Date: 06/21/09 11:40 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
Oh my God. I'm speechless. Speechless.
*whimpers* I can't even formn words right now. I suspected Bill was going but for some reason it still shocked me. How is this possible? *wails*
FIX IT!!!! *puppy eyes*
Date: 06/21/09 09:01 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
That's a great end to the first part. I'm so excited for part 2! What's the mystery with Bill? And how are he and Tom going to meet up again? In how many years? This is so exciting! Poor Tomi! It's like he had his heart stomped on and then handed back.
Date: 06/21/09 07:37 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
*wibbles* It's so heartbreaking, Tom coming back day after day for weeks. I can't wait for your update and the second part of this story. I'm so curious how you're gonna fix this...'cause you're gonna fix it, right? right? ;)
Date: 06/21/09 07:21 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
I knew that was coming, you evil, evil, woman. Now I'm just going to sit and wait (im)patiently for Bill to return and explain what the hell he left for :)
Date: 06/21/09 05:54 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
O__O Omg D: Where's Bill? awwh, poor Tomi :( But I liked this chpater, it explains alot XD
Date: 06/21/09 05:47 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
awwwwwwwww, feel so sorry for tom! And he kept going and going:(
but they'll meet again ja? :D
Date: 06/21/09 04:14 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
Ö Oh noes!!! I love it!! Poor Tomi!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 06/21/09 04:00 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
Oh, where did Bill gone?? And by whom is he persecuted??Poor Tom:-( I feel so sorry for him... I really really hope that Bill will return!!
Please update as soon as you can!!!
Date: 06/21/09 02:55 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
awww he left .. I knew it!!!
Now... what's going to happen with Tom?? D:
Girl don't make jokes like that haha this can't finish like that!
I will be waitign 4 the next chapter!!!
Date: 06/21/09 02:46 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
SKDFHJLABSFKADHKBJLAD
WHERE IS BILL? :(
Date: 06/21/09 01:48 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! What a punch in the gut for Tom. :(
Date: 06/21/09 01:42 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
ARGH! The hell!? O_O Bill back, now! ;__;
And you don't even KNOW how many flying daggers and frying pans you would've gotten after you if THIS would've really been THE END. XD
Date: 06/21/09 01:25 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
OMG NO!!!!!!!!!!! he better come back, or Tom better find him, this is so sad. I cant believe he would up and leave especially after what happened. I wanna know who those guys were that the old lady was tlking about. Please update soon with some answers Please XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Date: 06/21/09 12:54 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
God, Im crying so hard right now. I don't even see what im writing here... *wipes her tears*
I already knew from the 'goodbye' that Bill said in the last chaper that he was going to be gone.......
waaah. I hate everything sad. And im a baby about cryig, but i don't care! I love this story too much, and i feel so bad about Tomi. :(
Please update soon, and make everything okay!! Make them meet sooon again, pleasseeee! *sniffles*
:(
Date: 06/21/09 11:48 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
This story intrigues me! I like the way you write. Bill is very mysterious. What is the deal with him? Why did he just leave like that? And i knew he was leaving by the way he said goodbye.
Add more soon!
Date: 06/21/09 11:24 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
Awwww poor Tomi I feel bad...
Date: 06/21/09 11:16 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
I was expecting bill to leave but why am I still crying like a baby?? So awesome!
Date: 06/21/09 11:06 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
BIll's gone..*sniff*
And there's another thing that breaks my heart.. Damn you TOM!! DAMN YOU!!
Thank you for the update.. Although it's a sad chapter, I'm still thankful for an update.T^T Will it take weeks, months, a few years for them to meet again?-____-
Date: 06/21/09 11:05 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
I knew it! I knew it!
I knew Bill was leaving... But OMG! Big scary men??
Bill!! What have you gotten yourself into??
Poor Tom... Just poor Tom. =(
The next chapter will be the start of the second half, right?
So I'm guessing that it will be a few years later. Tom will have grown up and he will meet up with Bill again?
Will Bill explain why he left? Will he explain everything?? *keeps asking questions till she faints from lack of oxygen*
Gaaa can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 06/21/09 10:28 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
Oh my god! BRING BILL BACK TO TOM!!!! I feel so alone.... HRM.. Tom feel so alone... lol. PLEASE?!
Author's Response: ... sowwy :3