Date: 08/13/08 04:51 am Title: School and Surprises
Hurrah! You did everything fantastically! ^^
Date: 08/13/08 04:13 am Title: School and Surprises
i hate that bitch made Blue and Indigo cry *kick her*
Caroline is a pretty girl and i can't wait to see how Georg react when he meet his daughter :D
more !!!
Date: 08/13/08 01:01 am Title: School and Surprises
i thought it was just fine but i do think u should update moreee :D
Date: 08/13/08 12:37 am Title: Confusion and Magic
i loved this chapter and of course the ending made me smile! it was too cute because you some times wonder if babies inside their mommies (or in this case, daddy) can think about stuff like that ^^
Date: 08/12/08 11:51 pm Title: School and Surprises
This...was an amazing chapter!!
Date: 08/12/08 11:48 pm Title: School and Surprises
this was perfect! i loved bills reaction to his old teacher...cant wait for the next part
Date: 08/12/08 10:37 pm Title: School and Surprises
i like the time skip, but u might want to mention when Blue learned sign languauge.
Date: 08/12/08 09:58 pm Title: School and Surprises
Omg, I loved this, hahaha. Bill's gonna kick her ass XD Stupid lady, making Blue cry. I can't wait to see what happens! =) And I'm sooo glad Gusti kept the baby!
I think skipping ahead was fine! =) I don't think you could possibly do anything to make this story better, haha.
Date: 08/12/08 09:55 pm Title: School and Surprises
Oh my god... I totally love it. And I think it was a good idea to jump ahead... mrs. Herron needs to apologize to blue in front of the whole class for being such a fat ass beezy. Stupid hoochie. *kicks mrs. Herron in her excessively large rear*
Date: 08/12/08 09:51 pm Title: School and Surprises
ooo I loved thiis chapter... THE KIDDIES ARE SOOO ADORABLE!!!!
poor blue... ugh that teacher is a bitch >.< screw her and her fat ass...
Im so glad gustav kept his baby she sounds like such a sweetie
skiping 4 years old was a great idea...
cant wait for the next chappie!
Date: 08/12/08 09:49 pm Title: School and Surprises
LMFAO !
this is too funny :P
keep going !
and I think the time skip is good. :)
alot more interesting .
Date: 08/12/08 09:46 pm Title: School and Surprises
Oooooweee!
I was dissapointed that you skipped a few years, but now that you covered the Gustav/Georg situation, I'm happy! And yes, I am very happy that you did that!
Date: 08/12/08 09:41 pm Title: School and Surprises
I'm only just getting over Julien * grumbles *
Aww. Blue and Indigo are so cute. And UH OH. That teacher is in biiiig trouble me thinks! What a bitch though - I hope Bill kicks her fat arse!
And Georg is gonna have a cow when he finds out about his daughter! Holy shit!
Date: 08/12/08 09:38 pm Title: School and Surprises
o.O that bitch how dare she said that to blue!!!i hate her now..fat ass like indigo said!!!!
Date: 08/12/08 09:35 pm Title: School and Surprises
OMG OMG OMG OMG I LOVE YOU SO FUCKING MUCH FOR GUSTAV KEEPING THE BABY OMG OMG OMG OMG AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Date: 08/12/08 09:31 pm Title: School and Surprises
wow thank god none of my teachers hated me or at less thats what i think hahaha bill's gonna kill her
Poll : it was good idea to skip a few years ahead, the Gustav part was amazing, so yeah it was a good idea
Date: 08/12/08 09:25 pm Title: School and Surprises
This line got to me.
"Yea. I kinda avoided life for a while. But I got my head back on. Carrie's great. Really. She ... she looks like him."
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Aww. Caroline Rose Listing. That's so cute. Is Gustav going to rekindle things w/ GEORG. Oh PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE say they will!!
That's soo sweet that Gustav kept the baby after all. How adorable. And the thought of Gusti with long hair is HAWT. never thought of it before.
Skipping was perfectly fine. Really great job on this chapter. You're doing great so far. There's nothing that you could possibly change that would make this better. It's FANTASTIC as it is. If it can get any better than this I'm so going to jump off a bridge. You are kick-arsch!!
Date: 08/12/08 09:14 pm Title: School and Surprises
Ah! I love this sory!
I think it's sooooo cute!
Yeah skipping helps a lot. :]
Date: 08/12/08 09:10 pm Title: Stores and Stairs
dont kill julien please???
Date: 08/12/08 09:07 pm Title: School and Surprises
wow! i can't wait for the next update!