Date: 07/22/08 06:59 pm Title: ENVY
Aaaaw..
I look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for sending the review! and im working on the next chapter!
cupcakes!
Date: 07/22/08 04:21 pm Title: First Sight
Okey, since you are dying to know what people think about THIS chapter:
This is the very important chapter, and now my computer is dead (everything is gone, and it will take 2 months before I get it back *cryes*) I use a public computer so I'm not going to tell you everything (because I have a freaky guy behind me...)
The chapter is so strong, it was like I was there. Like I felt it myself, a confusion. And the lyrics...*dreaming*.. it was like I was in another world, so strong, so powerfull, but yet so different and emotional(and one more word that I forgot in all my 4 languages)...
Did you write the lyrics?... (they were really good)
Please keep going!
And I must just say that Bill is never going to find his dream girl, because he wants a girl with perfect looks, a girl that always wants to go shopping with him, a girl who is always happy and that he meets in the perfect and is the love of his life, and noone is is perfects, so he will maybe find someone who is the love of his life, and that loves him, but he will never chase her, because she's not what he thougth she would be...
Good Work, I will just read the next chapter now... =D
Author's Response:
WOAH! freaky guy. . . oh i know how you feel i got a virus on my computer months and i didnt have it the whole summer! I died!
Hehe i like making people confused but i dont like confusing myself. Yeah, I wrote the lyrics but it was too simple for me so i didnt like it as much. There's a story behind that song though =)
I will keep writing! Thank you so much for the review!
and about Bill and his dream girl, he said in so many interviews love at first sight was how he's find her, so i kinda based this chapter about that. =)
hope you enjoy the next chapter and cup cakes!
Date: 07/22/08 03:58 pm Title: ENVY
Tom is mean.
But i love the chapter. Itīs really good.
Update would be great. (:
Author's Response:
=) i will update soon, the next chapter will be out soon!!
thank you for reviewing! But Tom isnt necessarily the bad guy in this story, so dont worry =)
cupcakes!
Date: 07/19/08 09:12 am Title: First Sight
WOW. I love it.
It is really well written.
Author's Response:
thank you so much!
the next chapter will come out soon!
Date: 07/15/08 12:09 am Title: And?
so far i love it =D
i will be sure to read the rest when i have more time;
its very interesting =D
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks for reading and sending a review!
Im glad that it caught your interest!
Date: 07/13/08 02:38 pm Title: Breathe
Good I had this on favoritepage, it was worth the wait... *sign*
I loved, and love..the "scene" when they met again (Ramiel and Bill)
Where do you come from btw? Your english is so good...
And just so you know...you made my day
Author's Response:
Ahahas Thank you!!
Well, Im sorry that I couldnt publish the third chapter, it should come later today.
Well, I live in America =) English is one of my best subjects.
Im so glad that i made your day =)
the scene between Ramiel and Bill, well, lets say somethings going to happen =)
Date: 07/12/08 07:11 pm Title: Breathe
LOVE IT!!!! please continue writing!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you thank you!
I will continue, but the next chapter wont come until Monday, there has been a delay.
Date: 07/09/08 09:58 pm Title: Stuck
Drama! Drama, I just love drama!
Secrets, we are going to know in the next chapter, rigth? O_O
I think I have an sligthly idea (I read the chapter 3 times...) O_o
Please update more! I just need it to make my day... Hope it will be many chapters when I come home on sunday... *wishing*
Author's Response:
Ahaha i love drama too!
secret? well im not going to pour out everything in the next chapter, I'll gradually tell them over time!
What's your idea? You making me curious =) I'll tell you if you're right.
ahahs well, by sunday I think I will have about three chapters published, is that enough? But if my muse fires up agaiin, it could be four!
Thanks again for the aweseom review! I'll dedicate the next chapter to you ahas.
<33
Date: 07/08/08 03:15 am Title: Used
thanks for the dedication. your story is really interesting!! 8D
Author's Response: thanks! I'll dedicate the next chapter to you again!
Date: 07/07/08 11:38 pm Title: Used
Awwww...
This is bad for the band... 0o
Today I was coming into this site for the 4th time, and I was like: "YEAH! *dancing* It's oppdated!"
Please keep set out a new chapter! I just LOVE this story! I want to se more "romance" *giggles*
Author's Response:
oh my gosh! Im glad you like it! And dont worry there will be MORE romance. Keep an eye out for twists!
I'll totally dedicate the next chapter to you because you sent a review! Reviews are very meaningful, thank you so much again and for taking your time to send one!
Author's Response:
oh my gosh! Im glad you like it! And dont worry there will be MORE romance. Keep an eye out for twists!
I'll totally dedicate the next chapter to you because you sent a review! Reviews are very meaningful, thank you so much again and for taking your time to send one!
Date: 07/05/08 04:18 am Title: Curiosity
good job keep up the good work!!! 8D
Author's Response: Thank you thank you sooo much for being the second review. I will totally dedicate the next chapter to you. Now I can finally update! The next chapter should be up by Monday or Tuesday, being the latest!
Date: 07/04/08 10:55 pm Title: Curiosity
This is SOOO good!!!!
This is not a farytale, it's life... *thinking*
And (maybe not for your interest) I've never seen a story like this one before about this band... (and I read 1/4 of my day)
Keep up the good work, I want to see more! And not just from the story, but from the auther...(Sorry if I'm confusing you)
Author's Response: Aw thats so sweet. You spent that long reading my stories? I feel accomplished then. Hahas, no, you're not confusing at all. I understand what you mean. Thank you so much for spending the time to give me such a great review, I will totally dedicate the next chapter to you :)
Date: 06/24/08 02:22 am Title: Call
wow im super confused rite nw...sasha is a bitch...
Author's Response:
sorry if i made you confused I know i have to rewrite that chapter.
Sasha yes, she is when it comes to things that she wants. But I'll explore that concept in the next chapter.
Date: 06/18/08 10:07 pm Title: Coincidence
Kudosssss! Continue soon please?
Author's Response:
Ahas, yes I'll continue, that is a promise. I think the next chapter will be up by monday, i suppose. If not then Tuesday will be the latest.
than you for your review!
Date: 06/18/08 10:07 pm Title: The Inagural
wow...great story...Clinton supporter, eh?
Author's Response:
Aha, yes I am. I wasn't a big fan of her until her exit speech though. that speech was inspiring.
Thank you for sending a review! And also, thank you for reading my story, I am glad you like it
Date: 06/13/08 11:07 pm Title: Coincidence
the last few lines of conversation seem fake and forced, like you wanted them to say something, so you wrote it. it doesn't sound like a flowing conversation.
the rest is really strong.
Author's Response:
oh yeah, i know that I messed up a bit, and I realized that after I submitted it. But then again, I wanted to go for a different way of meeting, but I also know that I rushed into it. I will change it later, and pretty much put more emphasis into it.
Thank you for telling me this, I accept much critisism =)
Date: 06/13/08 01:17 am Title: Coincidence
Hmmmm.... very, very interesting. i like it so far, and loved the confrontation with her and the twins, that was good : )
Author's Response:
OMG thank you sooo much for sending a review! this review that you sent me is basically one of my first reviews that I've recived. So thanks you again!
Yes, interesting, that was the adjective that i wanted my story to be described as. And, the meeting with the twins, I wanted to do something that no one really did because, when the OFC meets one of them, the author ussually would say, somethings like "and their gazes meet" or somewhere about that field, which isasmuch tells the reader how easily they'd fall in love. So im glad that you liked that part, because I was scared that no one would like it.
Thanks again. . .