Date: 06/15/09 04:48 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
It was so sweet and hot at the same time!! I like the fic so much! I liked every much Tom`s blossoming feelings and Bill`s hesitant behaviour. It made the story more exiting!!! I hope that you update soon, becasuse I want to know what will be happen:-)
Date: 06/13/09 12:49 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
What in the blue hell?....How did I miss this update? *notices the date posted* Yep, somehow this chapter slipped by me originally, so that is why I didn't review until now. Forgive me. :D
This was a nice, fumbling kind of moment for Tom and Bill. For Tom, because it's really the first time he's ever done anything intimate with a guy and for Bill, because he can't see that he's got something special with Tom. Oh my...it was hot though. *fans self* Especially when Tom hesitated and Bill drew his hand down, down, down. ;) I don't know why, but I liked that part.
Now. I'm debating on whether or not to give you cupcakes b/c you DID apparently update two stories in one day, but what is up with this "Goodbye" that Bill said at the end of the chapter, missy? You may not get cupcakes for that. *mock glares* Seriously, no one says something final like that unless you're intending not to see that person again for awhile--or if ever. So his goodbye, his sad look and his half packed suitcases (I knew his bullshit explanation that he hasn't completely unpacked yet after two months was just that: bullshit) all point to the fact that I think he's leaving. Oh my God...Tom will fall apart.
So yeah...I'm thinking you only get half a cupcake for torturing me like this. And then you're apparently going to be away for the entire weekend and I'll cry because you've spoiled us so with these wonderful updates. *looks forlorn* Perhaps you should have the whole cupcake after all. *nudges it over reluctantly* You're an awesome writer, so you deserve it. :D
So yeah, I'm recapping here with Bill. 1)He's very strange 2)His neighbor told Tom he's bad news and to stay away from him 3) He always seems to be meeting strange people in the park. Sometimes strange, rough looking people 4) He doesn't talk much about himself 5) He apparently doesn't have any friends or social life...just works and comes home 6) He has been at this apartment for an unknown amount of time and so far as I know, it seems to have no other furnishings except for the kitchen table and the bed in the bedroom. There are also no other personal touches to make the place Bill's, you know? and most importantly--and also bizarre-ly--Bill tells Tom that he has never loved anyone and no one has ever loved him in return.
What the fuck? O_O I am totally even more confused than when I first started this story. I trust that you'll get us there--explanation and all--but really, I can't help thinking that either Bill is really shady (or disturbed) or he's running from something bad, because I'm starting to think he doesn't stay in one place too long.
Are you sure he's not an alien? LOL.
Good job, hon. I dread what happens next if Bill is, in fact, leaving. He will absolutely crush Tom. :(
Keep up the great work. And hope you have fun with your friends this weekend. And be careful in the water. OMG, I sound like a mother. Sorry. *sheepish look*
Author's Response: Haha thanks for the cupcake :D I'm sorry for confusing you so much lol but I'm glad you can't quite figure out what's going on just yet, because you're not supposed to ;) I guess you'll have to wait and see whether Bill does actually leave... I'm glad you're enjoying it though, thanks a lot :)
Date: 06/12/09 11:37 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
El final del capítulo me dio mal presentimiento, la despedida de Bill parece definitiva :S
Justo cuando por fin tienen un acercamiento íntimo...Tom estará muy triste. Bill no debió darle esperanzas =/
De repente todo parece tan triste cuando solamente era algo adorable ;_;
Espero que lo puedas continuar pronto, estoy impaciente por ver si ocurre lo que todos creemos. Genial el capítulo como siempre ;)
Si no entiendes el review puedo volver a escribir en inglés xD y por cierto, tu bio es muy cool, un poco larga pero interesante :P
Author's Response: muchas gracias! no hace falta escribir los reviews otra vez en ingles ;) me alegro mucho que te guste esta historia, continuare mas antes posible :)
Date: 06/12/09 06:13 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
aww=[ billa gonna eave isnt he=[...no he cant leave..aww im gonna cry alreadey and it hasnt happened yet=[
Date: 06/12/09 12:30 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
I've only just found this story and it's so interesting and intriguing! However, it's bugging me, that it's a work in progress, I'm just the kind of person that loves to learn everything at once))) I'm practically itching to read more! Especially since Bill has so many secrets to reveal. There's something strange about his work, isn't it? Like his bartender job is only a cover for something illegal and he's ashamed of it. And he's leaving, isn't he? Hence his open suitcase and sad goodbye... Is it where the first part of your story ends? Ohmygooood, I'm dying for an update, please, continue soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you find my story interesting and are willing to read on! :D Bill is an enigma, yes. You'll have to wait and see about Bill's 'secrets', I'll update soon ;)
Date: 06/12/09 09:49 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
“Goodbye,” Bill smiled sadly, watching the dreadlocked boy hop down the stairs happily. “Take care.”
Oh no! That doesn't sound good. Why does that sound as though Bill is not going to see Tom again?!
I loved this chapter. They're beautiful together. Don't break Tom's heart!
*begs*
Date: 06/12/09 08:30 am Title: I. Prologue
hmm The Readers?:D
Date: 06/12/09 07:04 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
that was really beautiful.
i enjoyed the sex scene, wasnt readable, was just delicious.
although i feel anxious, i am afraid that bill has a secret n going hurt tom.
we ll see.
write moreeeeeeeee, when u are able too.
kiss
Date: 06/12/09 03:34 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Yay you're back! I know it's silly, but I've missed you and your fantastic stories. I've reread your stories so many times I have lost count :O) Glad to hear you "just" moved and didn't lost interest in TH/fanfictions about them - made my day!
Now, back to what I'm supposed to review :D This is something else and IMO its refreshing from some of the others... I cannot wait to see where you are taking this story and there are so many mysteries to be revealed yet -squee!
Take care!
Date: 06/12/09 01:43 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
goodbye doesnt sound too good
Date: 06/12/09 12:33 am Title: I. Chapter Eleven
I feel like Bill is going to leave... T_T
Date: 06/11/09 10:28 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
Now that was definitely hot. I don't think you had anything to worry about, haha. What does worry me is the fact that Bill said "goodbye." It sounded kind of final... and that makes me sad.
:(
Date: 06/11/09 09:00 pm Title: I. Chapter Eleven
amaziiinngg.. hmm make tom a LITTLE more cocky just a little