Date: 05/02/09 04:15 pm Title: Thinking and Talking
I'm still here, and I love this story more and more for every chapter, I can begin to be better to review - I know.
From now on, I'm going to leave you a review for every chapter saying how much I appreatiate the amazing work you are doing on this. I really love it and I think that you are on a good way for happier times.
For the last chapter, I loved it - I cried a lot, that I can say with a hand on my heart. It was so emotional and lovely to get an inside in what Tom has been going through since Julien's death.
Really hope you update again soon, (:
Author's Response: I really don't ask for reviews just for the hell of it. I mean, the reviews for this fic are hugeee in number, but all I ask is to really get into the readers' heads to see if I'm doing anything right or wrong. Thank you for letting me into your head a little and hearing what it is you felt. (:
Date: 05/02/09 04:11 pm Title: Thinking and Talking
Aaaww, this chapter was nice.. It was kinda calm and yeah, a little break from all the drama.. xD
But wow, I wonder how they will react when they go to Julian's grave.. It must be saaad.. O.O Very saad.. But yeah, they can comfort each other.. x']
Date: 05/02/09 04:10 pm Title: Ultrasounds and Rainbows
Oh well, hey, I almost don't want you to get to the end because of all that, lol.
But still, I don't care. I love every single update and basically drop whatever else I'm doing when you update. Hence, my pause just now to read, lol.
Date: 05/02/09 04:05 pm Title: Thinking and Talking
I think it's absolutely amazing what you've done with this fic and I certainly won't mind whichever direction you take it again. I'm here for the long haul, just like Tom is to his Bill. <333
Author's Response: ^_^ I loveeee youuuu. I know that you're in it for the whole thing which is astounding since I told you like, all the secrets hahaha. Thanks <3
Date: 04/30/09 09:34 pm Title: Mothers and Admissions
Wonderful chapter, sad but great. If I was Bill I would feel sad to know that my baby was born alive and that Tom didn't tell me but I think I would be ok with it in the end, I would feel sad for Tom though because he had to watch his baby die.
Date: 04/30/09 07:47 pm Title: Mothers and Admissions
I'm really glad Tom is back, I think Bill's reaction could have been different, but maybe he will just be more sad in the next chapter or something xD
Please update fast, now that I have left that review you've been waiting for :D
Date: 04/29/09 09:16 pm Title: Mothers and Admissions
Oh poor Tom. How horrible that would be for him. And to carry it around by himself. *sniffle*
Date: 04/29/09 04:21 pm Title: Mothers and Admissions
*cries* JULIANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!
D: Not to inspire angst, well, I think you LIVE off angst, but anyways, I'd probably do something drastic. Like, um, IDK, maybe storm off. D;
D; JULIANNNNNNNN! *cough*
Leana makes angst fun. :P
Date: 04/29/09 03:27 pm Title: Mothers and Admissions
what does he mean he watched julien die?
Author's Response: In the chapter where Julien dies (I believe it's titled Julien) it says how Tom saw his son's eyes stare at him before Julien closed his eyes and died. He was born alive, but Bill was told he was already dead when removed from Bill's body, but Tom knew otherwise. In essence, he watched Julien die.
Date: 04/29/09 02:27 pm Title: Mothers and Admissions
Maybe feel less guilty then before. Feel sorry that Tom had to deal with this alone. Confused why you didn't tell me. Later understand the reasons and try to understand you once again.
Date: 04/29/09 02:09 pm Title: Mothers and Admissions
Sorry, I might being really dumb, but I don't get the whole Julien thing? Was he born dead or alive? And whats with the part of him being buried alive?
Other than that, I love this story so much!
Author's Response: I said he was buried alive?! D: I wrote this at 4 am so I apologize if that was what it says but no. Julien was dead when he died. He was BORN alive, and Tom looked into his eyes (refer to the chapter about Julien's death for more info).
Date: 04/29/09 12:15 pm Title: Mothers and Admissions
Ohmy.. T_o Saad.. o.o I want the happy shit to come xD
Er.. I don't really know.. Oo But I think I would be like... "Oh God, my baby was alive! And.. You.. Didn't tell me! I've thought for years that he never got to see anything of the world.. And now.. He.. Oh God.." xD And I think I would have freaked out a little..O.o
Date: 04/29/09 09:15 am Title: Mothers and Admissions
OMG. I think I would be upset at first about not being told about it. But .... I ... You know, I can't really imagine how I'd react to that.
Date: 04/29/09 07:35 am Title: Mothers and Admissions
I think I would be devastated ten times over again, but I would feel even sorrier for Tom, to carry that with him all these years without comfort.
It's one thing to be told your child was born dead. You have time to get over that because you learn to realize there was nothing to be done.
If your child was born alive and THEN died, it would be twice as painful, because all the what ifs come into play and that tortures your soul until you find a way to make peace with that.
Date: 04/29/09 06:44 am Title: Mothers and Admissions
God this was amazing! Now i understand why Tom reacted that way when he saw the babies
Date: 04/29/09 06:39 am Title: Mothers and Admissions
AWWW. AWWW. SAD! Man, I'd totally write a better review if it weren't 6 38 am. Meh.
Amazing chapter as always, and I can't WAIT for the next part. :3
Date: 04/29/09 02:30 am Title: Mothers and Admissions
Loved it! I think Bill should be emotional about it.
Date: 04/28/09 10:37 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
I like that Tom came home this quick, he belongs with his family and I love the happy family you have :) I couldn't imagine writing on all the kids though, that many characters, *lets out a breath* not for me but you do an amazing job with it.
Date: 04/28/09 10:26 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
I'm Still Reading! (even though I took a break,sorry) Anyways I like your story a lot and it makes so much sense. It's like you really know how to make Gustav and Bill really seem like people with children. I'm looking forward to continue reading
Date: 04/28/09 10:05 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
I wonder what's gonna happen now. I don't even know what I want to happen. I guess I trust you so much to write something amazing I will like it no matter what