Date: 08/01/14 05:55 pm Title: Freedom and Flight
I don't think you understand the feeling I felt when I got to the last chapter to figure out that this series is unfinished. Seriously, I'm slightly convinced that a chunk has been ripped out of my soul.
Date: 01/02/11 10:59 pm Title: Freedom and Flight
woah...just woah.... this story is really really really awesome!!!
Date: 01/23/09 10:47 am Title: Freedom and Flight
Okey...I know it has been MONTHS!..and I know I haven't reviewed in a while, and I'm sooooo sorry for that, and I have no excuse either (unless you want a lie). But I'm back (yay me ^-^) and Happy New Year! (sorry about the delay).
I still love your story, the plot, the characters, everything! And I'm waiting on that next chapter of yours.
Well, my life has been...complicated, like always. You know, school (I'm actually starting on the last year of high school, though only the books, because I need to be with my class as well), family, church, job.. all that.
I'm SOOO happy ur alive by the way! =D
And how have you been? Anything fun happened?
Keep writing, posting, making me happy ^-^
See you!
-Miss Smith
Date: 12/06/08 10:10 pm Title: The Inagural
i recommend some editing and a good beta because i am severely confused and slightly put off by the lack of comprehendable grammar. i think the plot would really be able to shine through if that problem were gone; because, from what i can tell, the plot makes for a very good story and the lack of apparent editing does nothing for it.
Date: 11/28/08 03:04 am Title: Seriously?
Awwww!
It was worth it reading so much.
I love it!
You MUST continue with more SOON! - No...Not 'Soon' - NOW! xDD
Date: 10/16/08 05:29 pm Title: Mothers
aw damn
that was sad
I cried
more soon :]
Author's Response:
im glad you like it :)
i hope ill be able to update this week end, im really hoping i have a very busy schedule :(
Date: 10/08/08 07:09 pm Title: Mothers
You know, I would love you if you updatet. (A)
I'm still waiting.
Author's Response:
I know im very disapointed in myself i havent had enough time to update, AP classes are really owning my time roght now, i hope ill be able to update by friday of saturday
im sooo sorrry :(
Date: 09/16/08 07:13 am Title: The Inagural
Okey, I almost forgot my "car".
You see: when I was visiting America 3 months ago for my yearly trip I got my dad to take me to Planet Hollywood, by Myrtle beach. We then built this little car for around 70$ and a "little bit more". I then needed to get a name that I could have on my "plate" on the car. (have no idea what it's called) And it was really hard to figure it out, so since my last name is Smith and I'm a Miss (still) it just got in my head. Boring story rigth? Boredom rules!
Have a boring story you wanna tell me? =D
Date: 09/16/08 07:00 am Title: Mothers
In my world, your never forgotten! :)
It's so beautiful, and so sad that Ramiel kind of lost two mothers. Your such a good writer, and by the way, if I won the lottery I would give you the money to make to movie. :)
My step-mom is a nurse, and she is really nice. I think all nurse's is so sweet and carrying!
I think it's really cool to call teachers and people by their last name, but I like the old days, kinda. In my school you have too call your teachers by their first name. (they say they feel so old when you use "the old way- method" as they call it)
Sorry for mistakes, I'm writing on an Nintendo Wii 0_o
Author's Response:
Zomg! a Wii! I wanted one sooo badly!
hahas im glad you remebered it hahas, i was worried about that lolz! and thank you soo much for the review, and i try to write good:), lolz wow thats a lot of money hahas, thank you, but i cant do that, i'd tell you to keep it all to yourself hahas
hahas yeah she lost both of them :( but i also lost two grandmothers, my grandmother died before i was born and my grandpa remarried and then that grandmother died. so yeahhhh
oo! a nurse! thats awesommeeeeee
thats interesting, i just find it out of place to call adults by thier first name. Pssh old? everyone gets old, they just need to accept it hehe.
a boring story hmmmmm I've had a lot. O! i have one!
okay so once upon an awesomely boring day, I decided to get out of my room from doing homework and get some 'hallway air' and then, my brother was sitting at the top of the stairs. He slid down the stairs on his butt O.o and farted everytime he landed on a step. It smelled so bad! Dear god! ahh! and he stopped midway at the stairs just watching my reaction. I walked down the stairs in aggrivation and and push him off the stairs :D
hahas it sounds more mean than boring, but with him being an annoying 11 year old brother i couldnt help myself and plus its a sibling thing hahas
you built a car?!?! thats awesome! hahas, no its not boring hahas
So how's your life lately?
Date: 09/03/08 11:17 am Title: Chapter 22
and hi again! =)
I think I understand more than I do in a lot of other story's and this is the first one that I promised to myself that I'll finish. (it's SO interesting) and I can't wait for the next chapter!
What I want to be when I grow up? ( remind's me of the song... "when I grow up" - PCD )
I think I want to be a lawyer or going the drama-line =D
If you could get 1 singel wish, what would you wish for?
Okey, then I'm on with the questioning, so if your tired of it - Tell me =D
Where you live...? Do you call people after their last name and with Ms, Mr or Mrs?
I have a car who is named Miss Smith (funny story)
Keep on writing!
Author's Response:
lol, im glad that you like my story :) and intend to finish it soon, but school gets in the way soooo much.
oh a lawyer, i wanted to be a lawyer, but seeing all the years of school, i think i got impatient, nursing seems to take less time so i went with it, plus i love to help people :)
What i would wish for is probably to make my fan fic into the movie and TH would star in it. But thats the only thing i can think of right now lol, my head hurts from hw and the pressure to get a 4.0 still hurts.
I live in California, USA. And yes i do call people Ms, Mrs and MR, as a sign of respect and politness, so even if i dont like the person, i still respect them in a different and small way lol and i find it rude to call adults by thier first name, unless they are in the same generation and a relative of mine, then i call them by thier first name. how about you ?:)
lolz, what kind of car is it? hahas whats the story behind it?
ofcourse ill keep on writing and i have no problem answering questions :) its a good way to get to know people :)
Date: 09/02/08 10:53 am Title: Chapter 22
okey, I know I have not been commenting (my computer died :'( ) so I`m gonna try the best I can to tell you why I really like your story!
So I will start with chapter 15 and say that I think it was a bit cliche, but after a while you got the mystery-Ramiel back. I must say I like your way of writing and if anyone (readers) followed the story you would see the whole story showing you how each character is build up, but I`m a bit curios about the others, will you show us their lifestories and how they're build up? (if you get what I mean)
In the end of the chapter (chapter 22(?)) I thought you were going to end the story there and write a segal, because if it's too long (too many chapters some people don't follow you story. (like I did when I started to read "makes three" and after 40 chapters I stopped reading, and I don't want that to happen)
Keep on writing your story.
What do you want to be when you grow up? (and no, I have not read your bio)
Author's Response: hahas its okay! I remeber you told me about this once, so ofcourse i know. hahasrnand thank you very much, i have my character's personality writtern down in my head :)rnrnI dont know If i should write it as a sequel, I think i should just keep going lol, but then again, youre right about long stories. But then again people dont fall in love instantly, because my story isnt a movie, its writeen and with Ramiel's personality, she can unravel herself in fron of just anyone. It takes time for trust. Im pretty sure though if i write a sequel, I need to have this story reach at least thirty. I wanted to reach the end of the tour first and then do a sequel. I honeslty dont know how long this will take (the story)rnrnbut i will keep writing and sooner or later ill decide if i should write the next part as a sequel. I havent seen that many famous sequels, yet.rnwhen i grow up, i think i want to be something around the medical feild. I think a nurse will do lol :)rnhow about you?
Date: 08/28/08 09:36 pm Title: Everything
Well.... I think Ramiel is a little bit too harsh.
She didnīt gave a chance to his father. Explaining and stuff...
When they (Bill and Ramiel) meet then i hope that she gives him a chance to speak too.
But i like it anyways. :)
Author's Response: hahas yeah i totally agree with you on that, but i guess the way i planned out ramiel's personality, i kindof wanted her to be like that. She's harsh when it comes to these kinds of things, i mean her dad left them and she lost her mom. Right now to give you an inside look, Ramiel lost both of her parents, because her dad isnt like a dad to her, he's like a traitor. But did you notice that her dad didnt say sorry? I planned Ramiel's personality to be soft when it comes to forgivness but harsh when it comes to explaining. But i planned out her father's personality to make it hard for him to be sorry, because he doesnt like to be emotional.rnrndont worry, Bill and Ramiel will meet sometimes *evil laugh* DRAMArnrnthank you for reviewing! sorry for the long response lol :)
Date: 08/24/08 04:08 am Title: The Inagural
i cant wait till the nxt chapter
:D
Author's Response: niether can I! hahas Im sure it will be up soon :)
Date: 08/18/08 06:46 pm Title: Hurt
Awww. *tear*
Really sad.
But i love it anyways. (:
Author's Response: awwws hahas thank you for the review =)
Date: 08/14/08 05:07 pm Title: Fool
Nein nein nein nein.
Poor poor Tom. *tear*
Yeah, he made bad decisions, but still... *tear*
But i love it anyways.
Author's Response:
AWWWS I know poor Tom huh?
yeah I dont know how I came up with up, but its part of drama!
and thank you so much for your review!
cupcakes<33
Date: 08/10/08 09:01 pm Title: Escape
Well. I like your story very much.
But i donīt like Ramiel much. She seems kind of cocky and arrogant.
Poor Bill. *hugs Bill*
But yeah, very well written. :)
Keep going.
Author's Response:
HAHA yes she is very cocky and arrogant =) those are her very big flaws =)thank you for pointing that out because Ramiel isnt perfect. BUt on the other hand, Ramiel is a very strong individual woman, if you can tell at times, very smart and she can defend herself and control herself, those are her key points =)
and yes poor Bill hehehe but that was for drama purposes only, dont worry though i had your same reaction when i wrote this hehe
Thank you I will keep going and thank you again for reviewing =)
cupcakes <33
Date: 08/07/08 06:15 pm Title: Nothing
OMG I LOVED IT :D
Author's Response:
thank you thank you thank you =)
cup cakes :)
Date: 08/02/08 02:33 pm Title: Sorry
Uhoh.
AND ICH LIEBE DICH!
Author's Response:
ahahahas
thank you!
cupcakes <33
Date: 07/27/08 07:21 pm Title: Sorry
loved it!! so sorry i haven't been in town for ages, and it just took me a long time to catch up, but i'm here now (leaving again tomorrow) so i thought i'd just review the story and say that it's amazing, and your writing has improved so much since the beginning of the story, and i'm very impressed!
Author's Response:
AWWS thank you soo much! i appreciate it lotz.
I hope you have a good time on your trip!
and thank you for making me feel acomplished =)
cup cakes <333
Date: 07/27/08 06:45 pm Title: First Sight
fantastic chapter. i love it!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW!!
I really appreciate it.
cup cakes?