Date: 03/28/09 04:27 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
Oh believe me, I'm still reading!
ISn't Indigo the baby of the seven? How about you go a little deeper on her, you could do a little more on each of the kids as each chapter goes along. It would definitely bring a lot more to the table.
Date: 03/28/09 03:05 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
I'm readiing!! :D
And.. wooww.. Gustav's smart! And I totally agree with him! Hmm.. Tom should get his ass back to Bill and the kiiids.. xD But yeah, drama is good too! xD
Write mooreee :D
Date: 03/28/09 02:57 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
I think it would be easier to focus more on the kids once they're older, if not it's hard to not make them too childish or too grown up.
Can't wait for the next update ^^
Date: 03/26/09 08:30 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
OMG it makes me sad
*starts to cry*
Date: 03/25/09 06:43 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
oh god... Tomi left... yeah, sometimes that happens n u must try to understand and help the one suffering.
Date: 03/24/09 10:15 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
I say that all tom and bill need together is a very long relaxing trouble free vacation.
Date: 03/24/09 05:26 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
"If you love something, let it go, if it returns, it is yours"
I really think that quote fits, seeing as Tom is going to return (if not I'll cut his balls off). I think that maybe Tom's dream makes him realize how much he have failed Bill and how much he needs him. Maybe :3
Date: 03/24/09 05:11 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
Ohmygod, Tom left him!! p_T
Poor Biiill.. And poor kids!
Tomi must retuuurn.. Oo Or else I'll.. Uhm.. Be saaaad.. o.o
Write mooree :D
Date: 03/23/09 05:03 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
i am addicted to this fic i absolutly love it and i know that sounds vveerryy corny but i just do....chicken!! i just had to
Date: 03/23/09 09:59 am Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
Oh no! Tom, get back there and support your brother and kids! You can't just turn your back towards them! GET YOU SCRAWNY ASS BACK THERE NOWWW!!
Date: 03/23/09 05:45 am Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
FINALLY! :D
Can't wait for the next chapters :3
Which I hooope should be up soon *smirk*
Date: 03/22/09 11:52 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
Awe noo. Not again Tomi. Billa needs you. Cyan and Rose. Your children!!
Date: 03/22/09 11:40 pm Title: Ultrasounds and Rainbows
8D EPIC.
I need to eat about 3 cups of sugar before I can properly review this chapter in all its horrid glory. Sweet mother monkey crisps, I think I'm grinning ear to ear and it won't go away.... This chapter certainly got a lol out of me. (X
Date: 03/22/09 08:53 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
i really hate tom right now
poor billa
-cries-
Date: 03/22/09 08:30 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
This chapter was so amazing, I love all the break-up scenes between Bill and Tom, they always seems to have the best dialogue and are just so well written. Please keep up the great writing. :)
Date: 03/22/09 08:08 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
Awwww i hope Tomi returns to Billa soon. I can't really blame tom for being selfish. I know they'll get back together and be happy forever.
Date: 03/22/09 08:02 pm Title: Papparazzi and Broken Dreams
I knew it was coming. Every gesture, body language, words he didn't say were signs, but fuck, I wanted to fall down with Bill and cry too. What a blow for Bill, that his twin and lifemate could not find the peace he himself had with his children. :-(
But he can only come around, because he can't possibly be that cruel to his family and stay human and recognizable as Tomi. He can't be. I would be beyond devastated if he did and my heart will go to each precious child who did not ask to come into this world and yet, they are nothing short of a miracle.
Tomi, please think things through while you're gone, because you are breaking many hearts when you walked out! *sniffles*
Date: 03/21/09 01:08 pm Title: Fear and Incubators
Aw!!this is so sad and cute and adorable at the same time
Date: 03/08/09 07:35 pm Title: Fear and Incubators
noooo im not ready for intense drama like tom is for his kids.... T^T
Date: 03/08/09 06:47 pm Title: Fear and Incubators
Hellz jaa. Bring on the drama(;.