Date: 07/05/09 08:36 pm Title: II. Prologue
First off, I'm glad you didn't make it a sequel... I'm not a big fan of them, and generally don't read them. :O Bill's back! ...and plays guitar? That's a new one :)
And second, you're living in the UK right? LOL The UK hasn't seen such sun in ages!! Take advantage of it xD
Author's Response: Yeah, sequels aren't always good but sometimes almost necessary. But this really isn't a sequel, it's just the story continuing a few years later :) & yes I live in the UK but I'm in Spain right now! I used to live in Spain before I moved to the UK. My parents still live here so I'm staying with them over the summer holidays :) total heat wave over here!
Date: 07/05/09 08:33 pm Title: II. Prologue
I squealed when I saw this update. But I was just about in tears when I got to the end. Bill's right, it's understandable but it's still so sad! :(
Please update again soon! :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'll update asap, and hopefully there'll be some happy chapters too haha
Date: 07/05/09 08:29 pm Title: II. Prologue
wah! wah! wah! *flails* OH MY GAWD! I can't wait for the next chapter woman! give it now!!! xD
Author's Response: Haha, glad you're liking it so much! I'll update asap ;)
Date: 07/05/09 08:15 pm Title: II. Prologue
Oh, the heat! Where I live (spain) we're having a heat wave, I swear it's going to kill me. This morning, it was six am and it was already making us sweat, the goddamned weather.
As for the chapter, well, I understand the shortness, but I really do hope we can have more of this soon. I kinda expected this but still didn't. Dunno how to explain it, but it made sense in my head -_-' Anyway, really cool story.
Author's Response: Where in Spain do you live? I live in Mallorca, it's too hot to live! It was nice and cool this morning but it's getting hot again. I have such a hard time sleeping at night, I just sweat and sweat and oh, the mosquitoes! Anyway, thanks for reviewing, I'll update as soon as I can :)
Date: 07/05/09 07:56 pm Title: II. Prologue
oh... that is such a sad new beginning, and somehow I don't think that you could make a squele, it wouldn't seem to fit, at least I don't think so. But oh oh oh!! This sounds like great fun, and I've got to wonder about little Gusti...
Tom stopped dead in his tracks—his song.
It was his song; the first song he had ever composed, the song he had only ever played for one person before.
I don't know which line tugged at my heart more. The first was like an OMG SHOCK!!! and then the next was still, OMG SHOCK, but added to that was more about what the song meant :) hehehe, great job hun :) and oh, writing at the pool? hmm, maybe you'll see some hot guys for inspiration... lol ignore me! *squeeze* it was a nice little prologue thingy, which kind was a prologue but not, if that makes any sense. ARG! Gusti part is bothering me... :P
Tom shook his head, “no.”
omg... so sad...that tugged at my little heart...hehehe, but I guess some things just have to be right? :)
Date: 07/05/09 07:55 pm Title: II. Prologue
Omg! O_O
I'm so anxious/excited, now! *flails* Obviously, quite a bit of time has passed. I just wonder exactly how much =]
I feel so bad for Bill :( I mean, Tom too, but Bill seemed so sad. *sigh*
I really hope you can update soon! ♥
Date: 07/05/09 07:53 pm Title: II. Prologue
How much time has passed? How old is Tom? Gustav's not his son, right?
I know this was a prologue, but you always make short chapters, please make them longer! 3000 words minimum :P
Kidding, but think about it x)
Date: 07/05/09 07:35 pm Title: II. Prologue
wheeeeeeeeee they found each other again! Yes! Nice beginning :D
Da heat! You going crazy too eh? xD it's really unbearable hot here :(
Date: 07/05/09 07:33 pm Title: II. Prologue
plzpzlpzlpzl update sooonnn..plzpzlzplzplzp update 2day=] i luvz thiz=] thx=]
Date: 07/05/09 07:30 pm Title: II. Prologue
woah.
gustav's their child now :O
don't be mean
moreee!
Date: 06/28/09 12:41 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
Oh my god! I am like in love with this story! (:
please continue soon, pllleeeeaaaasssseeee
Date: 06/26/09 06:52 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
I wonder what happened with Bill...
Tom must be feeling really sad :(
Date: 06/25/09 08:10 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
gjskflfsndjlkadjldsa!!!!! It's so GOOD to have you back! :D Sooo... next part is from Bills POV, then? *w* (if he's not dead or anything..) I can't wait for another update :D You're doing a great job!
Date: 06/24/09 11:03 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
*whimpers* WHAT!? How...Leave there....Why . . .But. . . .*keens*
Date: 06/23/09 05:10 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
That was so freakin' sad :(
I want the second part! *flailsobs*
Date: 06/22/09 05:00 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
O_O OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG >X"[
Date: 06/22/09 04:56 pm Title: I. Chapter Twelve
aww=[=[ plzplzplzplz update soon.thiz is 2 sad=[
Date: 06/22/09 10:22 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
Oh my!
I finally have time to read this.That was so heart wrenching T___T POOr Tom
I want to say "I knew it!" lol*remembers her past reviews*
I still love Bill's mysteriousness...He's awesome.Poor Tomi though.Thanks for writing ^_^
Date: 06/22/09 05:50 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
oh no! I was right, he did go away :(. make him come back please!!! =) xx
Date: 06/22/09 05:17 am Title: I. Chapter Twelve
oh my gosh.... NO BILL, NO!! HOW COULD YOU?!!!!
Bring him back! please!